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Daniel arryn who was reborn in got got transmigrated from earth an ancient clan knowing how the got world works as well as him being in a ancient clan he knows how the power struggle works him being in proficient in medicine poison as well as internal energy, how he plays in the got
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Write a reviewWhilst the grammar and formatting are deplorable. The core of the story, the events and everything are quite entertaining. Im a bit sad to see it left without updates, but for what it is worth, I had fun reading the legible contents of it. I hope the author works on his formatting and grammar, because I like the ideas he's had.
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Reveal SpoilerLa historia es muy buena, pero hay algo que lo daรฑa, primero la escritura de los nombres, tambien el orden, es dificil identificar cuando esta habalando y cuando no. Se ve que es un novato en cuanto a la escritura. Pero uf, tiene una mentalidad muy buena, pues la historia en si es buena. Ademas de la personalidad del Mc es perfecta para un mundo como ese. Mi consejo es mejorar esos puntos, la escritura de los nombres y usar sรญmbolos para hacerla mejor. Pero en si, lo digo. ยกBuen trabajo!. Puede sonar arrogante, no soy un experto, pero soy un avivido lector
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Reveal Spoilerwhy did you stop with the novel,i really liked the novel.pleaase continue! kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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Author Killerarrow007
I really appreciate where the story is going the background the details, the only problem I have with the story is the paragraph structure and dialog that is buried in the paragraphs