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  • DxD Mash-Up: Soul System

    DxD Mash-Up: Soul System

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM SLICEOFLIFE

    Ichijou Ryu, eldest son of the Shuei Clan Yakuza and older brother of Ichijou Raku, finds himself with memories of a past life and within those memories, he is able to understand that he reincarnated into DxD with a Soul System which gives him a unique way to power up in the danger-filled world. Finding himself in a mash-up of immense proportion, he will need to get it together as the balance of each power keeps tipping. What challenges await him? How strong are the threats? Will he be able to cope with the sheer inconvenience of spontaneously transporting/reincarnating/transmigrating into different worlds to answer a soul call? How strong will he become? How long will the chapters be for that world before going back to his main? -------------------------The MC may be a reincarnated soul, but because I wanted him to fully integrate himself into that world, he retains the personality he cultivated in the world. Of course, he will be childish and make stupid mistakes because of this, though hints of maturity will still shine through. I'm not some 4D chess kinda dude, so the antagonists and all those cunning people in said animes will maybe fall short so I'll try my best. He will obviously have bullshit luck and stuff. --------------------------Alright, so critique is welcome and definitely comment whenever clarification is needed or you want to suggest something. I'll do my best to upload. Patreon is tempting, but with how I might be inconsistent, it'll probably be best saved for later, since I might just draw my own stuff, nsfw ofc but also sfw.If you wanna join my discord, here it is: https://discord.gg/9Xwt79bb--------------------------This is a Fanfiction. I do not claim ownership or credit of any of the works here or their characters, only My OCs, so go support the authors of those light novels/manga.Right, some of the character descriptions will be from Wiki and Fandom, this includes explanations about items/abilities/people/etc.

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  • Mushoku Tensei - A Second Chance

    Mushoku Tensei - A Second Chance

    Anime & Comics ISEKAI ANIME

    4.75

    ***SPOILERS for Mushoku Tensei anime watchers*** This fan-fic will contain heavy spoilers for any anime-only fan of Mushoku Tensei. You have been warned. This story considers what may have happened if the Rudeus from the future had been successful in his attempt at time travel. What if Rudeus' attempt at time travel had resulted in him traveling back into the body of his younger self? After researching time travel with the help of Perugius and Nanahoshi, Rudeus makes his attempt only to find himself opening his eyes to see Paul and Zenith doting over their newborn son. Rudeus is essentially given a second chance at life in this world starting with all the knowledge he had accrued. Will he be able to protect his family this time around? Please note this is my first attempt at writing of any sort. I would honestly appreciate any critiques and advice. I don't mind criticism, but please be kind about it.

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  • Pokemon: Gotta Eat Them All

    Pokemon: Gotta Eat Them All

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM HAREM VILLAIN TRAGEDY ISEKAI SMUT POKEMON

    4.22

    Rogue transmigrated into the Pokemon world. He gains a System that rewards him for EATING Pokemon. After turning 18 years old, he travels the Pokemon world with his girlfriend Dawn and becomes a Pokemon Critic – a person who eats Pokemons and critiques them. Along the way, he meets enemies, friends, and fuckable Pokemons. =======As an example of the system… [ Congratulations! You’ve captured and ate a Charizard! You’ve gained a Glock 40 and 100x 10mm bullets!] Rogue then went on to Bang Bang Pokemons and cook them up. Warning: This Novel is not for people under the age of 18. There are sexual and violent scenes in the novel. Pokemons will also be killed.Another Warning: This Novel is not for VEGANS. It will upset you. =======This novel is also posted on Lunenovel.comIf you've read my other novel (Naruto: Skill Copying System), you should already know that I like to create NSFW images to go along with my novel. To see the images, check out my Patreon atPatreon.com/AzureRavenWant to join discord?discord.gg/cthnpdYxDR

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  • Danmachi: Shrouded in the Abyss of Darkness

    Danmachi: Shrouded in the Abyss of Darkness

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC DARK SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED ISEKAI DANMACHI

    4.34

    In a world suffocated by the weight of societal expectations, Ren's life unfolds as a hollow facade, devoid of purpose or true fulfillment. His days are spent trapped in the chains of conformity, desperately yearning for the moment they will end. And then, a revelation tears through the veil of his existence, thrusting him into a realm beyond his wildest dreams. Consumed by a delusion that permeates his every thought, Ren becomes enamored with a goddess-like character, Ais Wallenstein, from the world of "Danmachi." Her otherworldly beauty, with long golden-blonde tresses cascading like a radiant sun, her eyes a mesmerizing shade of gold, and a figure exuding grace and elegance, captivate his imagination. As if fate's cruel jest, tragedy befalls Ren, casting him into the realm of the afterlife. But amidst the abyss, a powerful Goddess emerges, confirming the existence of worlds he once believed were mere figments of imagination. It is a revelation that shatters the boundaries of his perceived reality and reignites the flames of the twisted desires he suppressed for a long, long time... ————— The novel's discord server: 2NUzdasA6F Author Notes: First and foremost, I extend my apologies in advance. Throughout this novel, I may make references to various anime and novels, as well as playfully critique certain aspects of other works. Please understand that it is not my intention to offend anyone. I neither claim ownership of these works nor have personal connections with the authors. Posting Pace: I must confess that I am writing this story purely for my own satisfaction, without any fixed schedule or deadlines. Anticipating some common questions: Q: Will there be a harem? A: I cannot say for certain. My MC has a deep obsession with Ais Wallenstein alone, which may be enough to satisfy his desires. Q: Is the MC mentally stable? A: No. Ren is a broken individual, a clear example being the MC of "The Villain Who Robbed the Heroines." If you are unfamiliar with that character, I encourage you to read a few chapters or peruse the synopsis for further insight. Q: Is this a Danmachi fanfiction? A: Yes, it is ultimately a Danmachi fanfic. However, it may diverge from the most popular fanfictions you may have encountered, offering a unique perspective and narrative. Thank you for embarking on this journey with me. I hope you find the story engaging and thought-provoking, as it explores the depths of Ren's twisted desires and the intricacies of a world woven from both familiar and unfamiliar threads.

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  • Otherworld Pervert in DXD

    Otherworld Pervert in DXD

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM HAREM VILLAIN HIGHSCHOOL DXD

    4.58

    Yuki, a normal college student who loves to watch anime and video games, died after finishing the Highschool DxD. Darkness embraces him, his urge and desires granted him his wish to be transported into another world.Will Yuki change the courses of the events?Or will he use his powers to fulfill his lustful desires and evil deeds?...The protagonist is brokenly overpowered but in the first chapters he was still gaining it.If you really admire Issei Hyoudou then probably this is not for you. Issei is a sidekick at best.Also Mc nature and ideology is different from others. He is an abomination of lust, using his knowledge to manipulate, blackmail and abuses his powers to conquer everything.....As all of you guys, I'm not doing this for power stones but if you are interested in the story or some want to give critique about it. Please my only request is give a review in a very honest opinion. The more harsher the better.I'm just at the beginning of the writing journey so I hope you will help me and I'll be glad if you like it....I don't own the Highschool Dxd or any other works that I put in the novel. I changed various laws so expect some different powers from the mc.I got the cover on pinterest if you own that just message me and I will drop it.Check the tags for more info.Expect tons of grammatical errors and misspellings. It's my first book in english.Warning - The contents may be offensive and the writing is vulgar, If you have a faint heart please read at your own risk.This consist rape, mindbreak and diffirent kind of immorality. So please if you don't like such a thing maybe you can turn back.

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  • SPIDER-MAN

    SPIDER-MAN

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE COMEDY SUPERPOWERS TRAGEDY MARVEL ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY

    In the bustling city of New York, Peter Parker, a brilliant but struggling student, grapples with the challenges of balancing his dual life as the friendly neighborhood Spider-Man and a dedicated student. As he strives to maintain normalcy as new threats emerge from the shadows, threatening to plunge the city into chaos. Will he also stand tall with Earth's greatest heroes the Avengers, as his planet continues to become under threat to alien invasions and villains planning to rule the world?Can Peter protect his loved ones?Can he maintain his relationships with friends, family and maintain a love life?Can he beat the villains that threaten him and the city? Or will he crumble and die trying?*Hello everyone the Author here. This is my first attempt at writing a Novel so if its a bit stinky please understands and type your critiques in the comments so I can improve. There will probably some breaks every now and then due to exams and planning out the future story/chapters. If i plan on stopping this series I will announce it, so unless I do that it just means somethings are currently going on. Thank you for listening to my rambling, i'll try my best to write a story you all enjoy and I wish you all an amazing day. Peace!*EVERY 10 POWER STONES = BONUS CHAPTER

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  • Spider-man reincarnation (YT: Green Door/ type "green door blue lock")

    Spider-man reincarnation (YT: Green Door/ type "green door blue lock")

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION COMEDY MARVEL HIGHIQ

    4.14

    _________________________________________________________________________________________________ URGENT ANNOUNCEMENT: Video versions of the "What If Nagi Had The Biggest Ego" episodes will be released on Fridays weekly, starting on the 7th of April!!! Check out the trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Km49ThwYyzc YouTube Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCevBY7JxEuKmd-g_G5JDOig Channel Name: Green door Type "green door blue lock" and you should see our channel Help us to get to 1K subs by May, and we will be doing this full-time ;) Thanks a lot for supporting this story. This is a text fan-fic version of our project. We will also have different videos and discussions coming out about Blue Lock and other shows. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Typical teenager gets reincarnated as a Spider-Man and gets a chance to meet the Marvel world's greatest superheroes. His aim is to become the greatest superhero of this world and he will use his knowledge as the key to defeating his enemies and people that face him during his journey. ________________________________________________ I am open to any constructive critique, suggestions and feedback. ________________________________________________ I do not own any of the rights on the characters. They belong to Marvel studios and Disney. ________________________________________________ I am sure you will enjoy this story!

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  • Bleach: From You to Me

    Bleach: From You to Me

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE COMEDY SLICEOFLIFE NO-HAREM BLEACH

    4.7

    The year is ~900 A.D., social upheaval and tensions rise within Soul Society as souls battle for their right to live with dignity. Some die in the human world, being thrown into the deep end as they navigate life after death. Some are born as souls, knowing only the brutal, poverty-stricken nature of their 'Paradise'. In this shallow world, ambitions fester into obsessions. Souls break down and begin anew, forging themselves into Shinigami. Those who rule over life and death. Ones who attain power beyond imagination. Power that can craft one's perfect world. But what if you didn't need power? What if all you needed was someone to listen? Someone to be there. Someone who can guide you through the challenges of the afterlife. A person or people who want nothing more than to exist for just one moment, nothing more. Kindred souls meet in the bloodiest area in North Rukongai, Akachou. In a place where families are built on bonds rather than blood, a group of lost souls learn what it means to live for the first time. Join a small family as they find purpose, shape their identity, and heal alongside one another. Slight AU. Manga/Anime Mashup. Haven't delved into the novels. Do not own the cover. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hello Fellow Humans, I'll kick this off by saying that this is my maiden voyage for fanfics. I have absolutely no clue what I'm doing. I'm just going with the flow, enjoying the process. I haven't done much creative writing at all. I ask you to enter without expectations and hopefully you'll leave having enjoyed at least some part of my attempt. If you find a little pleasure in only a couple chapters, I've done a decent job. That being said, please send your thoughts and critiques. Big or small, tough love or coaxing, I don't care, just as long as I can learn what it is I need to work on. Never discount your opinion, whatever it is, share what you're comfortable with. Then without further ado, I hope you'll sit back and gain something from this little story. AKD_Khmer To some happy boi hours.

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  • MHA: I'm a Symbiote(Kinda SI)

    MHA: I'm a Symbiote(Kinda SI)

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM ISEKAI ANTIHERO MARVEL MHA NO-HAREM

    ----------- Disclaimer: I own nothing except my OCs. Everything else belongs to their respective owners. ----------- Your friendly neighborhood loner gets an unexpected love tap from a very famous celebrity in the Otaku Circles. You guessed it—cue dramatic entrance—Truck-kun! Now, he finds himself face to face with a ROB emanating some serious Dumbledore vibes. Not the canon Dumbledore, mind you, but the "Rated M" Dumbledore from AO3. Swiftly filling his wish meter, our hero embarks on a journey, determined not to succumb to the perverse desires that tend to plague isekai tales. No bunny girl thighs for him! Instead, he's got his own book, navigating dreams and desires while staying true to his nice (and realistic) guy persona. Oh, and did he mention? The Great Sage from Tensura is the consciousness of his symbiote. Talk about an unconventional partnership. This story isn't about a guy living in MHA, but rather a guy from our universe 'experiencing' MHA. Expect a deep dive into the world beyond canon, because why settle for the ordinary? ---------- Additional tags: Cheats, NoHarem, ExpectMemes, Racing, GagMoments, Original Characters (Not many, just enough) The cover was made with the help of AI (Symbiote) and by me (Text, BG, Resizing, colours, etc.) using an image editing software. ---------- NOT A WISH FULFILLMENT FANFIC (Kinda) He won't go around 2 mins after he's born and bitch-slap AFO and bang 90% of the female cast. MC will have a life and personality and so will the Romantic Interest. ---------- A/N: Hey everyone! Remember that pizza slice you sneakily stashed away from your siblings, only to forget about it under the sofa for months? Well, guess what—I'm that neglected pizza slice, and I'm here to spice up your reading! So, after diving into tons of fanfiction, I've reached a point where I can practically predict the plot within the first 10 chapters. Inspired, I've decided to try my hand at writing my own. Buckle up, and I hope you enjoy the ride. I'll be posting regularly, though I don't have a Patreon to beg for support or artificially inflate word counts. Being a broke student means occasional breaks during exam season, but fear not—I'll be back with more chapters. Feel free to critique and drop suggestions for what you'd like to see in the upcoming story! I've got a bunch of fanfic ideas lined up, so unless the reviews are devastating (please be gentle with my fragile self-worth), I'll keep 'em coming. Catch me on ScribbleHub, and maybe RR and AO3 in the future—I'm still getting the hang of those. Cheers!

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  • Severus Snape-Prince

    Severus Snape-Prince

    Book&Literature TRANSMIGRATION HARRYPOTTER PERSONA

    4.4

    Unfortunate soul get sucked into experiment of some powerful being. Getting opportunity to live its live as one of most talented wizards in Potter-verse. There is high probability that it won't be called this way afterwards...I don't own cover it's work of melina-m. If original author doesn't like its usage please contact me.I am not native English speaker and this project is kind of for fun. I will appreciate constructive critique and remove farts-like reviews directed at my persona. If you don't like my fanfic go read something else. It might or might not be posted regularly.My contact:Discord: DarkCross#5312Mail: Furiousrakex96@gmail.com (It's random though. I couldn't get my usual nickname,...)

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  • Bleach The Visionary

    Bleach The Visionary

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE COMEDY OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE ANIME BLEACH

    4.31

    Daniel gray is your normal everyday person, but one day everything changed when he was suddenly killed by an oncoming car and was transported to the world of bleach but not as himself but as Gremmy Thoumeaux. Daniel now Gremmy has to navigate the dangerous world of bleach with his newfound abilities. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is my first story I've ever wrote besides things for school so I'm open to any suggestions or critiques on the story. I will upload Randomly*Warning I don’t own any of the characters in this novel*

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  • Invincible : FEAR.

    Invincible : FEAR.

    Lucas Grayson est le second fils de Nolan Grayson (Omni-man) et Debra dans l'univers D'INVINCIBLE. Contrairement àMark son frère aîné, Lucas est étrangement né malade avec une constitution très faible malgré ses gènes viltrumites. Il vivra dans le mépris et l'indifférence de son père biologique qui avait honte de sa constitution faible et celui-ci ira même jusqu’à douter de sa paternité. Tout ça, c'était sans savoir que la naissance de Lucas abritait un secret qui fera de lui non pas le plus puissant mais le plus redoutable.**Au moment où j'écris ce synopsis, il est 03h du matin et suis saoul alors je ne sais pas vraiment ce que ça va donner ou si ça concorde vraiment avec l'histoire, peut-être que je vais le modifier plus tard. Je ne possède rien de cet univers créé par Image Comics et animé par Amazone Studio sauf le personnage principal. L'histoire sera un mélange de la série animée et de la bande dessinée, je n'ai pas énormément de talent dans le domaine donc soyez indulgents. Je suis ouvert aux critiques et aux idées alors n'hésitez pas à commenter.**

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  • Adventure Time: Primordial Monster

    Adventure Time: Primordial Monster

    TV ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE R18 COMEDY

    Noah is an abnormal child with an abnormal backstory. Born into a world filled with adventure and mystery, he must not only deal with his own inner demons, but also help a few others deal with theirs as well. ————————— -Update Schedule will be around one to three chapters every Sunday, though this may change as the story’s pace starts picking up and gaining momentum. -I will be trying really hard to ensure that the writing quality of this story is as high as possible, however if you believe that I could word something better, or find a typo while reading, please do let me know so I can fix it. -Constructive feedback is welcome, just be respectful in your critiques and don’t be rude if there is no need to be. Any and all toxic comments will be deleted by yours truly in order to ensure a pleasant reading experience for everyone else. Enjoy :) PS: Cover not mine.

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  • The Undying Saiyan

    The Undying Saiyan

    "So you expect me to believe that God is a toddler?""You don't have to believe me, but just know that once I breakthrough you will get to see it for yourself."As I finished telling her about how I got here in the first place, I couldn't help but think about all the years that have passed since I became what others call The Undying Saiyan.-------------------------------------------------Well, I decided to practice writing, so any critiques are welcomed. Just a heads up don't expect anything good since I pretty much write when I'm feeling dead inside.--------------------------------------------------Cover art does not belong to me. I got it fromhttps://displate.com/xynthymr/dragon-ball

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  • The Anime God of War

    The Anime God of War

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION SYSTEM COMEDY OVERPOWERED

    4.42

    A man dies and gets reincarnated with the power to go to different universe's, he will be OP===============================Listen i don't care if you find spelling mistakes and point them out, because i will go in and fix them,I don't care if you want to critique, i welcome it, But so help me god if you just come in and start talking down about everything, i will find where you livei made this for myself and a couple of friends, so i don't care what you think HAVE A NICE LIFE

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  • Naruto: Bonds stronger than blood

    Naruto: Bonds stronger than blood

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION NARUTO ONEPIECE BLEACH

    Three friends are sent into the Narutoverse to mess with the timeline! How will their presence change the story and will they be able to survive this cruel world? ------------------ This is my first attempt at a fanfiction so don't be to harsh on me people haha. I'm always open for critique and hope you all give me some great advices on how to improve myself :) English isn't my nativ language so sorry for any mistake I make along the way and leave a review if you like or hate the story. *I DON'T OWN THE COVER NOR DO I OWN ANY OF THE ELEMENTS IN NARUTO, BLEACH OR ONE PIECE. I ONLY OWN MY OC'S*

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  • Strongest Mage in Fairy Tail

    Strongest Mage in Fairy Tail

    Anime & Comics FAIRY TAIL

    Arios Aeon was a senior high school graduate student who will be going to college soon. On his way for his 1st day in college he notice a beautiful girl looking everywhere not noticing that there's a truck coming on her way. Out of his concern he warn the girl but instead of moving out of the way of the truck she was startled and was frozen on the spot. Not knowing what to do he run towards the girl pushing her out replacing her place making him die in the process. After regaining consciousness he notice that his surroundings are entirely white. After a while a the girl came and apologize, reincarnate him in the world that he choose and granting him 3 wishes..........The picture is not mine. It's Arthur Pendragon from fate This is my 1st story .. English is not my first languageHelp me critique my work Provide reasons Don't just spam the review section with negative review without a reason. Provide at least a reason that you give my work a negative review so that I can improve

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  • My Touch Corpse System

    My Touch Corpse System

    Anime & Comics ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM COMEDY HAREM VILLAIN ANTIHERO

    4.68

    The big villain, Ye Sato, acquired a system that allows him to travel around anime worlds. He will travel from one anime world to another. And during his travels, he will bring chaos.He is a highly-qualified villain. As a villain, he needs to confront the protagonist. That means beating, discredit, stealing, and killing the protagonist is exactly what he will do. But that’s, of course, not all! This story is not only about villain vs protagonist, it’s about villain vs the world. To make it short:He will change the plot he doesn't like. He will plot against people he doesn’t like. He will get what he wants. He will do bad things.He will do a lot of bad things._____________________________*Don’t expect perfect grammar or story. I am studying at university and have a part-time job. So the only time I write is during my breaks.*I will upload on Sunday if no accident occurs. Like me getting run over by a car. :D*This novel contains vulgar words, dark themes, and very dirty and dark humor. Read it at your own risk!*Everyone is welcome to throw critique at me. But don’t be offensive.*I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters, contents, or the cover.(Warning: Contain spoiler!)_____________________________Some have asked me to make a discord, so I made one.But I have to warn you that, I have like, no idea, how discord works. xDDiscord: https://discord.gg/UuTABmM8j5

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  • DXD: Flames of a pervert

    DXD: Flames of a pervert

    Anime & Comics ACTION REINCARNATION ACADEMY HIGHSCHOOL DXD

    A man was given Pyrokinetic abilities from Fire Force. Now he must try to survive this horny ass world with only his flames. ############################ Also English is not my native language, so the grammar will be bad. but, I'm counting on you to critique my work in order for me to improve.

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  • Master Pokemon (French)

    Master Pokemon (French)

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM

    If you are English or otherwise and want to read my story use the automatic google translation. But beware the translation does not work on the application-----------------------[ A lire jusqu'au bout]Un homme, invincible, trop fort, cet homme atteindra un niveau ou plus personne ne peut le battre. La seule chose que peuvent faire ses adversaires n'est pas de se faire battre, mais d'attendre de se faire écraser,"Dit moi, Si tu pourrais choisir, de quel manière souhaiterais tu te faire détruire?"------------------------Choses a savoir:-Sacha ne sera pas un débile faible-Régis n'est pas inutilement traité d'imbécile-Il y aura Red et Blue-Giovanni ne sera pas un méchant stupide qui s'énerve dès qu'on lui parle, mais un véritable calculateur (selon moi)-Jessie et James seront plus fort et Miaouss aussi-Il y aura des personnages d'autres manga comme Shokugeki no Soma ou Magi the labyrinth of magic, comme ça vous pourrez mieux visualisez les personnages-Enfin le plus important prenez du plaisir a lire l'histoire je l'écris vraiment pour le plaisir alors si vous aimez pas inutile de critiquer mais dites ce qui ne va pasBonne lecture

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