Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin

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aiden_rivera

to tired to give an actual review but is 👍 /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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DreamyApe

Author-Ape here, this is my Aubligatory 5 start rating. If you are reading this, then please give this novel a read, it will mean the world to me. I am waiting for your comments and reviews.

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SneakySan

So far so good. I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter outside of Hogwarts too. New adventures with the OC are what I am looking forward to.

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_Maestro_

Recently downgraded rating, so I publish my own, otherwise it's too much. Great story with an interesting plot, the pace of development is ok. The report is over comrade major!

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Celestial_Kaiser

Probably second best Harry potter fanfic till now, after HP: A Magical Journey. Writing quality and character development is great along with a good plot.

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marcelll3214

Well the story is very mid. Nothing really happened in 40 chapters. Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space, Fill space,

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ananide

Haven't read any of the chaps. But the Dovahkiin and HP in a fic are totally banger. I hope you somehow can finish the story. 5 Stars for support🔥🔥

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Egoless

Is this dropped, please reply I really like this series and hope for it to continue, also hope your health is good author. Well do please continue this masterpiece it deserves a good ending.

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Joanjudo

Really good story, just wondering when the next chapters will drop?

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yukiorg0

Это шедевр. побольше бы таких фанфиков.прочиьал на одном дыхании проработка деталей на высоте и сюжета.но я бы выбрал его тётю любовным интересом.как говарится ин.ест это семейное.удачи в написание новых глав вам.

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hasan_foraty

the story is great , funy and engaging , the only cons i see is : - updates - some time MC do thing that he specifically mentioned in previous chapter that he won’t and it seems he don't see that all in all story is good and recommend to give it a try

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Alvelvnor

1. Grammar: Excellent, I have no real notes. 2. Plot: well executed, and the transmigration wasn't a cliche. 3. Potential: 100/10 I'm personally hoping for some Skyrim-style vampirism of lycanthropy. And possibly some lore-friendly Mod content. Update speed: let's be honest it never is enough right?

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NiceReviewer

Pretty fun story. Really enjoyed it. MC is fun and believable. Interesting Skyrim gimmick. Feels a bit cheesy that mc can get infinite money by throwing trash into the system. But infinite money gives more room to create a more interesting story and the author does not need to focus on grinding money to slowly get all Skyrim spells.

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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Standoda

First review in a while, but hey, to you ape-author ! Gotta say it's starting in the right tracks, try to not deviate and and just end up with another lackey to the golden trio or a young master Stu who spends his time threatening everyone without consequences will ya ? Both are the right way to land in dumbles' twinkling crosshairs. For the first few years, except for emergency canon rectification, just keep away from the main plot and keep on learning and growing, gotta gring on that Voice to shout voldy apart ! I personnaly wouldn't interfere too much until at least the tournament or the DA's time. Still wondering if you are gonna include spells from skyrim mods or make OC ones (maybe not whole schools but just something to flesh it out a bit?). That also brings the question of how the two magic system stack up against each other. From what i saw, raw power goes to Skyrim, versatility to HP. Same for TES enchanting and alchemy, they should be quite different from their HP counterpart, but by how much ? At least he can buy the filled soul gems and the giants toes from the system, so we can keep Hagrid alive. For a bit longer at least. Finally, while it IS very soon to talk about it since they are still at the stage of the cooties, (and dumbles is the only groomer here) you should maybe think about what is gonna be the love interest. To me, we read way too much with Hermionne, Daphnée, Susan Bones or Fleur. So you could stay with the clichés (they are clichés for a reason) but i would be partial to a original one, like Su Li (go asian wuxia power) or one of the Patil sister (go indian power) they are atypical enough to me. Keep up with the love and bananas young apes

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J2407

Can you pass this FF to Scribble Hub and also continue the other one there, what webnovel have done to force us to download the app and no consider a lot of us use laptops or PC that are no compatible is just stupid

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YoungSaiyan

I am leaving this review here after reading the first chapter in good faith that you will finish this fan-fiction author-san. I like it so far.

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Prashant_Deopa

I like the start, had that conversation too many times. Didn't see any major mistakes, maybe that's because I'm not a native English speaker. I hope you keep going and I am waiting for🍋🍋if you'll be so kind😁

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nigemcplebagen

Some decisions are kind of forced/don't make sense, but its not that big of a deal and the story is enjoyable and easy to read, so you get full marks from me.