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Write a reviewQuirky Joan de'Arc in a fantasy world with her trusty sidekick. This is a war and military novel with comedy in everything. The ironic thing is, the war makes the comedy funnier. Now all I hope for is some romance, and this epic is complete!
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
Nice story! I love the synopsis most. And the plot is well described too. I was feeling like I was in the story. Great writing skill! Keep it up! I appreciate it!
the story takes you into an amazing beautiful imagination, the plot and concept was hooking, the writing was easily understandable there were not many errors so 5 stars good work author
The content is really good for what's it's trying to portray. The setting is a little shaky but it doesn't take away too much from the story which I find really enjoyable in some aspects
The idea of mute and translator was wholesome , they shared a great bond, the dialogues were well written the writing was easily understandable , there weren't any mistakes just some punctuation errors that could be solved and is not a big matter of concern the novel deserves a five stars
A nice introduction to Jeanne d'arc story. I hope the author does a magnificent story on the wonderful bold and tragic story of jeanne d'arc .
This is pretty comedic even though the plot is kind of a military thing. Your world building is great and your character design is amazing. I can see that you've a pretty wide set of imagination and you made a lot of effort in writing this story. Keep writing!
The story is meant to be winner for WSA because of its content. I already recommended this novel to the hesitate readers.[img=update][img=update]
Great cover page! Original and catchy! The reincarnation and the journey of souls is an interesting topic here, on WN, and has always attracted attention, so you chose an good topic. The plot is intriguing and the story is nicely written. Well done. Good luck with the contest! (and power stone from me ;))
Reveal SpoilerShamelessly giving myself a 5-star review lol heck why not? I'm having 5 stars worth of fun writing this story. So this may as well be my review on the writing activity itself, not the resulting work. Would give myself a full 5.0 score, but lately I've been too busy with a RL project :( Please note that, for the purpose of easy reading (and writing), forms of address intentionally follows the English system although I make it quite obvious that the story is set in a fantasy version of Medieval France. I'm very pleased with the two main characters and hope readers find Anna and Rene interesting and endearing. Please do feel free to comment, review, powerstone, etc. Thank you,
Although not perfect, I can claim that the story has a nice start. Needs more feeling from the author for the readers to cope up with ideas inside the book. (Sometimes the more you love reading, grammars don't need to be perfect, the plot doesn't need to be new and unique, as long as they could cope up with your feeling, and felt every word, that would be the greatest weapon of success) Have a great journey towards success.
Well, well... I was intrigued by the French names, and it was a good idea to start reading ;) The writing is pleasant, and this poor René seems he will have lots of headache with this dear strong head Anna de La Rose! Keep going!
Ehem Ehem!! Don't hesitate to read this because for me it's a masterpiece. The character pace is good for the starting story. Give your power stone here!!!
The world-building of this medieval plot is very good, and dialogue is impeccable. The command of English is commendable. I am new to the isekai genre, so that part was a bit jarring...
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So close to flawless, I was nearly blinded by its radiance. I can’t say for sure that The Maiden Of Roseland Against All Odds is the best Webnovel ever, but I can say, for now, that it’s the best I’ve ever read. Not necessarily because of its story, don’t get me wrong, the story is excellent, but because in everything it does, it does it so perfectly. This is an excerpt from a much more detailed review I wrote over at my Wordpress blog, clonereviews. Check out my profile for a link