Collection of Unfinished Books

LV 6

Zyga

Honestly speaking when i heard Primordial Beast i was thinking something completely off but still i am not F***ing with the story but well you do nyou some people might like it

LV 6

newthings

will you complete it? //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

LV 14

GonadSmasher08

Well, isn't it a grand mash up. DC, MARVEL, ONE PIECE and NARUTO all in a grandiose fan fic. Well i think there will be more other literature to be mix in if the story progress. It is like wishing for a set of powers from different work of fiction the for it to happen the world of those fiction will be combined. The Writting quality The grammar need a lot of work. Not bad enough to give you headache while reading it. Stability of updating The author already put the number of chapter available. Hope he can find aspiration to continue his work. Story development During the first few chapter, you will not be able to tell who is the MC. the power of the mc is not well explained. Character design It can be considered good. World background Well, since he already used an already made one, it can be considered mediocre at best.

LV 5

sweety009

Like it 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

LV 5

Sevi_01

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LV 11

HiroUzumaki

It’s a good story, but there are grammar issues everywhere. If I were you, I would get an editor to check your work. other than that, everything is great. Also, if you don't want an editor, just use Grammarly. If you are using an iPhone its called Grammarly keyboard.