The Adventurous Trip to the Forest

img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] The author used his wisdom to make ghosts run with the use of a flashlight. It was difficult to arrange a fire at midnight. Electricity is generally not available in the forest so a burning fire torch or flash light was the only possibility. [img=coins]

I am amazed by the description of the bus journey from pick-up point to Dhikala. The weather and campsite view was described beautifully. The boys tiptoeing from the site show they were naughty and risk-taking characters. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] what a prank! The kids at the campsite were so sad to miss the thrill of staying overnight in the core area of the Forest and not seeing wolves and tigers.

[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] I am smitten by the setup of a secluded house in the jungle near the waterbody. The author has justified the story by not hunting the rarest wild animals. The wolves cannot climb up the trees so they stayed on the first floor of the house. The tigers were there to drink the water. The creation of fear and suspense is totally justified. Big salute! to the author for justification and using good similes. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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VEER_KAPOOR

Wow! I am amazed with the vocabulary used in the story. The campsite and forest description is quite well written. The boys planned their safety quite well by choosing the first floor to stay overnight. I wish, ghost scene would have been a little longer but overall very satisfying to read. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]The forest was described beautifully.I have been to Dhikala. It is famous for asiatic elephants and Bengal tigers.

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Anand_K_2920

[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] It is wonderful plot of three boys.I loved the prank part of the story. In my opinion the boys sneaked out of the campsite for fun.

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[img=coins] I love the character of Sandy who was humorous even at the time when boys were in the deep danger of a pack of wolves attach. The climax of the story is also very interesting when the tension is at its highest.

I liked the part when the boys are forced to spend a night in the creepy,haunted house.The sense of danger.The sense of danger carries on rising and rising through the piece,which is brilliant.[img=coins]

This is such a fun and exciting story to read!The story is full of twists and turns, and keeps the reader on the edge of their seat.The readers cannot wait to find out what happens to Veeir,Jack and Sandy.

Huzzah Kapoor! Brilliantly written story. I love the use of rich vocabulary as well as similies and metaphors. Someone once said “Success is the fruit of good ideas pursued with energy, intelligence, and determination.” No wonder you’re doing so well! Congratulations Veer!

Good plot setting. The tension starts building up after readers learn the boys got lost in the jungle. They were a true warriors who made their plans against a pack of wolves and ambush of tigers. [img=coins][img=coins]

The good storyline kept the reader busy thinking about whether boys will save their lives from wild animals or they would get success in hunting them.

[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Good plot! good writing!good vocabulary and very effective use of similes and plot setting. It is a adventurous drama good for middle schoolers.

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Veer_Kapoor

[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Good Job! It was a story of 3 best friends getting bored with the mundane school routines and desperately looking to spend some quality time. Their freedom made them lost in the jungle and the real story begins from here---[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

There is some lovely dialogue in this story-well done for choosing effective verbs for the dialogue instead of using 'said' all the time. you have used other words such as shouted and exclaimed. This makes your writing more interesting and exciting to read. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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VEER_KAPOOR

[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Interesting story of 3best frIends lost in the jungle. The description of secluded house, jungle adventure, wild animals and ghost every scene is penned down very well. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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Anand_K_2920

I read this novel several times and found it quite amazing. It is the perfect story for a short movie. I loved Veeir's character. He was not only brave but intelligent as well.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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VEER_KAPOOR

Beautiful plot and very well weaved! The author has made sure neither wild animals get hurt nor boys yet he maintained high drama and tension. [img=coins][img=coins]

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VEER_KAPOOR

Great Plot! Beautifully written. salute to author for weaving the story in such a wonderful way, neither animals got hurt nor boys yet he kept the reader engaged in reading. The tension kept on rising from the time wolves were sensed in the area. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]