/ Horror / The last one remaining
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3 years After the great war, which destroyed the world we follow the former soldier and captain of a war submarine Jakub.
He was despised because of his skills and strictness. Though some of them looked up to him. In the great war Jakub had taken active part and the results were horrifying. The land was forever changed, many innocent people died. It was much more destruction than expected. Jakub who had already lost all of his family, felt as if it was his fault, in a way that is.
Those who despised him always wanted to become captain themselves. Even though not all of them could be the leader, they had already choosen the leader.
They used his guilt against him and made a plane to throw him out of the submarine as they had the most authority after Jakub.
Somehow he was washed away at a shore. This is where he was born to lost everything he had.
As he explored the place for food and survival resource at the desolate place he found a little girl called angelica.
The girl looked almost Identical to his most precious family, who he had lost almost 4 years ago. He swore to himself he will protect this girl with everything he had got. On the other hand Angelica felt as if he was her brother and felt safe around him.
Let's see what happens next In their adventure through this destroyed world. Will they live through this apocalypse made by humans, together? Or rather would one of them be "The Last One Remaining"?
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This is an honest review, so Iโm going to point out several problems your readers may have with your book. 1. Punctuation and grammar: This is the main problem I have when Iโm reading 2. Paragraph separation: You need to separate dialogues by different people; it makes it easier for the reader to see who exactly is talking and to prevent confusion. I would suggest cropping up paragraphs into at most 3-4 sentences, so that other readers may comment on that specific paragraph. 3. Character design: While I do get what this character is a soldier who seems to have lost everything, I feel like he doesnโt have enough character to be โaliveโ. Maybe itโs the grammar thatโs making me unable to immerse myself fully, but I think he needs to have a defining characteristic that makes him feel more real. 4. Story Development & World Background: I can probably see that this is a survival in the mutant world type of story which reminds me of apocalypse type genre, but I think again that this world has to have something original or unique that makes it stand from other similar novels. But donโt get discouraged author ! We all start from somewhere, and time and effort will never cheat you. I can probably help you with the first and second problems I have mentioned, so if you need my help, just respond to my review. Other than that, best of luck to you author, and I hope you continue to write more !
Overall, pretty good start. Author's writing quality has improved, I see. The world seems quite interesting. Looking forward to see what happens to the characters. Keep writing, author, you will improve!
It's a nice and original story. Through the chapters, the author gives you information about the small details of the MC's survival, such as how much of what did he found and he's going to do with that. It makes you immerse in the story and make calculations as well as if you're there sharing those same resources. Overall, the grammar can be improved. I suggest to the author to check for typos and punctuation issues.
I love thriller and stories with twists that keeps me on my toe. Your story is interesting, but a little bit fast paced. And some grammatical errors here and there. Nothing crucial enough to bother me, but definitely noticeable. A little bit of improvement and proof-reading will go a long way. Best of luck!
Amazing story with nice characters and world. The grammer is great and the pacing is also good, so sofar amazing. It has a really great potential, so I can easily recommend this to anyone.
I love the concept of this story . By the first episode I was hooked. I had so many questions by the end of the first chapter that it made me want to come back. Now, not to be rude or anything, but as a suggestion try to reread and fix typos . I've also noticed how sometimes the translation was a bit off and how some sentences started with a lowercase letter. Besides those problems, I'm really invested in this story. Keep it up author-nim!
This is one of the best translations that I've seen, all set in a unique world with descriptions and worldbuilding that just stands out as one of the best ones, with the great atmosphere and dialogue from the characters.
Ahhh the story is nice and I remembere my first time also writing a story I am just like you too! though don't worry i like the story and Aja Aja fight fight to us my co-beginner writer hahahhaah
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Hello... The concept is new and the character of the main lead is good. The writing is consistent....keep up the good work author๐๐๐๐๐๐