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Welp! i never thought a guy like me would br given a second chamce... though its more of a job simce i am just doing an errand for a God who is too lazy to do it himself
WARNING WARNING VERY BAD GRAMMAR AND SENSE OF WRITING
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Its a good novel, some grammer probs sometimes and stuff but the otger tgings are good ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ๐คซ
idk what's the point of this section, i mean i have already assigned sepeerate stars for everything sigh. anyways the novek is good and is able to keep me awake at night so yeah thats it
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The grammar is above average for this app, the story is alright, same for the character. Bit disappointed when you said the grammar was bad but compared to most things on this app it's pretty good. Golf clap for you my friend ๐๐๐.
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not the worst grammar I've seen, and it's getting better overall it's a pretty good story give it a read....................................
I like the idea and the worlds they are my favourite however the main character needs more depth he has a good mysterious background but his behaviour and thinking is erratic perhaps it's due to the instability of his wolf side and vampire side , but even though you need to describe his feelings and thoughts more , also the different pov is very constructive for the story I like how it gives a different image to the MC anyhow I like your story very much please continue updating
Reveal SpoilerI really enjoyed this novel especially the **** wolf Arc but oh well ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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its good hope you keep updating the chapter and please dont drop this ff or i might've kill you in the dark jk๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃwell keep up the good work man