Calling you

LV 6

zyraluz

I'm speechless.. my mind is wandering here and there. The girl is alone having a picnic, based on your synopsis. She is having a video or phone call with her love, which is one-sided btw, since the only one talking was her alone. The woman, who was with her child, pretended to not see her and forced her child to do the same despite the child's curiosity. When she pressed 'hold'.. I was amazed by her next-level paranoia. What greatly confused me were the two men at the end of the story. Who were those people? Are they somehow connected to her? Or are they connected to that 'lover' of hers? Or were they there to sympathize her broken self which was the result of suppression by parents and peers, or probable experiments by any scientist? A story where a single information can make your imagination go leaps and bounds... a great test on how 'imaginative' you can ever be.

LV 7

Gourmet_DAO

An interesting phrase "bribed a vending machine"! According to the description, it is clear that this is already a new era of "iPhones, iPads and Androids" ... As always, wonderful descriptions of adjoining landscapes. On the other hand, it looks like some kind of monologue or play that a girl is rehearsing ... It turned out ... horror movie! The author - zhzhot as they say in Russia))) With interest, it turned out an unpredictable miniature!

LV 5

Chryiss

Intriguing piece. It’s never directly explained, but I’m guessing somehow the girl is dead or something? It’s mystifying, but based on the end with the mention of graveyard, and the child who was the only one who saw her, I thought she’s a ghost. Maybe I’m wrong, idk lol. But overall, a tranquil piece with a touch of longing and loneliness on the girl’s part. Ah but please tell me what happened exactly. Maybe I’m just blind, but the details were subtle to me.