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A man named Ramus was transmigrated into One Piece world as fallen aristocrat of Goa Kingdom.
Join Ramus and his two loyal retainers for building greatest pirates crew and kingdom to waging war with all World Government scheme and One Piece world.
“Warning !! This stories if fiction of fictional story so don’t take it seriously or effecting your real life because what inside the stories is nothing real”
“Warning !! This stories contain inappropriate language and stories material content , author apologies if there a stories material that against to some religion believe because that not what author intentions”
“Warning !! This stories contain adult and mature material so author hope to restricted to the adults reader only”
English is not author mother language so, author apologized for bad english and grammars in the story.
As for reader who don’t like bad grammar novel, this novel is not for you i’m sorry.
Any character and material from original one piece is from and belong to Eichiro Oda work and author do not have any copyright for it.
I do not own the picture on the cover, i just randomly pick it from the internet.
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I like the novel but the grammar and spellcheck make it unreadable to me. I just cant stand all the mistakes and writing errors if someone rewrote this with correct sentence structure and the right words it would be 10x better id give it a full 5 stars.
Well, the synopsis and the cover art really miss the mark for the whole nine yards. I thought this might be a dark fic, boy, do I feel surprised. It wasn't. Here I am expecting something like a ruthless underworld boss for MC, instead i found that the MC is a highschooler romantic and a naive one at that. Why would the MC goes around wanting to be a pirate while throwing money everywhere. Just be a privateer and poof, less problem with the Marines and they can still do some adventuring. Michael Jackson as a chef template is kinda funny, weeabo for first mate and somehow for the butler I got the vibe of a perverted Baron tamago without the French. So for the original characters at least they are interesting. The MC, well first few chapter it paint the character as a badass, then later on the MC become what I call a **** drama lead. Come on the dude is transmigrated, surely the mental age I at least a mature *****. In the end even for the gripes I get from the MC, at least the story is interesting. Keep up the good work.
I think this story has great potential to be one of the best. In all aspects, the story sounds great but there are two aspects in the novel that the author doesn't get right. The love aspect and the writing and grammar aspect. The love in this story is actually ****. All the women that fucking love or have taken an interest in the MC after spending, and I kid you not, only a few hours at most with him. It makes the women seem really shallow and a person who doesn't value herself and her body. Also in both occasions make the MC seem like scum, cause he is. The first girl was drunk, he basically took advantage of her emotions which is a really bad thing, it's good that things didn't get physical. The other girl is a minor, I hope I don't have to explain how that is bad and morally wrong, the age difference is 9 years, the MC is 25 and she is 16. Both occasions they spent at most 18 hours with him while the first girl spent 4 hours. On to the writing and grammar aspect of the novel. At the start it was complete ****, almost made me want to quit from the beginning, but then after a few chapters it started getting better in quality so it isn't all that bad, but it's still not at a fluent English level. That's all I have to say about the novel, it might suit your tastes but if the two things I mentioned turn you off from reading then you better stop. But I always advise a person to try things out before giving an opinion so go ahead and read the first few chapters
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Characters - they’re so bland, when they feel hype/happy I just cant seem to feel them...? I think it’s because of how the author write it, and also they agree to I forgot the mc’s name(he’s that bland) but everytime the mc ask them to join his crew they all agreed immediately even though they were introduce as a person who doesn’t just trust anyone Update stability- good job, you’re trying hard Grammar- oh boy, I’m a person who’s known for my bad english but this thing...is on another level, I wanna enjoy the story but the grammar is so horrible that I can’t get into it, and also the uses of emojis, I know they can be unique sometimes, but this? This is just cringe, I won’t say more of his bad grammar as I know he’s learning and doing a good job for writing a ff with a lot of chapters, so congrats, but also sorry I didn’t give you five stars as I can’t do it just bc you’re trying hard, anyway good luck with your story, hope you improve your english then maybe I’ll come back to give it a try again
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I don't know why in most one piece self insert fanfics the MC will either meet Luffy and train him or join his crew. I mean it seems like they were given a mission to help Luffy. Why not just leave the rubber man alone. I mean it's not making the story better. I don't mean to say your story is bad, it's good actually. I just don't like where it is going. Thank you for sharing your work