I greatly appreciate this feedback and I will take it into account moving forward, I do agree with you on the fact that he fails as a shadow. But I think I mislead or didn't show it properly but Keith believes that he will not fall in any danger as long as he evades the main characters, also he did take precautions but you will probably understand better in the next chapter, Also, the shadow part is what I'm about to write right now and it will focus more in revenge. I think I did lack a few common-sense facts and I apologize and will try to fix them as I move on. I always welcome any sort of feedback so I greatly appreciate you writing this for me.[img=recommend]
ch 34 Darkening (2)
Fantasy · Onjou
Thanks for the correction, I just fixed it.
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Fantasy · Onjou
That's a good point, thank you for the feedback.
Most likely but I might just make another character and make him learn it.
ch 19 Business (2)
Fantasy · Onjou
Don't worry, as I said before there would be another attack during the training arc of the original mc, which will be published real soon.
ch 18 Business (1)
Fantasy · Onjou
Since she is in the third year and Keith is 17 years old in the first year, Alicia is 19.
But I couldn't sleep and the only thought inside me was of how I was falling for a child. Well, he did look like a child but he was fun to be around and also had this sense around him that made him look mature.
Fantasy · Onjou
Don't worry I don't like harems either.
ch 11 First Day (1)
Fantasy · Onjou
While there is romance in the tags, there is not going to be a harem for either of the two protagonists.
Then at 7:55 am I said goodbye to Alicia and Angelica as we all headed to our respective classrooms.
Fantasy · Onjou
This will be answered in chapter 11.
After quite a while of talking about how my life in the academy was gonna be, I went back into my room and like any other transmigratory that went inside a noble, I decided to write about the whole story and parts that I remembered so later on, I wouldn't forget them and have them on paper.
Fantasy · Onjou
So after spending the mana to cover the object, he can move it as he pleases, the only thing is that he is not capable to move it around at high speeds or how he pleases because of his lack of mana control. When using telekinesis one only needs enough to cover the item, so the bigger the item the more mana it uses. I thank you for the question and I will probably be explaining it in the next chapter so other viewers can have a better understanding.
ch 11 First Day (1)
Fantasy · Onjou
he is around 130 but just think of him as a small guy.
ch 0 8 Entrance Ceremony (2)
The Novel's Shadow
Fantasy · Onjou