Principled Jewellery

LV 10

GreasyBeer

Eastern fantasy with pirates! Not to mention a revenge story and female lead. Also it has pirates. MC seems intelligent from the first few chapters too. Did I say it has pirates? Yes, it has PIRATES.

LV 3

valiantxvillainous

Well, I'm only three chapters in and wow, do I have a lot to say. This is a story and opens bold and strong. A mysterious world is introduced through a captivating scene that isn’t afraid to delve straight into thrilling action that captures the reader's attention. There are many enigmatic details that are begging for an explanation when the story opens but despite these mysteries, the scenes are captured with vivid detail that allows the readers to immerse themselves in a bright and energetic scene. Honestly! I thought I was watching an anime in my mind while reading. And personally, I find that these unexplained phenomenons and details only capture my attention farther and keep me intrigued about the world, eager to find out more. I highly appreciate this style of storytelling over overwhelming info-dumps. I really enjoyed how this author wrote dialogue for his characters, each line succeeding at giving them life. The lines didn’t feel too strange or unnatural and banter between the characters was engaging to read. Also, a big bonus in my opinion that this author actually follows dialogue conventions correctly so I was never confused about which character was talking. There isn’t much to say on the plot as the story has only begun and from when I’m writing this review, I’ve only a tiny taste of the world created by the author. Like I mentioned earlier, don’t expect long boring info dumps here. The introduction to the world is a mysterious one, details given through the scene, a charismatic and unique setting unfolds from the action and character dialogues. I won’t say too much because I don’t want to spoil anything but I will honestly say that I’m incredibly charmed by the world and how powers and abilities work. Through each description and event, I find myself wanting to know more, whether it’s about the magic or even the societal structure of this fantasy landscape. Kudos to the author’s good work! One small critic I’d like to give is that while the action scenes are clearly described, I found that oftentimes the prose did not match the intensity of the action that was happening in the scene. Try to use words and sentence structures that could create more flare and dramatics. A simple way to do this would be to have more variance in the lengths of your sentences to create a more dynamic narrative. Good luck to the author!! And to anyone who comes by this review, please give this novel a read~

LV 10

Mellize

Since this novel is pretty new, I can't say much for the story flow at the moment. But you surely put your best effort in this first chapter; it has a good plot, a strong beginning chapter, emotional impact, and I like the characterization of the two fathers. I'm looking forward to more of this!

LV 3

RubyDreams

The first chapter was very interesting. I am excited to see what happens to Sarah in the future and how she goes about getting her revenge. I also really love how long your chapters are. Keep up the good work!

LV 3

Kamatis

Well, the grammars and words choice is actually perfect! No typos, grammatical errors, none at all! The beginning was amazing and It's smooth too! Check for that! The flow of the story was actually amazing and I was able to immerse myself to the story because of that! Well, always keep up the good work!

LV 11

DragonDusk

Should I say, as expected of Venus? Brilliant beginning with an interesting style of storytelling not to mention the vivid actions. Simply perfect 👍

LV 10

CardinalHippo

Poor Sarah 😭 On another note, the story has a good start with slight buildup into the world background. The premise is really interesting. Only 3 chapters in so I can't much, but having read the author's previous works, I am anticipating the next. Moar!

LV 4

Her_Shadow

I like the pirates concept, and I think the story has some fierce battles in it! Want to see the background of the characters a little bit more and hear about the world more too! It's only two chapters, though, so I'm going to give the author a break and wait till he gets further along! Can't wait to see how the next battles in your story are fought!

LV 12

MotivatedSloth

Intense story, that will pique your interest from the very first moment you will cast your eyes on the letters contained within the first paragraph. Despite only two chapters being up at the moment of me writing this review, I can already see great potential in it, and can imagine it turning into one of the classics of the site! ALL HAIL EXP SECT!

LV 13

Tea_Tae

Fantasy? Check? Strong character? Check. Amazing beginning? Check. Another awesome book by Venus? Double check. Honestly I'm not disappointed at all! The world building is amazing and even though its just 2 chapters, I am hooked. More please 😊😊

LV 5

Ms_Anonymous

Story line is different from what I have read in the past. But this book is awesome. I can't say much about this as only one chap is released. But I can say it is a book with good base (I mean story). Hope author will work hard more.

LV 2

idkbeo

Only read one chapter so far, but I can say that the book isn’t too rushed and the writing style is amazing. There are no grammar mistakes in the first chapter. I wasnt able to find anything ;)

LV 5

RenuKakkar

I have read a few chapters. Will read later too. I like the pirates concept as the book's first chapter introduces us to a few characters. The character design is good. The writing quality is good, Stability of updates is equally good. The story is developing nicely. The World background is good too. All the best.

LV 14

May1st

A story with guts! Amazing grammar and interesting build up. The plot will get you curious and you would find yourself unable to stop reading. This is an amazing job. It's magical and well described. Follow the part with us. It's an amazing one. Ku won't regret it✌

LV 3

Lucia2845

Wow, this is really interest. There isn't that much to say except the story, writing and describing are amazing and well done. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.