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Aura is mystical power which was discovered 300 years ago from present. Humans have discovered it by sheer luck and continued to discover it's mysteries. In this world every living being has willpower which is basically their will and they release it in the world unbeknownst to them making the world abundant with willpower.
Human was able to transform this willpower into aura which then transform the world of martial arts. Therefore currently the world is being dominated by aura master. And in this world which is being dominated by the aura masters, Zarek Felkas an orphan with a disease which makes him unable to use aura and also makes his body weak will still rise with the help of an unique doll which can practically do anything like a human.
Note: the cover isn't mine. Credit to the owner Mads Kramer.
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A good story all in all. I would add a bit more to spice this story up though. Only a couple of grammar issues, but I won't hold that against you. Honestly, I think that a bit of description of the environment and characters may be useful. I would also try changing the pace just a bit. Spice it up a little more and add a bit of tension.
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Great story! Wonderful details about the martial arts that even I don't even know! And great introductions about the struggle to learn such a technique! I hope the mc would become the strongest on the later chapters! Writing quality- there are some crunch words (repeating words) that you might want to avoid such as the word "library" on the first few parts of the chapter and other words. it would be nice if you can find other synonyms about it! Feel free to disagree
I have only read a couple of chapters so far, but I can already tell that this story is going to become a classic, so it's going straight into my library!
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So far it is good and shows a lot of potentials. Though, the author is vague about the MC surrounding like how the room is, how grand the Sect is, or the size of the puppet and rhe MC which is frustrating. I hope you get better at that. Also, please don't add Harem or Romance, it ruins all kinds of Cultivation Novel. I haven't found one with a good romance and it all about the MC being, "I will protect you till my dying breath" or "I will destroy the heavens just to get to you. Romance is annoying, in my opinion. Good luck with the novel. Will like to see the future. For now, here is not rating: 4.6