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Tangled journey in Harry Potter.
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WARNING- The author its not an English native-speaker, sorry about the grammatic errors.
We are following our MC in his rebirth in the HP world, but with a much more complicated world that in the cannon, with a priviliged mind, eidetic memory and the previous knowledge of his previous life as his goldfinger.
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I really like this story. You put a nice spin to the HP world. I hope you wont drop it. Will wait for the mext chapter :) . . . . . . . . . . Danm u 140 chara
I truly love your story! I like what you did and can't wait for the next chapter! (Kidding... I can wait, it will just hurt inside) Keep up the great work :D
Love this story probably one of my favorite fanfictions on this website the characters are memorable and the darker aspects are very entertaining to read. Thank you for writing this story
Good harry potter fan-fic beter than the ones i read before i realy like this nover . the more i read the more i like it keep up the good work. and one more thing will the twins go to hogwards. ....and when is next uptate
I have to say that the story is well thought oi it. Honestly even tho it's based on the HP world there is still it's own unique charm that I just enjoy. The added bonus of battle pets and swords instead of wands is a nice touch. With the added benefit of training in martial arts is great. Keep up the good work.
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Holy **** dude. I can't even read this **** get a proofreader or at least use grammarly. ........ ........ . . . . .
Intersting premise, but just unreadable... please get a proofreader or use gramarly... and use proper "QUOTATION" marks for speach.. .................................................................................................,.,,. .............................................,gggggggggggggggggggggggggggvvgggggggggggggggggggggggggggvv gggggggggggggggggggggggggggvvgggggggggggggggggggggggggggvv
What can i say, first i'm not an english native-speaker (i'm french). I tried to read, really, but it's impossible to not cringe when there is not a single paragraph without grammatical error (it's like i'm reading MTL, no kidding). If i were you, i would rewrite from the start this story (when i lack inspiration for exemple). It will help you see your error and you will progress i believe. Good luck
World design is another persons world so zero real effort. But this whole story is revolving around how much the author doesn’t like dumbledore. Maybe that’s not entirely true but it’s a big part of it. So the author doesn’t actually know how much of anything in Harry Potter works. Mc amazes 10 trillion dollars in a few years through investments and I think he made touch screen devices early but 10 trillion is impossible. Now the author seems to think that harry suffering from some abuse as a kid would humble the kid but it would rather make him similar to Voldemort. The author seems to think that dumbledore was planning Harry’s death since day one. Which is false, now the author also seems to think you can make a wand a sword as well which might I say is impossible. Why because the most important component of a wand is the wood. Also a sword could never get the proper hand movements out. He also seems to think goblins can make legendary swords still which they can’t. So he basis of the story is that the angel of a mc comes and aids harry and becomes his brother in all but blood. The angelic mc will save harry from the schemes of the evil old dumbledore. It’s not a bad story but the author has obviously taken modifying the plot to a new extreme.
Im just wondering. This novel hasn't updated in 2 mnths now. So... Is it dropped? Or are the releases just really slow. Hopefully its the releases. So author if you could reply it would be very appreciated.
Absolutly great besides the lack of chapters! i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not a bad read a few miss spellings but not a bad story so far. hope you will keep it up and develop the story to the end and not give up half way.
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I like your story, it's not the best but it's entertaining, it really changes the world concept of HP the protagonist if he uses the brain and his wealth to solve the problems that arise
Not enough chapter to review, but I like the promise, so take my stars ! ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
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when i read 'but with a much more complicated world that in the cannon', i dropped this novel without think.... some days later I ventured to read this novel... and was the best think than i did.... i recommended 1 thousand per cent.... this fanfic is awesome.... I already read many fanfics out there ... and this in my top ten!!!!