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A man who met not one but two God level beings and was granted three wishes by each being. What will his choice be and what will his future hold?
I rewritten this story for final time. This will be very confusing story, as Peter will jump to many universes without Warning.
“My first language is not English so I hope you bare with it and this is my first novel. This is fan-fiction novel. Non of these animes, novels, mangas, comics, cartoons, shows, or movie and etc.. does not belong to me. Nor do I own any of these characters or powers. I only own Peter. I hope I can make justice by making fun and loving novel. I thank all writers, artists and all those who contributed for the making of these wonderful original famous novels, animes, mangas, comics, cartoons, movies, or shows and etc.. and I thank other writers here in WebNovel and FanFictions who gave me inspiration and ideas. So I might use some of your ideas from your novels. Thank you again.”
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[{“Not Sure my release rate yet. But 100% sure will never be dropped.”}]
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The Mc is straight up a beta that needs his system to do all the work for him. If your looking for someone badass straight of the bat this fanfiction is not for you. He has godlike powers but can’t even use them. What’s the point of the main character anyways might aswell make his system (ciel) the main character.
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#1, I really hope you will find some beta reader #2, I really hope you not making some bull**** harem woman like "Ohhhh you so handsome i want your PE*NIS" #3, i really hope you dont make generic DXD plot like you make him join peerage then follow Canon story from then on #4, i really hope you dont your MC too strong like "im strong so FU*CK you Great Red" Great Red have infinite power you know #5, dont make gender bent please Thats all i think, but so far so good
The story that you make is very interesting so I hope you continue writing this story because I really like this story and it can be a one-time high school of dead story. Thank you for writing this story and I hope you never give up.
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Mudar para português Well I liked the story very much I think you should continue many will read and like others you should not commit to continue the story to bring those who did not like the beginning to continue reading more if you stop because there were few critics there you will never go grow as a translator or writer
Please. Not to hate on the author's work or anything, but there are a few points I would like to say. 1) Really? A fanfiction? Even if you can't spare the slightest effort to make up your own setting and characters, you don't need to stoop down so low to write a random fanfiction and ride of the original's popularity. 2) A system... I really hate novels that try to ride off the 'system' trend that's going on in Webnovel right now. 3) Try putting your work through an online grammar checker or ask someone who's more proficient in English to look over your work. Just skimming through it, I can see some extremely obvious mistakes that would've been easily caught if you did any proofreading or had another person do it for you.
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Please just stop.. This type of novel is so fucking stupid Wasting my time reading this **** FFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK ,...................................................................................................A ..A....A.....A...A A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.Q.Q.Q.Q.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.A.
5 stars just so to encourage you to continue writing. Keep it up Fuck 140 characters Fuck 140 characters Fuck 140 characters Fuck 140 characters Fuck 140 characters
Hope you won’t stop halfway and this is a harem story with ***. Great story by the way. Please update daily. Don’t listen to very negative bull**** comments.
I really hope that this story wont be dropped and instead would publish new updates faster. Its kinda annoying how everytime i check there isnt any new update cuz i really enjoy this.
i don't know what to type, but i know that i need 140 words to post this review and also i think that this is a very good fanfic. Please keep up with your good work.
What is the problem although author releases chapter it says that chaps are deleted. ..............................................................................
Well, I've read the first chapter and already I see little red flags popping up. Not only did you give him the abilities of a god but you gave him the abilities of 3. With out any challenged to overcome how are you going to build any interest in the story. I recommend pulling back the power fantasy a little bit and maybe spending a little bit more time with characterization. (I'm going to give 4 stars, but I just want you to consider this criticism seriously.)
I’m giving it a 5star review, in hopes of it being a good harem novel where the mc isn’t a pu$$y. And that the author doesn’t drop it midways 140140140140140140140140140
Well the naruto part was just bs so naruto came up being all smart and **** with his **** and then told him that his father talk to him in his dream but then the hokage was like yeah sounds legit a child cant possibly think of something so complicated right?No...its just no...aside from that the constant reincarnation is annoying too.
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I saw rewrite in the title and then the author mentioning that english isn't his first language and I was expecting the story to be at the very least decent. I was wrong. The story is unreadable it desperately needs a beta reader and an editor. There are very little pure spelling mistakes, the majority of the mistakes are from improper sentence structure which makes the novel almost impossible to read.
The story is one big chaotic mess. Reincarnations lasting but a chapter, frequent reincarnation into once piece for several chapters and one chapter or so in your favorite ones. So why didn't I rate this higher? The answer is that it is too chaotic each reincarnation to even begin to like the character...
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Why do you people writing the highschool dxd always want him to submit and serve someone, what’s the point , if you’re writing a fan-fic make it different why follow the exact same plot and have the mc submit , would it be a crime if he had ambitions to be the ruler well yours is still ok the other fan-fic was literally st*pid in his fan-fic issie was literally stronger than all of them and when they wanted him to submit to them or they would kill him , he literally trashed them but all of a sudden he submitted saying st*pid things like i’d be your dog without a leash WTF??? he is literally stronger than them so why should his ambitions to be their slave???