Synopsis
When rifts open to other dimensions mana pours into our world. The changes in the people are sudden and not necessarily good. Daryl Wallous had a good change, he gained abilities that he feels can make him someone more important. Plenty of others make the change too, and not just people.
Will he and his friends be ready when they realize that the problem can't be contained, or that mana wasn't the only thing to come through the rifts?
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I currently am aiming to release five chapters a week, but I do not have a set schedule for the days they will be released. I will try to release Monday through Friday but I reserve the right to change release days.
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The MC seems a scaredy cat that run away from everything, he doesnt try to become stronger at all and doesnt even listen to the advice his parents gave him. He use his own logic without thinking about facts and ehat other tell him, "If I think it's like that, it's like that". He has talent, but doesnt fight at all; putting talent on a person like that is wasted..
The story is made in a fresh and grips you from the start. The main character is like an everyday man but becomes more and more like a badass. If you have ever wandered what it is to have superpowers one day, it is a good way to see what it will be for a normal Joe to become a hero in his own story. The comedy is very friendly and can be a game changer in serious situations. But you can find it offensive(but for me it isn't :). I found the harem aspect very funny and in a not so intrusive sense to come out of nowhere. This is going to rock your boat in a lot of ways(like *** scenes :D who doesn't love those :D a lot of *** and even jokes about ***) But in all seriousness it is interesting and for a lot of smart people will be something to enjoy and rely, RELY give you a look of what you will be if you could have a antihero/almost hero.
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I think you have a good start, I like the main character. I’m really looking forward to seeing what happens to him. I’m also looking forward to the story picking up and to see how how many wives he ends up with.
As the author it is a given that I will give myself a good review. This may be my first work but I have some great ideas for this story, though it might take some time for me to get there. I hope you will enjoy my own version of an apocalypse story as much as I will writing it.
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Great history just a bit to much into the *** part but still great its a must read one of my favorites right now keep up the good work im waiting alot from this
Firstly I just binged read up to chapter 55 and I must say thank you as I am enjoying this story. The lack of seriously over used cliches and nipple twisting plot turns. Also just the overall plot direction being generally unguessable is worth the read. I have read a lot of stories and this one I must say have the potential to be in my top ten that I would recommend and reread when I want to enjoy the story all over again.
Really enjoying this so far. If I had one major problem is that at times too much 'stuff' (read plot development) is happening and thus character development takes a back seat. I would like to see things slow down a bit so we can get some more character development, especially between the MC and his ladies.
Very good. Keep up the good work. Good Original novels are very rare nowadays, everywhere it's just trash novels with ****ty prose structure which is just a pain to the eyes. Among these your novel truly stands out as a gem. Just don't drop the story. 💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎💎
Out of the many books I've started reading and dropped, or even keep on reading, this one has my captivated so early on in the story more so than any of the other ones so far. The quality of the writing is excellent, with not too many huge info dumps, and the info dumps are still easier to read through than most other stories. The character's haven't gotten a whole lot of time to let their colors fly yet, I believe, but a good picture is being painted of who they may potentially turn out to be. I hope the author is able to continue on with this story, and is able to maintain a sane state of mind once this book starts receiving the popularity it deserves.
this novel is good, it should be in the top rating, ill vote for this everyday now, just pleaze dont drop it🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇
Just read the first page and I was forced to give a review the story line is so cleanly writing that you would not notice it an orginal novel, the flow of the story keeps you tuned in. worth reading, really good keep up the good work want to see your world come to life in the minds of more readers
Livro muito bom, recomendo muito verem ele, uma boa história para passar o tempo, se você não sabe o que ler, posso garantir que a história desse livro vai te surpreender
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I give this book a 4.6. The book itself is good but it feels like it’s missing something that would be able to give it a big push but even I don’t know that that is so until You find it the review will stay but otherwise the books is good and I can’t wait for more.
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Only have 4 stars for updating because it was before but I don’t want to make it lower and hurt this great story
To start off I don't dislike your story, on the contrary, i think it's pretty good. I applaud you for your good grammar and sentence structure. Now my biggest disappointment with this story has to be the characters in the way that they affect the story. To start off none of the characters act like they're in an apocalyptic situation. all of them seem to be very unbothered by the peril they are in, they act like the apocalypse is just another Tuesday. And with the addition of annoying characters like courtney and that other thot, the story becomes less about the apocalypse and more of a highschool drama.