I'll admit that this story is pretty interesting. But you claiming the story is extremely well written is nothing short of a lie or perhaps delusion. There are so many issues and loopholes, where it's so obvious the author forgot about things. A prime example is to read chapters 486 and 531. So many more similar cases happen throughout the story. The author also deletes negative comments, including those pointing out such mistakes.
You are correct. The author replying here to say Liam took it back is incorrect, or rather it wasn't made clear. "Dang. He doesn't even want this? Bastard! Liam nodded and was about to take them back when he suddenly had an idea. He retracted his extended hand no longer intending to take back the elixirs. "No, Sir. You should keep these with you. These days the demons are attacking our lands relentlessly." "Being a cripple, you are useless and good for nothing. What will you do if a group of strong demons suddenly attack you?" "You!" The instructor stood up in anger. "Ah. Forgive me. I don't mean any offense. I am only worried about your safety. Forgive this little brother's impudence." Liam put on a pitiful face that he learned from Luna and continued talking. "Even if you are angry with this little brother, you should at least keep these elixirs with you. They might help you in your time of need." He then somehow made his face even more sad, depressed and pitiful and walked away from the instructor after a small bow. "Sigh. These martial artist guys are always too much of a perfectionist. What he won't take it unless it's a complete elixir? Let's go, Luna. We did our best." He hopped onto the ballooned up fox and the two of them quickly departed. They were on a tight schedule at the moment so Liam did not want to waste too much time on something that might or might not work."
"Young man, I am willing to take the incomplete elixir. If you still have it with you…"
Re: Evolution Online
Fantasy · Yolohy
For Author's consideration: Ves should divorce Gloriana, or at least threaten to divorce her, to keep her in line. Their kids should also initiate to change their last names, removing the Wodin part. Just to spice things up haha.
This portion and what came before is a confusing read. What 100% movement? It was 40% before? Story is interesting but letdown a little by the writing style unfortunately.
The invaders comparable to Fifth Order could now move with 100% freedom as if the white frost covering the whole area could not affect them. On the other hand, invaders comparable to Sixth Order now moved 40% slower overall and the most powerful ones directly lost 20% of their total mobility!
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
Doesn't make sense that the spawn point isn't in a 'safe zone' or at least somewhere further from where he killed them.
Think you guys that commented earlier all missed the point. Not rest as in sleep but rest as in remainder of the work to do.
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Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
it is quite common for such people to "add ingredients" to your food after such a provocation. Haiz Mo Fan is still quite naive or trusting..
After drinking some alcohol, Brother Haixin, who was named Lu Kai, had befriended Mo Fan and Zhao Manyan. Lu Kai was the typical kind of guy that bullied the weak and feared the strong. Mo Fan was not too fussy about what Lu Kai had done. He was quite satisfied with the meal that Lu Kai had treated them to.
Versatile Mage
Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
I'll admit that this story is pretty interesting. The MC uses his brains and isn't stupid. But there are flaws and loopholes, where it's so obvious the author forgot about something. A prime example is chapters 486 and 531. Go read it for yourselves. There are many such mistakes throughout that you must be brain-dead to accept it. The author also deletes negative comments, especially those pointing out such mistakes.
Re: Evolution Online
Fantasy · Yolohy