DO YOU TRUST ME?

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ThePotatoKing

ok... it seems like an interesting story and the tension builds up real quick, there are too little chapters right now to give a concise decision about the story. The characters seem interesting though...honestly, I kinda feel they were too quick to blame the FL for the murder but after switching perspectives, it seemed more legitimate. Overall the story has potential. So do check it out.

LV 1

Dare43564

It seems interesting. Just build up on the scenes before moving to the next one. This makes the book more full of suspense and scene that can make the plot more detailed.

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Idyllic_Scribe

*inhale* This book is good, especially with people who likes faster books. (maybe a little too fast? The Mc is theown at you right away, I guess for conveinence. I understand that you will develop the character, through the book. Try showing not just telling us who bshe is.) If you care a lot about story and and mysteries, go ahead, you'll love this book.It is a really good book, and for a person who doesn't really like this genre of books, I'm adding it to my library easily.

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JustLikeWriting777

Only two chapters and yet one can still tell how much thought has been put in this story. The plot is suspenseful and nail-biting! I personally am addicted to this thriller and mystery genre so I'm no doubt addicted. The main character really draws me towards the background as well! I hope you publish more chapters soon!

LV 3

RJMidnight

I don’t like romance nor female lead, although it seems you have male lead too (unless I read that wrong). Your story has potential and interesting, especially since you have a mystery aspect to it. The mystery is what brings people into the story. You have grammar mistakes, especially a lot of places that need commas. Remember, commas make a difference and the story flow better. Without the commas, it is like everything is together. Other than that, your story has potential, keep up the good work!

LV 13

midnight_bloom

I love it! By the end of the second chapter I had my first hypothesis nulled hahaha. so I'm excited to know more about them. More chapters please. Highly recommend! At first I was quite dubious in reading this novel because of the theme. As I am writing fluffy romance I tend to stay away from dark (gory) themes because it tends to rub on me, but hey, this one's goooood!!! The murder was just stated in passing (not graphic) so I'm fine haha. and it makes me think like a detective. really love it. I'll be watching this novel for updates.

LV 3

IzannahFrame

Wow! I love it! Please continue the story. I like mystery novels. I would sure follow this one. I just noticed the dialogue of each character should be properly separated. But over all, nice writing and the plot is interesting.

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XADD

The story was great, the people's in the story and the background is good but do take note that some of your writing is a little off, but the rest is good.

LV 10

_AiRen_

Highly recommended ✓ I'm honestly invested in this book already. The concept and the plotline feels me up with curiosity! The character seriously is about to experience a rollercoaster ride and I'm waiting to know more about the suspense that is to come. Looking forward to the next chapters. Fighting Author!👍୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨

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LinYang

So far, pretty good. Quality is decent, though it could use with a quick edit. Very fact-paced, and makes the readers want to know what happens next. Keep writing author!

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Kystal88

Very quick paced, draws you in with action. Sometimes the sentences are a little long, so make sure to take your time reading them. The characters are realistic and intriguing. Can't wait to read more!

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EmpRabbit

I like the way you start your book and so far it seems like an interesting plot. One thing to take note of is to check the punctuations of some of your sentences. Some of them should be split up in smaller ones and others would need some commas. Aside from that, the writing quality is good. I can't say much else as you only have two chapters so far, but I'll keep on reading when you update more. Keep up the good work, author!

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Meyk

Please continue your novel. Your novel has potential that even in just chapter 2 im already invested in the story. Looking forward to your chapters!

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SolAce

This is indeed a thriller/ mystery novel. With its morse code puzzles and secret messages, it gives off a vibe of one as our mc, the female reporter, is abandoned after being framed as a murderer. However, I have a few issues: 1. I believe I sense several plot holes that could be addressed. Now I may be wrong and not understanding something, but do keep in mind that the reader shouldn’t be mixed up either as it breaks off the immersion. First is to why did the person, who messaged our mc, give a coded message in the computer that pointed to their meeting place ? Was he trying to contact his fellow accomplices on the same computer ? ( this is not quite realistic compared to how clean the murder occurred; makes me think of a novice murderer as he could have used a burner phone in a back alley instead of potentially getting seen by people ) Why don’t both protagonists share this information to the police, or at least to her lawyer ? ( I know it may not be safe, or the criminal could escape, but she should at least be cleared of the charge ! ) 2. There are some run-on sentences, and I noticed a certain section was repeated in one of the chapters. The only thing I can say is to read and sift through you chapters before and after writing as you might catch major plot holes just by rereading in a reader’s perspective. 3. Truth be told, the flow is super fast, and due to the plot holes, it feels a bit lacking. Not that I have anything against a quick plot, but I feel like it needs to be fleshed out more. This is just my personal opinion though. All in all, the intrigue is there, so don’t give up ! You have potential just waiting to be polished. Keep up the good work, Author !

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white_cat10

I just recently bumped and read this story and I say this is kind of underrated with bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five star! If you are looking for a story with surprising vibes, don't hesitate and start reading this now. I like this story hope that the author won't just drop it like the others. The more I read it, the more I want to finish it. Hope the author constantly update its chapter. ❤️

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Ephipanians

Okay first of all, I love how the story is going and I’m really interested in finding out How the story will be. A little tip from me, you should elaborate more on the characters and their feelings. but that’s just a suggestion

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YawningBrain

Your story really builds the suspense pretty well and the pace is just right. It feels like a really well thought plot. I was left with so much questions and wanting to know more... so intriguing. I love mystery stories. There are some gramatical little errors but it is a great start author. Please keep up the good work! I can't wait to know more! 🙂

LV 4

Panqiuyan

You have a potentially good story. I would suggest you write a bit of world-building because I am confused about the setting of the story. is it in China or somewhere else? I would like to see descriptions of places and characters. I also would advise you to look up how to write in the active tone of voice instead of passive. this story has some grammar issues. other than that keep up the good work.