Solo Leveling with a System

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amaturewriter

OLE.....Hurray..finally an Si fanfic for this book...look its all good....grammar, story and structure....just longer chps would be nice...also...make MC a one man army thats the entire reason why this stories so epic......add some romance and fluff..no sad ****...maybe world travel....anyway goodluck and goodshow

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HarithZ

4 1 4 3 3 Good story But tooooo long need update D7upoy9yy9sy9st9s8ta9tsjpcpjc0uf0uy9dy9sy9sy9dpudphdohdhodpudoystoypdpufoy9ysoydoydoysotoys8tsyosoydhodohd9ts9tsoydohfy9d9tsysyodyodoydpydohdhodohdlhdohdgosgosogsogsoogsosyoysotstistisogsotsitsotsits8tsitstosoysyosyody9doudoydhodoyd

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Orginal_Panda

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Skorzeur

It has a very good potential and if the writing quality get's better it would be perfect. Hope the MC isn't dense like his brother and hopefully not the same ending as the original story.

i personally liked the first chapter now we just need to wait for other chapters and see if it keep being good or the autor will ruin it but i nelive that it will be a good novelView More

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ThunderWolf_God

I'd like to say the only problem I have is there is not enough chapters to this story ehence the half updating rank I gave but everything else perfect keep up the good work in this soon to be great story I only ask to not give up on it if at all possible it's hard finding good stories with potential to be even greater then it currently is this might be one of those so I'm excited to read the future potential chapters you cook up for it and if possible could you make the mc a archangel monarch to be one step ahead of his brother he will need an army of Angels and Phoenix.

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ItIswhatItIs

Finally an FF on the Solo levelling world rather than the system or abilities. .................................................................

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LUNAZEN

Longer chapters would be good 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😊🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

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monke_egg_man

Solo leveling :) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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I_am_a_otaku_30

the best i like but what about sung system llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

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Cardinal_System

This was amazing!! I really enjoyed the story and although there were some grammar errors it was really nice. Waiting for new chapters tho...

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EvilWolf

It was getting good until you put in the bloodlines and techniques from diffrent worlds kinda ruins it for me,like maybe you could of locked it until he was done with that world but thats my oppion dont let it bring you down 👍

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AidoneusCorvinus

It’s something different from all of the usual fanfics it’s out there and actually has good premise jejsjfkskaoapwkskgjdkgkfjfkfjrkeigjfigkfkdkdkdkeie

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chichi32310

it's a great story I love leveling stories wish I could be like that the only problem I have is that the story hasn't updated in awhile hope it's not abandoned at least do fourty or fifty before abandoning it

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allucard1222

Plz update I really like this one it’s unique.

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Viibration

Hopw this one will not drop soon 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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Kurumi21

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