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Through a twist of fate I escaped the boundaries of my world.
Coming to another one I was rejected by all.
Joining a familia much hated, I found my path.
Finding love in the dungeon, I experienced betrayal.
Enduring untold hardships, I changed the life of many for better or worse.
But in the end was it all for naught?
This is my journey.
An endless adventure.
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I got to chapter three got to the end, and said peace I'm out! The MC did something really dumb that I couldn't abide by. He pretty much made himself a slave because of impatience author totally tanked the story at that point I recommend that you don't read this unless you like dumb, perverted and impatient MC's.
The story is great. The person is smart but sometimes he does thing that make little sense like joining the soma familia. The character development is much better than other danmachi fanfics. All in all get past the silly moments that usually will be explained later or are needed for the story to develop you got yourself a nice fanfic to read while in bed. :)
complete garbage mc is beyond stupid he is more mentally challenged the most stupidest cartoon character i can think don't waste your time with this book the mc doesn't even think about his actions no logic or reason put it down don't pick this abomination of a "story" up
Let summarize It.. If you are into a horrobly executed plotline full of incoherently forced scenarios and extreme edgelord meant for perverted and immature readers, then you're welcome to waste a time of your lifeline on this. Ai... It felt like I was dumped straight to hell from heaven reading this right after going through two deserving highly rated new ffs. Totally ruined my day...
Honestly i got hooked after reading chapter 11 . First 1-10 chapter is really hard to read . well its all good after that. When i read first few chapter i was like what the f**k why this damn mc is so stupid.He is already 16-17 year old in his previous life but he acting like a kid who don't know about the harshness of world. Well i still read after reading author's comment . Now in the line hoooo badass mc . I really hope author will add some romance.
Got to say that the beginning was rough, but now at chp 19 the MC used his shaky beginning as character growth. The author actually listens to his readers and improved his writing. If you're able to get past the first 10 chps, then you'll start seeing the hidden gem this fic is. It makes me glad that I stood with it until now. I guess the only negative would be some of the MC's reasoning for doing dump crap. There are better excuses, but I think the author has been fixing them. Other than that I think the pauses between paragraphs is unnecessary, I hope that will be removed or changed to /-/.
The story picked up a bit slow with the first 10 chapters but I understand that the 10 chapters were necessary to get a better understanding of what led to MC's change. But after the first 10 chapters MC became badass and more smart. I know in the first 10 chapters his actions may make it seem like he is stupid but not everyone is perfect and i took it as the decisions he took then was a result of his situations at that point. So just give the fanfic a chance and read it, afterall it is a fanfiction we are not looking for a masterpiece so it has its cons but I enjoyed reading it and looking forward to more chapters. Keep up author, nice job 👍
Forced myself to read till chapter 10. There's very little to the story and almost no character design. It skips his first meaningful interactions with the dungeon and his team. The story is pretty much entirely reliant on the fact it's a fanfic of danmachi. The interactions with his team and his development are pretty much nonexistant to this point. The leader doesn't even have a name, she's just leader. For everyone who is giving 5 stars because the story gets better, you're absurd.
I checked the profiles of the people that thanked the top rated review on this story, and a lot of the likes on it are from people saying "thank you for warning me, I won't read the story." I'm going to lay out all of the "dumb decisions" people said he made. 1: No familia would recruit him since he doesn't have falna with no experience. He's 3 years from when the plot starts and has 0 money, skills or connections to get himself a job. All businesses are owned by different familia, and they will hire there own people first. He had no choice but to join the soma familia or starve to death, unless you want him to join the non exploration miach familia that will almost get wiped out in a dungeon dive soon. The only reason lili took so long to buy herself out of the soma familia is that she just carries bags and barely gets payed. The others tried somas wine and waste all of their money on it. 2: People are saying that he jumped into the dungeon with no training and got injured by a single goblin. The protagonist thought "how is a normal person supposed to handle a rabid monster trying to bite him?" And then he froze up in his first life or death situation. He has the highest swordsman level of anyone in the series in later chapters, but how is he supposed to get training when he has 0 money to pay a trainer? He had the choice of going a few days without meals while doing hard exercise while trying to figure out how to swing a sword on his own, or going to the first floor of the dungeon without being hungry and fighting individual goblins that have a literal stick as a weapon. Remember, it was said in danmachi that most people enter the dungeon with no training and then die after going to the second floor too soon. This isa story where the protagonist faces setbacks in the beginning before these challenges change him and make him stronger. Not just physically, but mentally. He's now the captain ofthe souma Familia and rules it with an iron fist. There's another part that people will complain about, but I don't want to spoil it for you. He rights the wrong really quickly, like in 2 chapters
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I read to chapter 10 it's been a complete waste of time extremely boring and stupid mc this novel doesn't even deserve one star. 👎👎👎👎👎👎😑😑😑don't even waste your time if you like overpowerd mcs who aren't betas dont read this horrible story.
Hey the story is good si intresting the story get better as you read the character is good too the writing quality is really good the backgroud begun to be created the story development is better and better ! go check it !!
The story is very good, I was a bit disappointed when he got a skill that is S Ranked because I thought that this will be one of those stories where the MC doesn't get an op skill that basically makes his life easier but instead relies on his own wit and training. The Author is right when he said that give it until 10 chapter. The first 10 chapters are more like a prologue and just giving a bit of background, which is good because some stories just say "oh, I died well, I was nobody in my last life so blah blah blah." well you get the point. But all in all, it is a good story and hope the Author continues releasing chapters.
In the start the plot seems a forceful but it develops into a good read later on. MC gives off a strong Hajime vibes from Arifureta and it is something you can enjoy after you endure the first few chapters.
Please keep reading! The story has started to improve immensely, and the character has started to act like a badass. =====================================================
Honestly, it's really good. The first 10 chapters were really unbearable but I had faith in the author, and he did not disappoint. The MC is a true badass now, and I love his personality. I look forward to future chapters. P.s ~ Harem? Since it's Danmachi, harem is cool. However, if you decide against it I hope the love interest is actually someone interesting.
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at first i thought this was going to be a typical harem trash story. i was really surprised when it did a whole flip and turned him into a really cool mc.
There are two wets to read this story. 1. You skim the beginning chapters(1-10~) witch are rilly bad, like naive stupid annoying bad. 2. You start at chapter 10 Why? Well. Because what follows is a rilly good story with a cold, intelligent and calculating MC(it’s called character growth, never heard of it? Me neither). The story has great potential so far and it’s sad seeing people talking s##t about a story they gave up on after 5 f###ing minutes(torture right?). I would say that going with option 1 is the more, Uuh, complete package? Enyway reading the first 10 chapters and then the rest gives you more of a understanding of the story as a whole rather than never knowing why he did what or who is who. 100% recommended! WARNING! If you don’t like cold and heartless MC this story MIGHT not be for you! Why a ‘might’ there? Well the MC has emotions but his ‘skill’ suppress them so he might get them back, hopefully...
I agree that the first 9 chapters aren't the greatest but people in the comments exaggerating saying its trash when its really not that bad, yes he did make a foolish decision but it wasn't because he was stupid but more due to overconfidence and ignorance. The biggest strong point of the story is character development in my opinion specifically the MC protagonist. This is also a nice twist to the usual danmachi fanfics in my opinion. The grammar is good, the pacing is to my liking as well. If i were to say what you are lacking then it would be the character interactions, They're not bad per say but could be better. You should definitely use the dialogue more often to give us a better understanding of the quirks of each character. Other than that keep up the good work
Read until chapetr 10 to decide if u want to drop this book or not. The story is spectacular. Character development is amazing. There are some gramatical errors but they are very few. Good story overall
I admit, I was pretty doubful at first. But after having read all the chapters (15 at this point of time) I truly see some potential in this story. A lot of people have given you ****, most people didn't like the fact that the protagonist joined the Soma Familia. I bet a lot of people were thinking stuff along the lines of 'why didn't he join a stronger familia, like Loki's or Hephaestus' smithing empire of a familia'. Well it's quite simple, suply and demand. William had nothing to put on the table, he had no value, nothing to contribute, and certainly didn't look experienced to the trained eye. Yes, he was acting mature because of his transmigration status, but no one, and I mean no one (except for saints), want to waste precious resources on a nobody with seemingly no apparent unique characteristics, that is just economic suicide. And I've just argued from an economic perspective, how do you think most of the gods would react in general to someone like William? They would be bored, uninterested, and dispassionate about someone like him. Most gods have decended to have fun and enjoy teasing and playing with mortals, they wouldn't even bat an eye when seeing someone like William, but that may change now. William has gotten some actual character development, and even unlocked some unique skills, so he will definitely become more involved with some of the more influential gods, so don't get your panties in a twist. I've enjoyed this read so far, and I'm looking forward to more chapters, author-san.