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Lothar Edwin, a normal college student, dies and is sent to the void, where all souls go to after death. There he stayed, wandering for all eternity in the infinite darkness, until one day, a miracle appears.
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Write a reviewComical, with slight touches of melancholy;a writing style well executed here. I look forward to future chapters and have no doubt that this book will only get better. Keep up the great work!! 😁
It was an enjoyable read. The writing isn't the best but it was enough to keep me reading. There were some phrases that could be rephrased, and some paragraphs could be split to make it reader-friendly, but all of these problems could be fixed by just continuing to write. Other than that, the premise kept me hook and I will definitely come back here for more
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
The Storyline is fascinating. (Although, I only read some chapters ) but it is amazing. It has potential and will be reached up to a great height. Nice work Author! I'm looking forward to it!
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So... As usual, author supporting his own work. Anyway, what to expect in this novel: 1. Plot Armor 2. Plot Armor 3. Plot Armor ... Jokes aside, only MC has plot armor, so you can guess where I'm heading with this theme.