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A soul find itself in front of ROB after it's death. Watch as it bargains for his new life . Please read the tags before reading.
It is rewritten from the previous version Harry Potter:rise of black.
Plz read the author warnings before proceeding
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I have the right to be shameless as the Author and I am writing this for the second time improving it's quality. Please feel free to comment and review but please read the tags and warnings I will post in Auxillary volume
I really liked your previous version of this story. Please just reduce these lemon scenes and focus more on the story. You can take some reference from - Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector ... and - Harry Potter but inn AU ... both can have quite the story. Too much Lemon just destroys the story line. Also, please make him work independently from Harry. Some bashing can be quite good too... like bashing Weaselys, Malfoy and Snape.
Nmms, sólo copiaste y pegaste los caps de la otra historia ¿Verdad? Por que en lo que va de fic, no encuentro ninguna diferencia entre los dos fic... y si la hay, Es vastante pequeña como para que mi pequeño cerebro de lector la capte :v
the story got better !! Plz donot drop the thing !! I would rather suGgest u to go for a steady speed of uploading chapters to keep readers upto their interest
this story is incredible, you can read it without fear, even though I stay for 1 week to find out who the 3 team evil member of this story is, just a little anxious and willing to castrate the author because he decided to rewrite the story well on a hook, but it's part of it now and wait while I curse the author mentally
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Don't worry, kandepi2. I always support you. do not give up and make this all as a motivation to continue working. Because many people like to read your work.
just waiting for him to finish editing the rewrite since I'm in the best part xD. ...................................................... just waiting for him to finish editing the rewrite since I'm in the best part xD. ...................................................... just waiting for him to finish editing the rewrite since I'm in the best part xD.
Evaluation: Above Average WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5 SD: With an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. 5/5 CD: MC is not that OP as he also uses his foreknowledge of HP-verse plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of HP-verse. 5/5 US: Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. 3/5 WB: As the story is still in the development phase we haven't noticed any other branch of magic or part of the magic world explored. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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It might be a rewrite but the author hasn't rewritten or edited out things that had been clearly pointed out before, not even mistakes that people made fun of. .. I think we should ask ourselves if a rewrite is supposed to be a copy paste of the old version with the same mistakes and minor edits, or if it is supposed to be an improvement on the whole. I honestly dont see any improvements in the pre hogwatys chapters .. .
this rating is based on old version....... i thought new version will catch up with the old one....... .. so i haven't started reading this yet.. ... i just want to know if you are planning a mass release to catch up with the old version or not.... . .... . . if not then i think i will start reading and wait for next chapters......... if yes then i will wait until you upload all the chapters and catch up with the old version and then start reading...... . one thing is for sure that.......... I WILL READ THIS...... BECAUSE THIS IS AWESOME ...
loving the story so much recommend giving it a read 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
would be better without the unnecessary *** scenes, it was just wierd that early on, easy to skip over, but it dosnt change that the dude is 11
Love it . 😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍🤗🤗🤗🤗😍😍😍😍😍😍🤗😍😍🤗😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
The original was amay looking forward to reading this also please don’t drop or rewrite again 😂 your story is amazing as always keep up the great work
the author did a much better job at writing this then the previous version the ranting is much better, and uses caps much less in them . The politics in this is top notch and much more read it
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It is one of best HP fanfic I have read so far...Keep developing MC and don't drop this book as I am eager to imagine the V- cunt face everytime MC irritates him🤭🤭
5 stars just based on the previous version. I really love this fanfic especially Orion's personality. I mean a guy who has power and woman after him will take them. Haters will always be there. Please continue this Fanfic till the end