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Starts as a Vampiress, Ends into a Villainess
4.57 (25 ratings)
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Our protagonist is a vampiress that has everything, that all would envy. As she matures, Men after men, after men, they all are in constant turmoil with one another for her hand in marriage. Will she be able to pick one? Marry the 'one' the love of her life in a living in a simple life filled with contentment or will she succumb to greed as a Villainess and be the seductress they all love, to have handsome guys in her beck-and-call wrapped around her finger?
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3RD PLACE | BRONZE WINNER
WPC# 219 | MARY SUE
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The storyline is good and intriguing!! The character design and environment description was well done. The only thing that I found a little comfortable was the flow. A proper flow wasn't maintained and there were few grammatical errors, which can be corrected by another read. The usage of '.......' can also be decreased. Apart from that, everything else about the novel is interesting. Keep Going!!
This is a very good novel in terms of plot and creativity. The writer's intentions are clear and though vampire novels are insanely common and cliche it's admirable that the author managed to make their's unique. However, the novel is plagued by multiple errors. It started nicely but as I read on, few errors turned into multiple errors. There's not a lot if issues with grammar but some sentences lack end marks. The story lacked a proper flow and the writer went from scene to scene without any proper transitions. As a result, I was a bit confused while reading some paragraphs. Some things mentioned in the novel were a bit contradictory and it seemed as though the author was trying to pack multiple details in a single chapter. Overall, from the synopsis, it's clear this novel will be very interesting. It has a lot of potential but the author needs to work on the flow. All the best with your writing. [img=recommend]
Woah😍 I believe this will be a really Great book. The synopsis itself could catch attention to readers. What more could the content be😍 I recommend this everyone❤️❤️❤️❤️🤩🤩🤩
Promising start to a vampire story, they say the older the wine the finer the taste, and this mistress is at least 100 years old! Love the world building so far, keep it up!
As per the adult tag only, I can definitely say that there are some steamy scenes in this novel. The progression is not that bad and not too draggy, from the moment she woke up to the point where she develop a secret relationship, there are many interesting scenes in between them. While this genre might be foreign to me, I can at least follow the story without being too disoriented. Good luck in your future endeavor author!
It's a good book, that's for sure, from the six chapters I've read, I can beat my chest and say it's a good book. Good grammar, nice concept, nice storyline. Keep it up.
The story has great potential. As I was reading, I noticed errors here and there in terms of grammar and spelling so I'd suggest you just go back and double check your chapters. I believe that if you sort out those errors, your story will flow smoothly .Other than that, it is an interesting story and I'm definitely going to keep an eye on it. [img=recommend]
Hi everyone!! I apologize for the grammar and everything else. I will fix it immediately. I hope you still give this book a second chance. Sincerely, authortinnnnn
I am impressed with the author's narration quality. Even the language is a hard one, she managed to pull it off and it has quality at that. Surely, this will become great in the future. I am deeply rooting on our MC and her character is what I like. I hope I can write this fluent too. Keep it up, I support you [img=recommend]
I'm still on the first five chapters and I can tell that this is a good book. It started off pretty fast and we experienced things the same way the main character does which is a really good thing as it makes an effect on its readers.
I like this story so far. It's creative and the personality of the main characters brings the story in. You have some good talent. I hope to read more of your stories in the future.
The book starting was nice although it felt a little off at certain places and there was a bit of mistake here and there. The writing quality: 4 stars since there is room for improvement there. Story Development: 5 stars for the efforts you have putten into the story. Character design: 5 stars since they are the best part of the whole story with unique characteristics. Updating stability: 5 I don't think I need to say why~ World background: 4 You can make it better, like explain a bit more with some unique points. Besides all, you did a great job! Keep it up!!
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I see a few reviews already, so why not... The story is decent and a bit intriguing when I read it, and the development is honestly good. I don't really notice any grammar or punctuation mistakes, most likely because the author spends a lot of time writing or editing the chapters. As a result though...the updates are quite few. But who knows... Maybe a few more chapters are needed before the upload schedule changes[img=recommend]
Characters and world background are both great, story is going well so far too (I won't give that part 5 star simply because there are only a few chapters). But the thing that stands out to me is the writing quality. I've found quite a few grammatical mistakes and minor punctuation errors, which somehow just ruin the reading experience for me quite regrettably. Other than that though, great premise of a story. I don't reach much FL but this could be a gem.
Writing Quality: It was quite engaging, there were some missing parts but it was not noticeable since it also may be a writing style. Stability of Updates: I rated it low since it did not reach the daily number of updates, but it was understandable too. Since everyone has something to get busy on dailies too. (Besides it is my review, i just like to count daily stuffs) Story Development: Coffins , the way the mistress wakes up and background of the place , it has pertained smoothly. Since it only have less chapters I could say it has potential to grow (Coming soon) Character Design: The mistress was well written and it slow opens the type of character she has on the chapters and the flow of the other servants that she have. Looking forward to the other supporting roles on it. World Background: I still have less image on it but it was already maybe enough for the others? Including me , I supposed just a new update will give a good image of the surrounding the Mistress was in. Aside from what was inside her coffin and shelter.
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Okay so, I am not into fantasy stuff, BUT, this novel is unique and quite engaging, that keeps readers eager and on their toes. Secondly, I loved the progression of story, besides that, all characters are cool and very well crafted. I definately recommend this novel to everyone. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK !!
The story started narrating a vampiress celebrating her 100th bday getting out of the coffin. This is one interesting intro. And she looks like a young girl despite her age. The writing is good and understandable but as the chapters progress, I got confused along with the flow of the story. It has a lot of errors that need to be fixed. The pace is good but the transition of the story needs clearing. The updates were accordingly done. The characters were described and mentioned. The world setting hasn't been detailed. Overall, the novel has great potential. Just ensure clarity of its flow for better reading.
The story got an interesting plot, I read every novel about vampires which explores this kind of character this novel explores...mc seems good and refreshing...different from usual vampire stories.., though I think the writer is new, so it is best to ignore the grammar, and give a try to this novel...its get better as the story progresses.
This novel has a lot of potentials and the beginning was quite intriguing. I can already see the author is trying her best with the grammars and I applaud her for that as I could already guess that English ain't her first language. The flow is nice except for the parts that are missing, but I will tell the author to continue this book and maybe proofread and see her mistakes, other than that, the story is very good. Am adding to my library as the errors won't keep me from reading
Well, the beginning is the Novel is great. The way storyline is fascinating. Not gonna give spoilers because it is better for readers to read it instead of seeing reviews. The storyline will surely attract your attention. Because this story is really truly awesome. I'm a fan of fantasy. I love it. Thanks for providing such a wonderful work Author..
Wonderfully worded, great descriptions had me lost there I would love more chapters though but we must wai for good quality Keep up the good work author