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At the start of this chapter I added this story to my library. At the end of this chapter I removed it. I was already annoyed by the two people having gone back to the past but I could deal with it as their relationship would be interesting. Now though with potentially hundreds of people? And a large group of them that decided to enforce the timeline continuity? Feels like a way to forcefully inject ******* where none was needed. View More
I'm Nine Again · C8
2 months ago
So it seems like the story is going off tracks from where it was originally intended? The synopsis says that he would have to "fight for his place in the world". Seems more and more like he is going to be fighting FOR the world.

Ending the 'book' with multiple large cliffhangers and the introduction of a cliche insane evil guy drops the story down quite a bit. It has been great thus far but the last few chapters seem to be taking it in a poor direction. View More
Touch of Fate · C183
3 months ago

Sivil: I agree completely. It is always frustrating when the MC rises on the corpses of his allies. This also locks him into supporting the country even further as he can no longer say to himself "well, there are others who can take care of it".

Touch of Fate · C182
3 months ago

Sivil: It is also a little bit ridiculous that the enemy has such a powerful and deadly assassin but only just decided to use them now.

Touch of Fate · C182
3 months ago
It is also a little bit ridiculous that the enemy has such a powerful and deadly assassin but only just decided to use them now. View More

Sivil: I agree completely. It is always frustrating when the MC rises on the corpses of his allies. This also locks him into supporting the country even further as he can no longer say to himself "well, there are others who can take care of it".

Touch of Fate · C182
3 months ago
I agree completely. It is always frustrating when the MC rises on the corpses of his allies. This also locks him into supporting the country even further as he can no longer say to himself "well, there are others who can take care of it". View More

Dvaita: Whooo boy, that's an escalation!
But, honestly, I quite dislike the trope of making the MC competent by making others of the same tier seem incompetent (the Worf effect). Would be pretty cool if the headmaster was a simulacrum and was expecting this instead etc, instead of the boring trope of shining Dragonknight saving the day

Touch of Fate · C182
3 months ago

Dvaita: Whooo boy, that's an escalation!
But, honestly, I quite dislike the trope of making the MC competent by making others of the same tier seem incompetent (the Worf effect). Would be pretty cool if the headmaster was a simulacrum and was expecting this instead etc, instead of the boring trope of shining Dragonknight saving the day

Touch of Fate · C182
3 months ago

topnative: I really dont care for the other two, I just wanted zoe with him because she has been there for him and actually helped him. She is actually better for him because she focuses him to be better

Rise of The Undead Legion · C216
3 months ago

bookworm517: well if caitlin or even vanessa in ralph's room its okay but zoe....it left bad taste in mouth

Rise of The Undead Legion · C216
3 months ago
Reading Status: C11
This could easily be in the top 20 on this site if it had an editor. The plot is well formed, as far as I have read, and the characters are interesting. Still, English is obviously not the first language of the author. There are a significant amount of extremely common mistakes such as using the wrong words, getting plurals wrong, incorrect sentence structures, missing words, missing commas, run on sentences, incorrect tense, etc...

It also doesn't help that the cover implies some sort of multiple personality story and synopsis doesn't really explain anything. Overall this is a good read assuming you can ignore the quality of the prose itself. View More
Immaculate Spirit
3 months ago
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Immaculate Spirit
3 months ago

Haowie: Yep, dropped. Mc went from loser to sociopath in less than 10 chapters.

Master of Time · C9
3 months ago

Battoth: This logic seems flawed when he can change the future though? If he sees betrayal in the future he can just break their spirit before they even get a chance to do anything. Make them fear or worship him or whatever to the point of fanaticism, easy peasy with his powers and he wouldn't have to kill off every human that can think for themselves when he meets them. Actually with his knowledge from the future total brainwashing should also be simple stuff. Actually it would be more interesting if he took it as a game to thwart all schemes at the last minute just for his own amusement. Then break their spirit and remold them to his liking when he tires of the game.

Master of Time · C9
3 months ago

Intnet: Why did you have to make the MC a dick?

Master of Time · C9
3 months ago

Sivil: What a waste. You introduce an interesting world that is a combination of modern and fantasy. You have different races, magic, gods, etc... Then you throw the main character into a VR game? SMH... It isn't like you even waited for the story to get into a lull. We are less than 10 chapters in and literally nothing has happened of note so far.

I'm a Vampire God?! · C9
3 months ago
Thanks for letting us know the situation! View More
A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO · C0
3 months ago
The whole reason why it is called the MAIN CHARACTER is because it is the focus of the story. It would be one thing if it was focusing on important side characters or events or world building, except it isn't. You are just telling some jokes that are atypical of the story up until this point.

If you can't handle even the most benign feedback or questioning then maybe you shouldn't post your writing on a site that allows comments. View More

Hao_Abao: does a story need to focus on the mc? lots of novels do the same thing why dont u go complain there?

From Fish to Dragon (Hiatus) · C58
4 months ago
I am confused as to why the story has taken a back seat for 3 chapters now to focus on monster battles between side characters that the MC is likely never going to meet. View More
From Fish to Dragon (Hiatus) · C58
4 months ago
"Wait, did I ever tell them my name?"

This seems kind of moot to focus on. They obviously deal in information and shady dealings so it wouldn't be abnormal for them to investigate clients. Not only that but he literally handed them a letter of introduction... View More
Touch of Fate · C169
4 months ago
Thanks for the chapters! Also write at the pace that works from you. You don't owe us anything. View More
Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C184
4 months ago
Thanks for the chapter! View More
Unsealing: Omnipotent Father · C177
4 months ago
Hoping they become more. It seems that both Tal and Sera want more (even if they won't admit it themselves).

Mike is pretty dense though. Really hoping the author doesn't keep him that way for too much longer. View More

Jackie22: I’m glad we got to know more about Tal she is a great friend

Touch of Fate · C163
4 months ago
Completely agree. View More

bloo: What's depressing is that there isn't more people reading this. They're missing out. This story is easily top 3 on this site

Touch of Fate · C159
4 months ago
Thanks for the chapter! I was hoping for a more damaging show of power but this was nice too! View More
Touch of Fate · C162
4 months ago

Sharonmyoui: Same thought

Chameleon: My True Face · C39
4 months ago

Tenkay: Very much agree!!

Touch of Fate · C159
4 months ago

bloo: What's depressing is that there isn't more people reading this. They're missing out. This story is easily top 3 on this site

Touch of Fate · C159
4 months ago
This is such a well written story that the release rate is almost depressing. Please keep it up mobius_factor. I have been hooked since the start! View More
Touch of Fate · C159
4 months ago

FrozenTidez: ... What did I just read in the last three chapters?

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C89
4 months ago

Angelxcx: Well even if it hurt our dear author emetionly a must say I am really disppointed with this idea of other transmigrator I will not say that like this It will go to **** etc. but I do not really know if I want to continue read this (I know author you do not care). Well atleast like this I can stop reading this becouse I ahev soure taste right now and perhaps I will contiunu reading after month.

Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin · C89
4 months ago
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