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Looking forward to where this story will go as it seems to be similar to GATE which is a series a like very much with its intriguing concept of going to another world and GUNS! Would love to read it more so I do hope the update speed picks up.
Two chapters are not enough to comment on how the story is. Nonetheless, the story started out good and intriguing. I am curious to see what all they will be encountering in the world they have travelled. It was well-written with few here and there grammatical errors. Any way, good work!
The writing quality is very good, comparable to the best books I have read on this webside so far. The Story development and characterdesign are solid, nothing out of the world but I don´t see anything bad there. The worldbuilding is bad. While most parts are okay, there are some that came out of the blue without any warning. Especially the Esper abilities were so unreasonable I nearly stopped reading.
This story is at best confusing. At worst a bah humbug. The script used for the higher ups and spell casting is annoying as hell and definitely takes away any possible enjoyment a reader would have when they have to trod through translating whatever meaning the writer has. I'm frankly amazed I made it this far...no more for me though.
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
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Loved the story, I was always enamored by the idea of a modern civilization meeting an ancient, magical one. That's why I was excited when the author said that this will have some elements similar to GATE the anime. Overall I loved the writing style and the stories progression so far. The characters seem interesting and I see there might already be setup for emotional growth down the line. Overall a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.