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Total War System: Stuck between DC and Marvel

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Author: Warcry_Ayms

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How would a third generation rich kid which was the black sheep of his family react when he discovers that he has been chosen as host of a system but the price is that he is bound to a place where he has limited freedom and could only leave on certain conditions?


Freak out of course!!!!


“Why!? I was comfortable in my house leeching of my family! Why must I be subjected to this confinement!!”


[Host was chosen randomly out of trillions of many possible candidates, so in the words of your fellow humans it is better for you to ‘enjoy’ it if you can’t fight it.]


So Mark Johnson was stuck within a weird three story building with a late Victorian design.

[Host has discovered ‘The Shop’]

[Mission Issued: Where are you?]
[-Host must discover where you are and what or which worlds you can access.]

Mark then fumbled around and realized that there are two doors that led to two different worlds. Namely DC and Marvel Universes.

[Mission completed!]

Mark could only say two words when realization dawned upon him.

“I’m Fucked!”


[Note: Any character in this novel is not mine except for the main protagonist. Also I would change some things about some characters as I am not quite knowledgeable in every canon facts about many of them Also I only write in my free time to release some stress so don't expect consistent uploads of chapters.]

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RaptorJesus

Not many warhammer fanfics out there so thank you!

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Cautious_00_

Just read all the chapters so far and it drew me in this is a great book so far hope you keep writing. Also if you have a update schedule just Curious what it is

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GodOfLight

You disappointed me, I thought at least by the 50-60th chapter it would be about the universes of Marvel and DC, but it only started 75-80 and then a couple of chapters and that’s it, I wish the author a speedy recovery and I say goodbye to this

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Thelegend002

well warhammer fanfic plus a little bit of dc and marvel .

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salamander_yt

this has potential keep it up 👍 . p

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Gulf_Alpha_Yankee

Please continue to update this story and come out with new chapters.

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MorningWood_Dao

60 chapters in, mc still stuck at Warhammer. some of the 'writing' got worse at about ch 50+, sometimes the pov suddenly change from "he" to "i", and vice versa. other than that, it's an interesting novel to read even for people who don't know about warhammer lore (it's still a bit confusing for me). tho I feels like author didn't make the fanfic with non-warhammer fans in mind.

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wcpwnsuto

I enjoy the novel a lot BUT the title is completely miss leading ... The system the MC gets has NOTHING to do with Total war. It has nothing to do with the game Total War Warhammer or the act of declaring war to get stronger. Also it says stuck between DC and Marvel but he is in Warhammer (AU). The story so far has had very little to do with DC and Marvel. The system of his doesn't give him DC and Marvel or Warhammer stuff it gives him anything the Author can think of at that moment. He had 3 BIG worlds to choose from to give the MC rewards but says screw it and gives him things for Dragon Ball Z, random Cultivation Novels, Ben 10 and MORE!! Pick a lane please!! The novel should be called the random missions and rewards with a shop! The consistency of this novel is 0. But other than the lies of the title the novel itself is fine.

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muh_name

While it is an overall good story the Marvel/DC aspects fall to the side pretty quickly as does the shopkeeper bits as well that majority of the storytelling is in the Warhammer universe. so is you're interested in the Marvel or DC in the title give this one a pass

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jon_T
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I thought it was dc and Marvel fic but almost all chapters are warhammer which I do not know....you should put on the tag for that...... ..........

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088880

Warhammer funfiction with bit of Marvel and DC :D:D:D With time MC gets smarter and writing quality better. I rly like this fic so far.

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Pug_Lord1234

Just started reading and I’m already hooked. Like the premise and hope it’s not dropped like so many other Warhammer stories. Keep up the good work!

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Gandalf_el_Gris

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Mid_Midas

well folks this is the story we the warhammer gamers needed the lore is hard here and the world building is gold the marvel and dc for what i can see is jost a subplot to help the mc and belive me he will need it because he got the atention of all chaos gods and the hate of two of them i would be happy if the author go until the end of this story and really wanted to play some warhammer 3 with him someday

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ChronoSeraph

finally a good warhammer fantasy fanfic hope author doesnt drop and we get to see end times.

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SR_2027

Ok, so first of all, the story is mostly about war hammer universe. The title is completely off. The shop, Marvel/DC universe quickly falls away from the story after a first few chapters. Then the story gets a bit boring as most of the readers have almost no idea and knowledge regarding the Warhammer universe. Making it boring for the most part. It’s like blindly following the narrative. This made me a bit mad. Like can the author change the books name? It’s not about total war. The Marvel abd DC parts are off the story and takes place in only a few chapters. Furthermore, if he’s a shopkeeper, why is he not doing his job properly? Overall: 3.2 stars.

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Gulf_Alpha_Yankee

really good and is currently my favorite story. The characters are well written and consistent. The world is really well developed, and even for someone like me who has little to no knowledge of WH fantasy it's easy to get a grasp on the world and understand where, when, and how things are happening. The update stability is good but not great. The story progression is well paced, well thought out, logical, and it goes in a way I personally like. The writing quality is good, and although there are acational spelling mistakes and slight grammar mistakes, It doesn't really affect the story muc please keep writing this. I find it very entertaining and enjoyable to read.

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HeavenlyMarks

Good job. A very intriguing fanfiction of course I didn't know total war was warhammer they are usually rare fics and to find it here along with some of marvel and dc is just really great read

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Bottomlanefeeder27

I read the all the chapter available and so far the story is going great. It is quite fascinating that there is a fanfic of the Warhammer franchise here and this one is quite interesting. Keep up the good work author.

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taidanokami

Thi by far is one of the greatest fanfic I’ve ever read hope you update soon

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