Wolf king hegemony

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DaoistH7599X

Author is probably less then 17, the SI is well better not be mentioned how bad, unrealistic and childish it is, can't ignore stuff like that, i don't know why authors think that people who lose their family NEEDS to cope with it throughout their lives and the loss is not something that someone can grow out of easily but things don't work the way your imaginative mind comes out with, it makes the SI seem like a pathetic guy that can't get over it, the dark humour is imposed to the story like you have thought this like some game, i imagine it like this, you wanted a tragic background so the orphan thing came then you thought let's give him a dark humour and self talking out loud as personality deficit so the reason should be him being depressed as a young orphan that can't keep going with the loss of his family hence the coping mechanism, i really don't know what is going on with authors in this site but, people are always depicted in their extreme, too emotional or none at all, too expressive or none at all, justice doer or evil doer, apathetic or someone who simply can't help but involve himself to a situation, it's like they need to be on a side nothing between and the choice is mostly on the side that would create more conflict despite the stupidity in the choice or unrealism of it or out of character it is, like easily angered over simple stuff, ignoring a situation that would obviously lead to a misunderstanding or a conflict till the problem needs to be solved in an ' interesting' way etc. this might entertain some but to me it seems forced lazy plot.

LV 4

Victor_Weismann

The story is good. In my opinion, if you ignore how Shizuka treats the MC, and how the MC [an alpha werewolf] reacts to her passively, yes, basically, he gets whipped by her. or the fact that the girls in the MC's harem go to Yuri as soon as the MC leaves to go somewhere else, if you ignore that, you might enjoy it. Please add the tag Girls Lovers, and passive MC, a lot of people really don't like this. Nothing against Yuri, it seems that the trauma of House of Venom fanfic is still imprinted in my mind, in that story the women of the MC's harem clearly 'betray' the MC with other women who are not part of the MC's harem. [I don't want to stick my hand in that bee's nest] Which in a way is NTR... And I really disliked it, but it's just my personal opinion, it doesn't affect the story too much, overall it's a good read if you have nothing to do, and are interested in the topic of werewolf. Well, at least I think the MC girls won't go after other girls who don't relate to the MC.... Ugh, I don't know dude, if it weren't for these facts the story would be perfect, but meh. I'll just ignore it, I don't have anything to read anyway.

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MostLikelyToExceed

Greatest novel ever, if you read it then you will be truly amazed. Definitely read it, it will change your life man, it's flawless. Compared to bad authors like Pandora's Reader, the quality of the writing really shines through.

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The_Fallen_Light

Not sure if you're the owner.... but isn't this 'The Wolf prowling across dimensions' by (Pandora's Reader)? So?????????????????????????????

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Lordmoonlight

I tried to read it but mc personality is just not for me he doesn't carry his self like a king after he got the memories the girls run all over him hate to use this word but he's like a king simp back to the story was ok in hotd but ruby arc just went down the hill girls where like uncontrollable kids I feel like I'm bashing rn but that's how I see it any why the wired Nicknames I was ok with cub but mo Lana or what ever it was was just wired

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spectra_phantom

Does it seem unreasonable to me that mc thinks he's alpha but his bird, whom he addresses as a maid, has all the upper hand? MC has no say in his bedroom. He's literally acting like a beta who thinks he's alpha. I think it would be better if he was a little more confident, apart from this detail, the story is quite fluent.

LV 4

The_Rune_Raven

the only problem is the author's account is hacked and this is for the author, start a new account or post on a different site under same book name and find some way to let us know we want the book and the JA hacker is scrwing everyone over

LV 4

Byleth_Sothis

Lies lol, your not the author and that your nothing but a theft that stole a persons work and the proof is the image

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1257tvhjvsking

I like this

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Ulescu_Mihai

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍

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Alexrichi23

I love it I will definitely continue supporting this work with everything........................................................................................

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Void_tame

not sure if this has been asked but will this be a rewrite or are you just bringing it over from ff.net either way love it 👍

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RoelAscart2

Although this has only 6 chapters , it is one of my all time favorites on this website . The only thing that bothers me is the slow updates but the chapters are longer than most novels and the author cares about quality more than quantity .

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GaZe_Zero

Really good job with everything so far. Long chapters, nothing too op or anything that doesn’t make sense, and writing quality is good. In general your doing an excellent job of inserting the OC into the world, and at some point I hope to see the mc getting mazakas memories. Keep it up.

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Ulescu_Constantin

great fanfiction dont give up on it ;)))))great fanfiction dont give up on it ;)))))great fanfiction dont give up on it ;)))))great fanfiction dont give up on it ;)))))great fanfiction dont give up on it ;)))))

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WolfFang0214

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Lackada1sical

Overall Rating: Average at best. WQ: A couple of grammatical errors but not too noticeable. Author-san may need to focus/improve on creating his own creative style of writing. 4/5 SD: Too fast paced which created plot holes that resulted in poor devt' of MC & story progression. 3/5 CD: MC is a cliche type of Japanese guy that is somewhat lazy and his progression is a bit immature for my opinion. Author-san/MC violeted a couple of the SI unwritten rules. 3/5 US: It has the average pace of uploading which was somewhat compensentated for long chapters. 4/5 WB: A couple of incorrectly placed plot which is usual for a wish fulfilment FF. 4/5 Still, Kudos! to author-san and well wishes. (I highly recommend updating your knowledge about some western culture to help you improve your outlook when creating SI to avoid getting the cliche Japanese type MC or Chinese young master persona).

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stinkclaw

quality fluff syrzjfzjfxufxjfxjgxjfzhfxhf

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Gorinjou

[img=recommend] um belo móvel precisa de alguma ajuda se não o personagem mas também um belo móvel continua assim gostaria de mais capítulos da semana obrigado

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Rlank

It is good imo i like the story and i should probably put this here this is the same author with the one from ff.net so please don't harass the author anymore.