author, improve the MC's personality, literally no one would accept being a second option in a healthy relationship, and you simply force the protagonist to be Clark's second option, and that's very annoying, at least create a character construction where the MC sees that It's stupid what he's doing and he decides to stop being a puppy dog with Clark, he's reselling her to understand, but for Clark to keep doing these things isn't
brothers, I'm just going to say that the mc is a shit until +/- ch470, where he has a power up, before that he is just a normal human being who uses human weapons and his head to win and like any other mc, he he's also stupid. my opinion? do not read, as i said, the mc is one of the weakest people in the work until +/- ch470, if you have the patience to read a work where the mc is dumb and weak, this one is for you.
MC RAPES WOMEN MC RAPES WOMEN MC RAPES WOMEN this story is rubbish, the mc really does rape women, if you want me to explain it in detail just ask, i really am very angry, i wasted more than 10 hours reading this rubbish for there in ch 200 he decided to start raping women, no read this shit
the story is being very good but this system of getting stronger is one of the worst I've ever seen, in addition to having no difference between one person and another, it takes a long time, that's why the system of cultivation techniques and levels are perfect, whatever something else is pretty bad compared to these 2
I dropped this story. emotions are VERY misunderstood, this is not a story focused on emotions like re:zero's, but it is still below average in that regard. Example 1: the mc talks to a god as if it were some random person, and he doesn't seem shocked or afraid to be in a totally strange place with a person claiming to be a god, and the god himself doesn't act like a god, the god talks and acts like a random person. Example 2: the mc's mother was giving birth, but she spoke normally to the people around her, it didn't look like she was dying of pain at all, and these things that involve emotions happen all the time in the work
1 star for the story of the book, and mostly because most people give 5 stars just because of the author and not because of the book. but talking about this book, it's bad, first you don't know how the mc gets stronger, he has the magic, but how do you make the magic stronger? it is not shown, and secondly that the author does not give the slightest bit of information about anything in the novel, if you don't have the entire percy jackson book recorded, you will not understand, any building or culture that is explained in the original book, no and explained in this novel, and again, how does the mc get stronger in this karalho? i hate book where mc gets strong but not shown how
well, it looks like this story is going to be one of those where the mc's golden finger will only show itself when it's convenient, in the first two simulations very good things came, and for 2 YEARS (104 weeks = 104 simulations) nothing worthy of the enough for mc to show? my finger is already at 1 star, because if you're going to bring a bad story here to the webnovel, it's better to leave it where it is
the last chapter released (ch 1202) made my patience run out, xietian is ruining this novel, for some reason he is finding it good to put drama and mystery in absolutely everything, in the last 100 chapters released (1100+) EVERY TIME there is information that the mc knows, but doesn't say, then he extends this information for 20 to 30 chapters to reveal it at a completely random moment, and this is shit, rubbish, xietian was doing a wonderful job to later spoil it, do this 1 or 2 times with super important information, I would understand and even like it when they do that, but do it with absolutely everything? this is just making this novel garbage to read, I will only change the 1 star when he improves this shit, because if it continues like this I will not change it because this novel will really deserve 1 star for how shit it is getting
true, it would be really bad if it were like one piece, where it has the climax of the fight and it simply cuts to a scene of secondary characters talking, which the author of blood warlock does is almost perfect
In the last few lines I wanted to say that Reaven has this personality, you can understand, but Clark still uses Zak as a second option and shows it with a straight face, it's not possible, Zek is a king, someone who kills without thinking, and Is he like that with women? it doesn't make sense. I'm using Google Translate to write, I apologize for any errors
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