The rise of the Arc knight(RWBY fanfic)

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Aedan

There is only 20 Chapters when I'm posting this review, so in the future the 'world background' may be better I'm gonna be honest it's one of the few RWBY Fanfics that I truly enjoy reading and await with excitement for the next chapter This novel has a good pace development for a Fanfic, good English, an MC that isn't afraid of making changes in the plot but most of all I can actually visualize the scenes I'm reading in my head cause the flow and transition of the story is just that good There are some things that can be better, like a few more chapters based on POV different from the MC and other chapters based on what is different in this Time-line compared to the Original, some paragraphs are a bit too big for mobile users. However I can confidily say that it's a great read to do especially before going to sleep or just after u just woke up I truly hope u can give this novel a try Thx for all the hard work, more chapters pls

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_Sashcka_

If it's Yuri, then I'll drop this fanf. Salem to the harem.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Travis_Plinke

Very good, one of the very few good rwby fanfics on this cold dreary website. The writing quality is very good but has some minor spelling mistakes The updating stability is amazing and should either be increased if you want or decreased to give better quality chapters. Story development is well done no issues here. Character design is nice and well thought out very few minor mistakes here, sub character development is too notch. World background is amazing and should be kept. Otherwise amazing chapter

LV 13

M7TH1C

Size of harem Is 4 huh? Just do team rwby :) Also, This Is gonna go In my library but not reading until I know who the love interests are. Sorry but I'm a paranoid mf because of all the sh*tty betrayal and ntr fics I've read

LV 4

Balling

(Ch37) Was looking for copper and found silver, it’s not gold but it’s good enough. I had my expectations for this novel pretty low going into it but it completely proved me wrong being good in all aspects and entertaining to read. My only problems with this story is how neo is an adoptive sister to him but is still in the harem, also having a maid dress on constantly is weird too. The details of him training while being a child is going on for too long as well, like it’s almost 40 chapters in and he’s about to go into another training ark. It’ll be around 100 chapters in before the main story even starts if it continues at this pace. Also harem bad. (although this is just a personal opinion of mine, why can’t reincarnation protagonists just have a loving relationship with one partner for once. Like I don’t even think poly is bad, it’s just so overdone and it’s never written well.)

LV 4

VastoLordMask

great fanfic but the updates are kinda of slow

LV 4

Ireallylikereading

the update of this work is always taking so long that im wondering whether this has been dropped or not.

LV 15

Requiem_Phantom

Good a very top tier fanfic with a lot of potential for the future. Only complaint is I need more chapters now!

LV 4

The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Heattcliff48

its good but it can be better! it lacks a bit of background, but its okay

LV 1

ParkerWD

No yuri pls, me encanta tu novela, es muy buena, me encanta el desarrollo del prota. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=monedas][img=exp]

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Karma_T3000

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LV 10

Cabelinho

very good the story is progressing very well the plot is amazing, i am really liking the personality of the protagonist and his interactions with two other characters and his development is Great, I haven't seen the harem yet, I hope many good things

LV 4

Sapphirerose10

I really appreciate your book [img=recommend]