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It's Thirty-Two years before the Battle of Yavin, Ten years before the beginning of the Clone Wars. Anakin Skywalker is still a slave on Tatooine, and the Queen of Naboo has landed near the Dune Sea.
Ento Rhade was trained in the force by his father, at a young age, who was a former Jedi that severed himself from the force. The young boy was only thirteen when his parents were murdered by Tusken Raiders and he is forced to escape into the Dune Sea alone. Wandering for days, if not for weeks, he finally comes into eyeshot of Mos Espa guided by the force. However, he's not likely to make it.
Suffering from heatstroke, malnutrition and dehydration, he's on the verge of collapse.
Watch as Ento changes otherwise canonical events, sending them down a different path and eventually forms his own Empire...
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ใPart I : Wake of Entoใโ Ongoing (Age 13-16)
ใPart II: A Clone Warsใโ To Come (23-29)
ใPart III: Rise of an Empireใโ To Come (29-34)
ใPart IV: Order Warsใโ To Come
[ Old FanFic written in 2009, currently editing ]
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The novel takes place in the "Star wars" universe, it is a very interesting universe that can be developed in several ways, but the vast majority of novels set in this universe are ... Bad, the most focus solely and exclusively on the jedi/sith training/fights (which is the coolest in fact), but the universe "Star wars" is not just that, there are many intrigues, politics and several interesting characters with their own background stories. What did I mean by that? I meant that the author of this novel has a good knowledge of the universe and can transmit it to the reader in a very pleasant way, I have read all the chapters until now and there was not a moment when I was bored or disappointed, quite the contrary , this has become one of my favorite novels, I wait every day for new chapters. There are few chapters, but I only have things to praise, the MC is interesting in his way, he is very "cold", but I feel that he is evolving little by little, his personality (apparently) is linked to his great intimacy with the force. The MC really EXISTS in this novel, I say this because in many fanfics the existence of the MC is practically irrelevant to the universe, they are not so important and the changes in the original universe are minimal, here the protagonist is important, the author does not despise him to raise another character (which is very good). Another strong point in this novel is the side characters, they are not introduced and soon after being ignored, all of them are interesting to read, I know they are already "existing characters", but the author succeed in convey their personalities to the novel, they are all interesting to read, I'm not a big fan of the "Multiple POV" subgenre, but I would read entire chapters with other Pov's here in this novel. Finally, I will threaten you: If you drop this novel, I will look for you, I will find you and I will kill you! Keep up the great work!!!
I've been reading Star Wars fan fictions for a while I gotta say I love the way or wording everything it's concise and seems to be in order as of right now I'm looking forward to more chapters and see where your story progresses hopefully you fall that time line but I don't really care about that. Make it interesting and i can assume your fans wont care๐. Keep up the good work
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GOOD, GOOD... LET THE HATE FLOW THROUGH YOU. Anyway good story so far, from what I understand mc will create his own Empire? If so make the mc eventually to be strong, ruthless intelligent not some naive/goody pushover. I personally would prefer a sith/Dark-side protagonist as I never have seen other sith fanfics who creates their own empires, and there to many so-called grey force-users which is boring. The so-called grey side doesn't really exist and it is more of an excuse to use cool Darkside abilities and still be on the light which is stupid and takes all the consequences between light vs dark. Lastly, it seems you are having romance between Padme and mc so don't fu*k it up. Harem, not harem I don't mind either way.
Amazing story using the legends/canon. A fanfic for every Star Wars fan who actually wanted things to be different and not have the โToo much SANDโ guy be with our beautiful padme
So far from what I read it is one of the best star wars fan fiction. It would be a good read for people who are star wars fan and like when things change a little at a time instead of all at once so far at least makes it even better.
Realy good story so far original. A nice pick for my library. The main char is Op in a good way, can't wait to see what happen to him action\history\training wise. I am waiting for a lot or updates ๐๐ ,............
Very thought out and very well written plot i greatly enjoyed the way the author is moving the story and i hope u continue this level and also many more chapters.
Great Star Wars fan fic, in my top five of all time Star Wars fanfics. More chapters please, and donโt drop for a very long time. All hail lord fifth.
A overall new take on the uses of the force while keeping to the story somewhat. So far it has great character development. I look forward to the continuation of this story.
Great so far, can't wait to see how it turns out so please dont drop it or wait more than a week to update it
This is a good Star Wars fan fic. Keep on working on it and please update it. You need to continue it since a lot of Star Wars Fan fics don't continue which is sad.
Hope this will be updated, itโs a great story and Iโm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Love the detail and the Main character.
Their is no overpowered (yet) protagonist. He doesn't have a past life. He doesn't use EITHER the light or dark side. He isn't creating a new order. He also isn't loyal to the jedi or the sith. There is no winning against sidious easily, it's just that sidious can't predict the mc or his affect on the future. Dooku is his master and since Qui Gon didn't die dooku didn't become a sith. There is no life, no death. Only the force....
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******************************* Awesome job! **************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
This is a the best Star Wars fiction Iโve seen to date, hopefully you will continue writing it. The pacing is really good, Iโm curious how the future of this story will turn out.
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I read a lot of fanfic and most them are disappointing. But you author san are really amazing this one is really goooodddd!!๐๐๐๐ this star wars fanfic is Tier 1 level
Love the story and how progresses. Its pacing is just nice as the MC doesn't become immediately op and change the cannon irrevocably. It also stays true to personalities for cannon characters and not make it so like yoda accepts someone using darkside abilities. Best Star Wars fanfic i have ever read.
Enjoyable novel so far with good plot and a cool MC. Hope this doesn't get dropped like the majority of Star Wars fanfictions. I am starting to believe that the house of mouse may have had a hand in the disappearances of many SW fanfiction authors here... ๐