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Ok his poor villager mentality is getting boring, if anything that would make him less likely to want everything and far more scrupulous. View More
Godking Ascending the Heavens · C109
1 day ago
Romance if done well always makes the story better. But most authors these days are rushed and make very shallow love interests. Doesn’t help that many writers have abandoned character development and supporting characters for random face slapping and women just getting wet at the sight of the mc. View More

Fairy_jadelotus: A story must not have romance, even if it has, it mustn't be the McDonald's. Author-sama don't feel obligated to bring love into this, sometimes it spoils the book

The Blood King
6 days ago
That’s not what I said, what I said is that the personality decisions they made just didn’t flow right for me. What I said is that the “cliche” representation of a vampire is a prideful and elegant being. I never said he had to be that. But this is the predetermined image everyone has of a vampire, I like that he attempted to do something different but it just didn’t work for me. Now for writers there is nothing wrong with certain types of cliches it’s how you use them that matters. Being unique for the sake of being unique doesn’t work its knowing how to have unique aspects and make them flow right which in my opinion at least early on the author just didn’t succeed at. So following certain cliches doesn’t mean an author isn’t improving, and the fact that you think that using a cliche means the author can’t be good or better is stupid. Now I don’t know if that’s what I initially said it’s been awhile and I don’t care enough to read what I said form months if not a years ago. View More

Zevari: I’m stopping the author improving? Says the person who complained about the vampire not following the stereotypically cliche.


By all rights point out errors or improvement but when your just spewing crap about them being to unique or original your the one harming their ability to grow

The System of a Vampire · C2
2 weeks ago
Also I hate people like you, you people always subject the author to the worse thing an author can do which is never improve. Just because a writer is the god of the universe they make doesn’t mean you can’t say you don’t like some decisions they made or criticize it. It’s childish and stupid to say otherwise. View More

Zevari: Who says the author is using your stereotypical vampire? He is the god of that universe vampires can be whatever he wants them to be.

Also why would the dude like humans, every human he meets wants him dead of acts cruel to him, I feel like after living a life worse than livestock live you would come to hate them as well

The System of a Vampire · C2
2 weeks ago
As for your reasoning as to why he wants all humans dead that’s just stupid. His life isn’t worse than live stock cause that’s only achievable through being tortured his whole life. Live stock don’t have lives they are locked in a cage and fed until the decision to kill them has been made. It’s been awhile since I read the story but a lot of the hate he gets is primarily his fault. He has zero adaptability, hell its been his life and he still goes out of his way to fuel the hate humans have for him. I honestly don’t remember the reason for the hate he receives but he could change it if he didn’t look at all humans like he wants to kill them and when he talks to them treats them like they are beneath him and have barely contained anger and murderous rage. View More

Zevari: Who says the author is using your stereotypical vampire? He is the god of that universe vampires can be whatever he wants them to be.

Also why would the dude like humans, every human he meets wants him dead of acts cruel to him, I feel like after living a life worse than livestock live you would come to hate them as well

The System of a Vampire · C2
2 weeks ago
What I’m saying is that the author had a basis he didn’t need to follow said basis. What I was saying is that the basis of a vampires personality would have been far better than what we got. As for your conclusion that me saying why does the vampire of to be so murderous for no reason. I didn’t say anything about him having to like humans all I said is why does we want to kill one for looking at him funny. I literally don’t care about the humans but it seems just a little pointless to make him this way. View More

Zevari: Who says the author is using your stereotypical vampire? He is the god of that universe vampires can be whatever he wants them to be.

Also why would the dude like humans, every human he meets wants him dead of acts cruel to him, I feel like after living a life worse than livestock live you would come to hate them as well

The System of a Vampire · C2
2 weeks ago
Lol, stubbornness of the poor. The hell do you mean are you talking about the fact that some poor people work 3 jobs. Poor people are particularly stubborn compared to anyone else they merely have to work more. View More

lonebinger: I can only say that you simply do not know the stubborness of the poor

Rise of The Undead Legion · C32
3 weeks ago
I get it that your joking but even then there isn’t anything equal about that. Cause what your saying is that by referring to a women as a him makes then equal to men. View More

creater_of_dao: Its gender equality.

The Path of the Library of Heaven at TODAG · C2
1 month ago
It’s a stretch to say they have a bloodline, their members are naturally gifted with genjutsu and transformation jutsu. Along with someone having the wood realse cause of a marriage with the senjus. They are strictly classified for having a artificial bloodline. So they family itself doesn’t have a bloodline but they used an outside means possible to try and get one. View More

mikuma: they do have a bloodline though. Google the haruno clan

Naruto "Forsaken Clan" · C2
1 month ago
Don’t remember, I made that comment a year ago. View More

Skaz: Luck system? Wich novel/author do you mean?

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos · C76
1 month ago
This is super late and Someone liked my comment and I just realized I never replied no real venom or care anymore. But I’m going to tell you three things I never told the author what to do I merely said why can’t the author be original with his writing. Just cause someone does something for fun doesn’t make me obligated to say it’s good or like it at all nor does it mean that I can’t voice my opinion on the matter. Lastly you gotta take a second and actually think about why someone like me posted a complaint and then went into a small rant about the fandom and fanfiction writers in general, maybe just maybe the rant had little to do with the single writer and the entirety of fanfiction writers in general. Someone people are just going to complain and rant cause it’s a release you don’t need to do what you did cause it’s pointless. As for why I said you painted me as a bad guy I’m going to explain to you communication with other people. You don’t actually need to call someone a bad person to say they are, what you did was paint me out to be one and imply it not actually say it though. You implied I’m a bad person and when I called you out on it along with some other crap I said you denied it. Which led me to call you and idiot and stupid etc, looking back in it you either didn’t realize what you did or did realize and literally didn’t want to own up to it whichever I don’t care.  View More

Wildfire498: Im just gonna ignore all those snide comments, anyway,
A: I never said you were a bad guy, I just equated somthing you were doing.
B: It is presicly because its a fanfic, or any media really, that the author does not need to know "limit" some authors write for fun, as a stress relief, or maybe the author is new to writing and instead of saying your doing what everybody else is, tell them what they need to improve on or what they can do instead.

Douluo Dalu : White God · C0
2 months ago
I know exactly what you were doing and they merely don’t work as a comparison. View More

Orical: Was making a generalization to compare it.... Try not jumping the gun mate.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C4
2 months ago
No not everyone can just get a gun. Yes there are loopholes but it’s easy to get denied, why cause you literally need a perfect record and needing specific medication gets you denied as well. As for the unsurprising of corruption. There wouldn’t be an organization why would there. As for the historical facts point you were just confusing. As for “day-to-day misconduct” that is far from daily and a minority of gun owners. As for the in piece countries and the US having more shooting related incidents. Well ya not many countries let people have guns don’t know what kind of point you are trying to make due to a lack of anything really. I’ve already said this but if you actually look at population increase and increase of armed individuals crime rates have actually gone down violent crime most of all. There are pros and cons to having guns and not having guns in the end we have them and they aren’t going away. In the end misuse of a fire arm is the guns fault but the persons, we can’t create a perfect set of gun laws cause it’s impossible and to do so requires a breach of rights. View More

Nazarach: Still doesn't change the fact that there is no country (in piece) that has more occurrences of shooting accidents - also, every person is at the end able to get a weapon - if one wants to usurp a 'corrupt' government, they would be organized in some group or faction and could even more easily get weapons. It's not for the historical fact that I am rather put off by the weapon-laws of America but rather the misconduct in day-to-day life. If the right of possession would be really as strict as you depicted then explain why there are so much 'accidents' - also, why is it necessary in a democratic country to usurp a government by weaponry? I would think that today it should not be necessary to have a law based on this rather extreme measure 'just in case' when the government is selected by the people (for the most part)...

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C4
2 months ago
Why are you calling him stupid he literally said other countries weren’t founded on the right to own guns. You called him stupid and proceeded to say what he said. View More

Chaoticmike: What? Are you stupid? It's in the constitution for Americans to have guns and for retards that say America should get rid of them is insane. So many people have weapons in America that you wouldn't know who secertly have one or not.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C4
2 months ago
Americans don’t bring there children to shooting ranges the parents that do is a minuscule proportion. You don’t really know what your saying do you. The majority of parents don’t even own guns and the ones that do usually educate their children in the matter and lock up their guns but some people are just stupid. Also don’t really think you have any real right to talk about gun rights if you don’t even understand the reason why Americans own them. For starters parents can’t just walk up and buy a gun legally they have a whole system to register to and pass a few checks. Along with register the fire arm and get a permit to own one. But the reason why we actually have the right to own a gun is cause if the government becomes tyrannical and takes away our rights. Now other countries that might let you have a gun wouldn’t let you get one if they wanted to become tyrants. This may sound silly but historically this has always been a issue after a while. Why, cause we are human and it doesn’t matter if we live in the “enlightened modern age” or not. View More

Nazarach: It's a fact though - not retarded -.- and these countries where 'founded in the principle' that people wouldn't need one - if there is a real cause in most of these countries you can attain the right to carry one. And they don't bring their children on shooting ranges and the wonder how accident could happen... >.>

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C4
2 months ago
Americans really? I mean the United States doesn’t even have as good of a welfare system as most European countries and a considerably less amount of the population on it. As for alcohol that’s just a human thing in her real seeing how Americans aren’t the only ones with alcohol. If anything that issue is bigger in different countries. View More

Orical: It's like telling Americans to give up on welfare, or alcohol either one would be terrifying

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C4
2 months ago
I’m going to be honest what is it that trump said that’s so racist. As far as I know he never actually said anything racist and people just keep saying he is. View More

Chaoticmike: Really? Every one is racist in their own way. Thats like telling trump to stop being racist, it's just not going to happened.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C4
2 months ago
You see there is perfectly fine reasons as to why we have guns. If anyone ever decided to learn from history and not just read it humans have a naturally tendency especially the ones who are in higher seats of power to become a corrupt individual. The reason we have guns is Incase we ever need to rise against our government because it becomes tyrannical and takes away our rights. Also as a fact guns have actually been shown to cause less crime. If you look at crime in the United States and account for massive population differences crime especially violent crime has gone down. Also the places in the United States that have been shown to have higher density of armed individuals discounting the military and police have far less crime issues. There are issues for everything take Japan for instance they are the only country in the world were no civilian has guns, but yet they have stabbing rates that surpass a lot of countries violent crime rates. View More

Chaoticmike: No it's like like telling Americans to give up on guns, there's plenty of other countries out there that have civilians without guns

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C4
2 months ago
No they haven’t seen him naked as in nothing, they have always seen him with his boxers on he’s never been completely nude. He definitely isn’t a big dick boi, maybe average honestly big dicks are a turn off for most girls. Above average is the best you can have so about 6-6.5 inches. View More

IdHc: nah, wouldn't make sense since he was seen naked by them all the time. Hell, Rias saw him naked since the start while healing his newly reincarnated body. Honestly it only makes me think the opposite and that's why they still stuck with him despite his idiocy.

Reincarnating as Issei Hyodo in DxD world · C1
2 months ago
My god when will you people stop commenting on a comment that’s over a year old. For Christ’s sake when the author put out that chapter the guy literally had cold sweets, was shaking like he’s naked in the North Pole, and literally like he was about to have a seizure. When I read it he’d been awake for a good while to or at least it was implied. I know just how weak the human mind is and that most people are fucking cowards today. All I’m saying is that when I read it his reaction was far more extreme then what it is now. View More

Wolfrunner: Normally you'd be right but he was just in a car accident and his first waking moments are being threatened with a gun, implied or not. The human brain is way more vulnerable than you make it out to be man it does not take a lot to traumatize a person.

Rise of The Undead Legion · C54
2 months ago
My statement has less to do with the story really not digging in the story either. Cause that literally cant be considered digging now what I did was inform people of a few issues with schools to dig it requires me to ask a “why” or point out plot holes and what not. View More

FOTC: You know sometimes you shouldn't dig too deep into the story, cause in this case
There's nothing to find
The author just chose a year in the future

Rise of The Undead Legion · C32
2 months ago
What? View More

XxLazyJetxX: y he not post more?

Rise of The Undead Legion · C47
3 months ago
Ok I’m going to get real with you here that comment is a little over a year old. His reaction to the gun is a hell of a lot more mild when I read it said he developed cold sweats across his whole body basically was hyperventilating and going into shock. It was edited into something far more mild. View More

Nathanael_Raynard: I meaan he just recovered from an driving accident, then he was confronted by a big guy with a gun and not to mention that he is more or less collage student age

Rise of The Undead Legion · C54
3 months ago
What, but it is kinda true most people that do read usually develop an opinion for a book within the first chapter. It’s completely subconscious so half the time they don’t even realize they formed it. I’m not saying they drop the book but yes they do form an opinion on wether they like it for not. I meant the majority of people who read obviously, but if we want to do majority of people this expands far beyond just reading in almost everything people judge quite early in wether they like it. Wether it be tv, video games, movies, **** this is something hymns naturally and subconsciously do. View More

Drunkendaoist: Literally anyone that does that is not a regular reader, as for the majority of people they actually do not read in their spare time. Facts.

The System of a Vampire · C2
3 months ago
Now for facts the majority of humans judge wether they like a story off of the first chapter and this judgement is usually correct. View More

Drunkendaoist: Read the story, you only got to ch2 hardly enough to judge my writing ability. If I judged every story based on 2 ch then every book would suck and every author would suck

The System of a Vampire · C2
3 months ago
I can literally judge everything off of anything. I’m not judging your all around ability but your start is crap. View More

Drunkendaoist: Read the story, you only got to ch2 hardly enough to judge my writing ability. If I judged every story based on 2 ch then every book would suck and every author would suck

The System of a Vampire · C2
3 months ago
I’ll be honest here your pacing is crap, the usual vampire personality doesn’t work for him. You’ve given him that but he has the anger management control of the hulk and just wants to kill everything that approach’s him no wonder people don’t like him. Vampires are usually depicted and noble and charming he’s far from either. Treating the two people we’ve seen so far with disdain and then trying to kill them just doesn’t work. The problem is that we actually know nothing bout his world or the strength system of anyone. View More
The System of a Vampire · C2
3 months ago
Why exactly did Dracula show up out of nowhere. You could have eased into his introduction far better than this. View More
The System of a Vampire · C2
3 months ago
I knew half of that but I wasn’t aware of the whole mutant race thing. View More

DrakeGrimmhound: Night crawler is part of an ancient race of mutants, they are basically the devil's in the Bible and their counterpart, an angle like ancient mutant race locked them away in the brimstone dimension before going back to the heaven dimension, the devil's can only get out of the brimstone dimension by controlling it's energy, that's why night crawler can teleport and why he leaves red smoke when he does because he brings it along from the dimension when he passes through it while teleporting.

Nick's dad is one of the sons of the king of the brimstone dimension, he just didn't get the mutation and so was abandoned by his father because he was seen as useless.

Blue Devil · C1
3 months ago
Changes nothing for me mc still looks stupid. View More

DrakeGrimmhound: Night crawler is part of an ancient race of mutants, they are basically the devil's in the Bible and their counterpart, an angle like ancient mutant race locked them away in the brimstone dimension before going back to the heaven dimension, the devil's can only get out of the brimstone dimension by controlling it's energy, that's why night crawler can teleport and why he leaves red smoke when he does because he brings it along from the dimension when he passes through it while teleporting.

Nick's dad is one of the sons of the king of the brimstone dimension, he just didn't get the mutation and so was abandoned by his father because he was seen as useless.

Blue Devil · C1
3 months ago
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