The Birth of Nihility God

LV 4

Ky4ler

Hm let me see are you gonna be one of those bums that is going to be like this is NOT harem then later on just because ppl want it cause there nasty and horny as **** then your like ok your right let’s change the novel to harem just cause I don’t feel like listening to myself then what’s the point of writing your own novel

LV 15

ryu_force1

I haven't actually read the story yet but I wanted to say one thing for actually read it and that is the MC is stupid in God is a cheapskate. If you solved the mystery the universe then you are basically a God, more or less so if you want to you can go to another Universe on your own. Even if you can't do that on your own and the god of the world the the MC is in wants to reward him you can't just give him one wish. I think somebody who solves the mystery of Your World there's more than one wished don't you think that is just being too damn cheap and exploiting somebody with that amounts..

LV 5

Sorrias

The history is not bad, it's actually very good, what's bad is your writing, Like REALLY BAD, how old are you 14?.................................................. .........................................................

LV 4

DreamWanderer

perfect job from a fellow nihilist!! ..................................................... ——————————————— :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

LV 10

Democratis

I haven't even been able to get past the first chapter, the grammar is just headache-inducing. You can definitely understand what's going on, but its like using industrial-grade sandpaper for toiletpaper. It will do the job, but the moment you can stop you WILL stop. I suggest using grammerly, its a free app that will fix most of your issues (mainly tenses and silly mistakes).

LV 2

Loalola

More pls 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 5

LifelessMan

Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work

LV 6

MohamedRost

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LV 3

TheLoftyOne

This is my first writing experience so every help is appreciated by this fellow. This mc will try to find his path on the shadows or whatever. This mc will think with his brain not with dck. Story will occur on narutoverse cuz i am not accustomed with the novels' i have read so the other stories may be on wuxia crossover etc...

LV 4

WHIFL

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LV 3

kwertyu

i don't disappoint me lololololololololilololo hohohohohohohoh nenenenenenenenenenen oaoaoaoaoaoaoaoaka trolololololloll hohoohohohohohhohohohohohoh

LV 4

Will_Caruso

WHAT YOU DROPPED IT COME ON MAN GEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!WHAT YOU DROPPED IT COME ON MAN GEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!WHAT YOU DROPPED IT COME ON MAN GEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!WHAT YOU DROPPED IT COME ON MAN GEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!WHAT YOU DROPPED IT COME ON MAN GEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!WHAT YOU DROPPED IT COME ON MAN GEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!

LV 5

Pripriri

I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂 So 5 stars hahahaI'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂 So 5 stars hahahaI'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂 So 5 stars hahahaI'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂I'm bored 😂 So 5 stars hahaha

LV 5

Lord_lucky

it's a good story to pass time .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................