thecrazy14

4d

Replied to Vostarian

At least its not one star, far to many people just consider a meh story a one star.

Bloodbound Devil (Multi-Cross, DxD, Rosaria Vampire, Seikon no Qwaser)

Anime & Comics · Vostarian

thecrazy14

9d

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I'm assuming you mean human as in humanlike as many aliens can look like humans

Although the Senate isn't overtly racist, as they have all sorts of races populating its many seats, only humans have ever been elected Chancellor, which is why he was relying so heavily on his apprentice at the moment.

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

thecrazy14

9d

Posted

The overall premise is good, however it reads like a slightly better MTL. This needs a Good editor to be anything worth reading.

I'm reborn as Harry Potter

Book&Literature · FanFictionForge

thecrazy14

19d

Commented

I feel like ww2 is going to happen to Rosalie and her life it will spiral out of control. and maybe Alice will save her in her early to mid 30's

ch 46 Chapter 43

Another Twilight fanfic

Movies · EmphieIsMe

thecrazy14

1mth

Commented

your story is 14 days old so soon or later the initial influx of people will level out. its like how video games have a large starting player base but lose it as a few weeks pass.

The story seems to be losing interest. I might take a break to go back to the drawing board.

Humanity Unchained

Book&Literature · Vincent_0580

thecrazy14

1mth

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Is anyone else getting God Emperor of Mankind vibes?

"My entire body is overflowing with vitality and psychic energy. My Midi-chlorians have transformed into pure psychic energy that inhabits my soul now. And the older I become, or the more I train, the stronger I get. The power of my soul influences it. I am still getting used to it and adapting to the change. And since I am immortal, there shouldn't be any limits to this whatsoever.", I drop the bomb.

The Immortal in Star Wars

Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792

thecrazy14

1mth

Replied to Deathcount2748

ya the way it came out is weird but he means his ship is slow compared to the other ships. It was just a case of bad grammar, though I could be wrong.

My Hyperdrive rating was about Class 26 or 27. And that was normal. The backup was 42 ... yes 42. Again compared to the Eclipse-class dreadnought who had Class 2 and backup Class 6. The Executor-class Star Dreadnought had a Class 2 and a backup Class 10. Those were unimaginably slow numbers and why all of this still worked, will be explained in the end.

The Immortal in Star Wars

Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792

thecrazy14

2mth

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I would think that it's not well known as the world is alot more dangerous or they keep it a secret from the public for safety. in one fanfic I read had pokemon go beserk if not ready or the trainer is not prepared.

'Or well, at least its ability is. Mega Medicham with Pure Power could be a menace. A shame that I haven't heard about any Mega Evolutions in this world. I wonder if they don't exist or that no one has discovered that mechanism yet or if Mega Evolution happens in some different way.'

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972

thecrazy14

2mth

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cant say it's twisted as this is how humans viewed dogs and cats for most of history

But for him, someone being a tool didn't mean them being worthless or not deserving of a modicum amount of love, care, or respect. Twisted as it may be it was how he saw it.

Avatar: A lost survivor on Pandora

Movies · The_Bip_Boop2003

thecrazy14

2mth

Commented

temp nerf is fine, if their were no backlash I would have been more disappointed.

"That's my fault, having my literal existence almost erased didn't happen without any consequences. It lowered the amount of Shadow Soldier's I can save. I think I can summoned more than that but I can't store them for later use" Lucian explained.

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3

thecrazy14

2mth

Replied to noobageddon_

this is what I think of when I read it

"Let's start with the P.O.D beam." He announced while lifting and targeting the rifle.

DxD Devils & Artefacts

Anime & Comics · Dragon15681

thecrazy14

3mth

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I feel like a confundus would have been more than sufficient.

Once Harry was out of Jon Arryn's room, he was relieved to have convened a meeting of the Northern lords with his father present before meeting with Lord Arryn. When he raised the demands of the new land grants, the Northern lords were enthusiastic about their support. However, Harry felt they just wanted the lands to get something out of the bloody war they fought. Most of them were not even thinking of the long-term benefits of spreading out a sizeable fleet along the Sunset Sea and the obvious trade benefits that'd follow once the Ironborn were destroyed for good. Or maybe they were aware of the military implications of capturing these islands and using them to spread out the Northern fleet across the vast expanse of the Sunset Sea. Either way, the lords of the North were eager to expand the North's holdings, which was why Eddard Stark had no reason to hold firm before Jon Arryn. That and Harry shamelessly used the Imperius Curse on his father to make everything go smoothly.

Dragonlord (HP × ASOIAF)

Book&Literature · Dragonspectre

thecrazy14

3mth

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In these type of stories I prefer that they are the original but just lose their memories of their life, sort of like amnesia, before they regaining the ones from the past life rather then just the soul replacing the original.

Then came the fateful day where Saphira learned how to communicate with Eragon using her mind. The two of them spent every waking moment talking to each other with their minds and sharing all of their life experiences. Eragon hesitantly shares the memories of his previous life, making sure she promises to not reveal his secrets. He could have made the promise binding by having her speak an oath in the ancient language but he decides against it as he would rather trust her unconditionally and he doesn't think being a reincarnator is a secret worth a whole lot. So what if people know he has memories of another life, anyone interested in his story will hear it then go about their lives as if nothing happened. That is just how humans work. Someday soon, he plans to tell Brom about his memories but hesitates when it comes to the topic of the old Eragon and how his memories are gone. Sam wonders if the old Eragon is out there somewhere and if he will see him in the future.

RE: Eragon (old version)

Movies · Undeadwizard7

thecrazy14

3mth

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I feel like it should be 4 seats with 10 voting power each.

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Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction

Book&Literature · Agwinz

thecrazy14

3mth

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"You are forgiven." Sidious replied. "But do not make the same mistake again. And as for your question none of these Jedaii, as they call themselves, could ever wield the power we do. Trust me, they are nothing but nuisances like the Jedi. They are no threat to our plans. Of that, I am certain." He spoke.