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"May;" they call out her name.
Laughs.
"May, come back;"
"May, is it true your the daughter of..."
Silence
May breathing heavily.
Screams.
Laughs.
May...
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The prologue was interesting:) I like how you used first person - it makes it easier to connect with the story. The setting of the story is described well. I especially like where you described the old antique drawings. In a few of the sentences, the tense is not quite accurate. I feel that the pace of the story is a bit quick. It is easy to understand what the protagonist is like as their situation is described clearly. This is a great story and good luck. :)
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Although this book has only just started, I am very optimistic. The title is concise, but the content is not simple. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, which fascinates people. I hope the author can persist in updating and bring good stories to more people.
So far there is only two chapters hence not much can be said here, however, it has potential esp. if the author can update more coz the story is interesting. I'm really curious at the things that May inherit, or see, or things that chase after her. The key what is it for? Gosh, such cliffhanger, wish the author will update more to reveal the mysteries. One thing that author can do to make this more interesting is to add a bit more description. Make the emotion more intense etc. Overall, this book has great potential. Keep on updating! 😊
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The story is interesting and would be good if the author will continue updating more chapters and I will look forward to it! Good luck and keep writing :)
It’s a little too early to say anything about the story or character development but I believe it’s off on a great start, I enjoy the casual writing style. I hope you continue your work, so that I may give more detailed feedback in the future. Have fun writing!
The story line has great potential. With little being written, you still find yourself interested. I hope to see this character grow, it seems she is just starting out! Keep writing, I'll be waiting! Thank you author
The story is just starting. So, I can't say much. The synopsis intrigued me to know what is it about May. As for now, the author managed to make May sounds mysterious. Looking at the pace of the chapters I've read so far, I have a feeling that the author will not drag on the story. Keep on writing, author!
The air of mystery that May gives off is intriguing as it makes a person wanting to know what is she actually a demon? a human half breed? or what does she does hunt monsters or something else. The world around could be expanded a lot more but this is just the second chapter so no pressure. The pacing is good as it doesn't moves at a snail's pace. Good job for your first novel.
Intriguing start as of chapter 2. Need to see more of where the author takes the story before writing a full review. Hope that author continues to develop the character.
The first one was a bit confusing, but all was made clear in the second chapter. Have high hopes with this novel, despite it only having two chapters currently. Keep it up!
It seems to be a very interesting book, hope for this novel don't drop it. Best whises from a fellow author. I don't know what to add here so i'm writting these hehe.
Although this book is just starting, it has great potential, and its really interesting. I like the way the main character describes things, its a bit different and cool. For a first novel, you are doing great. Kudos author, keep it up. You've got me totally hooked, can't wait to read more.
Hi, author here, giving my own shameless review. It's actually my first novel, like ever, and I'm really hoping that I do a good job to impress. Hope I don't disappoint. XOXO Author.
Gonna do another review since i cant find the first one. First of all, the story has great potential. It is intriguing in a sense that it leaves the readers slightly confuse but continues to draw them in with its mysterious background. I m not sure if this is the intention of the author but i hope it can be explained further in future chapters. Keep it up