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Two best friends, Xiu Ying and Li Na leave their hometown in search of better futures. They had always been close and they both believed that their friendship would last forever... until they actually came to the city.
Li Na fell in love, very fat, with one of the most powerful men in the nation, but he had no interest in her in Xiu Ying.
Join me as we, and Xiu Ying, discover how to navigate a budding romance and unwanted love rivals.
Zhang Wei was an honest and normal man...except he wasn't. That was a personal opinion. To others, he was the most sought-after bachelor and a very wealthy one. He even is engaged to one of the most sought-after women (not official)
He sees something in someone else and feels new things
with her, but it wouldn't be as easy to pursue a relationship with his family's past background. He has something that bad people want.. and would do anything to get it.
Is a normal relationship even possible?
(Re-written description. I'm still not good with descriptions but this is better compared to last year XD)
[The book cover isn't mine.]
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The synopsis itself is more than enough to engage in the story. I really loved it. It is going to be one hell of a journey. I am surely staying tuned on the novel.
I am shamelessly but honestly inserting my views on my story. When I started writing, I noticed that I needed to do more research and that proved well for me as I started updating again. Please give my book a try and let is develop more together. Looking forward to new readers, comments, collections and so on. Pelzy.❤❤
SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p
This novel is a great example for me to learn to. More exposure is what it needs and it will be a blockbuster. This novel has potential so as the author. The way ahead is clear and I hope to see it coming. Kudos and Peace ✌️
I think this story starts off with a lot of charcaters, but each and every one of them are nicley described and introduced. Its interesting so far, I definitely recommend you check this out! 😀
This story is really interesting. Romance is not my cup of tea, but I did enjoy this. Maybe I'll read this once in a while. The only problem I've seen so far is the grammar and punctuation, however, that is minor and the plot masks those mistakes. Keep up the good work!
Good day, I am here to drop a review on your story. Here is what I have observed as a reader, the story is quite a slow build but it introduces you to the characters, the setting and the story. The pace is not fast, enough for you to catch up with the story. Writing quality is also good, I have no issues towards it. Character design too is also good, you can tell their character. World background, at least in reading the earlier parts of the story, you can picture out where and what place it took place. Overall, this story is a good read. I recommend it if you are fond of the genre. That's all for this day, I hope you have a good day!
Great story arc and great character design. Love how the story goes and I can recommend this to anyone. Easily understandable and amazing book. Keep up the good work!
The synopsis got me hooked not gonna lie. I'm a huge fan of romance and throwing in a stick or two in the mix is always fun. I'm just glad that the characters are actually pretty well-written for once compared to other works. This is a good story.
I really like this story because of all the places that it goes to with interesting characters. The best part really is all the organic exposition that's done through good dialogue.
Looks like i found myself a hidden gem here! The story the author is trying to tell us here is interresting, the writing even if it has some grammar erros (not a problem and can be fixed with ease) it's simple to the point and that's how i like it! Now if you excuse me i have to get back to reading as im hooked!
I love that this book is not like some complicated romance book with big grammars, anyone can easily understand it. Aside from a little tense switch(not too noticeable) which can be corrected with proofreading, it is interesting. I love the way you describe your characters and the way they express themselves. it added more feel to the book.
A story with fascinating story arc and great character development. I love how the writer put enough details in the story, it makes the story tangible and real. It wasn’t too much and it wasn’t lacking. The story was a compelling read that I didn’t notice that I was reading almost to chapter 10. It was a great quick read for me. The characters were intriguing, each has their own personalities but it took me a while to connect with them nevertheless, I love the male and female lead. I kinda felt like I was reading a webtoon or something and I don’t mind it all! I love how the characters conversed well with each other. It felt normal and real. Story development works seamlessly and I don’t have any complaints about it. I like how the writer took time to develop the story and how the character’s grow. I suggest adding POV headers in the chapters. Since I got a bit confuse with the pov in some chapters. World building was decent, I could imagine the settings very well which I didn’t expect it to be that good to be honest, but hey, the writer subverted my expectations. Overall, I enjoyed this quick read and I don’t have much to say but keep writing!
This story is extremely detailed, which I love. But a small suggestion, you can try removing the exclamation mark on your book title. Because when I searched your name I could not find it. Absolutely in love😇
Added you as a review swap but honestly, this book is really awesome! I have a lot of things to learn from you since your dialogue is as smooth as butter. (also, that ML and FL encounter is thumbs-up!) I'd suggest reviewing your adjective placements since some of them didn't actually fit, but who am I to judge? We all perceive adjectives a little differently than others. Keep up the great work! Just take your time on the review swap, you can send it to me anytime. Meanwhile, I'll continue reading your book ^ ^
It's very descriptive, which I very much like. The fact that they some world building and explanation in the very first chapters, were nice, since it would be difficult to read otherwise. Okay, just wanna say this, I low-key wanna steal the male lead, yo. Give him to me 😭
Despite the fact that I didn’t read all the chapters yet, my first impression is that the plot flows very well. And it’s a book worthy to read in your past time. Anyone reading this review, definitely read it before choosing to not to read. It may surprise you more than you think. Keep up the good work author !
This is my initial review for the book and give support to the author. I usually don't like romance novels but I gave this one a try and was pleasantly surprised. keep up the good work
What's a girl to do when a hot dude likes you? I don't think it is Zhang's fault here. If a friend like Li na, using the word friend here carefully, can turn to hate just like that. Then I don't think she was a true friend. I am looking for some cool character development and spicy romance here. Maybe some faceslapping too who knows. Keep it up author!