Chronicles Of A Telekinetic

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Gabichu_Yeah

I abandoned the previous one because I didn't understand the references to characters from other series and in general the story was weird, 5 stars to support the rewrite

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Bilal_Irshad

much better than the old one ************

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DetachedDreamer

I was a big fan of the original, so I have hope in this story as well. I like the crossover worlds, especially HIMYM but I understand why some folk think the world's can get cluttered with too many shows to balance in one story, personally, as long as it feels natural then im all for it. Like the MC and the movie hes based from, I would like to see him team up with his friends eventually since they are super powered as well, either through the sequel that never made it to theatres or them interacting with other heroes or villians from other worlds. So yes, Im excited to see him jump worlds for missions and see how he interacts with those worlds as well. Honestly this is just a fun and entertaining concept to me and as long as the grammar is decent it won't get confusing and convoluted like other attempts to do the same on WN. I hope this story doesn't stop any time soon and definitely ignore the haters and listen to yourself and not the readers, unless you make a pat reon and ask for feedback, which ill be happy to join. Keep it up.

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Ken_The_Destroyer

Very good story. reading the one before it got rebooted, so I wanted t say this: If u gonna combine sitcom worlds like the last one, I beg of you, please make it so the cast of big bang theory meet up with Ted Mosby and the gang, mostly because I wanna see what will happen with Penny and Barney

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Acoms

Interesante, me gusta la idea solo espero que la actualización sea constante y haya romance. ...................................................

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BrokenandBored123

It has been a year now, are you ever going to post another chapter?

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RZN_NERO

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Darius_Chromwell

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Soup253

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Bigglesworth

I am in love with this story. I hope you continue to completion with this.

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EragonMorningstar

The rewrite is pretty good. Pretty slow paced, but a great work 👍

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Xth

More ch plz

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AsuraRene

im liking this one better than the old one so far hope to see more

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Charly_MadSon

I think it's fantastic that you've decided to rewrite it, good job, you've thought about maybe making another story but as a universe of fan footage movies? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Demon_Noah07

This one is much better than the other one and I hope the author keeps improving like this and completes this one till the end or explore the world more like you can make it like Tibet exploring and Murim type or many more or you can add other things like the origin of asteroid and plant,etc but please keep going its pretty good and better than the one previously so keep going

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Everton_Azevedo

Gosto muito de suas histórias principalmente a que se passa em My hero academia, espero que você continue escrevendo....................................