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19 years old, Luke Ainsworth is a Gacha Addict who just got run over by a truck exactly after he got the limited character he wanted. He was later sent to the world of One Piece with the System. Well, to his weirdness, the world of One Piece is different from what he remembered...
Massive AU -_-
Remember kids don't ever do drugs unless you want Captain Buggy to throw his red nose at you.
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There are enough beautiful girls in the main story anyway, why do you keep changing the gender of the main characters?......................................................
1st chapter read only (and the only one released), but so far so good. author, what's the update schedule if there is one?..................................
I came for copper and found gold. . . I hope author not going to drop this fanfic. . . . . Bruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharactersBruh 140bcharacters
this fanfic is very interesting I hope it is not abandoned since it is very entertaining I don't know what else to write haha..................
what I say is it had potential and I see myself in the MC because I have been addict in gatcha keep up. โ_________________________________โ
To be honest I don't really have much knowledge on One Piece but so far the story is good. Writing - 5 stars I'm not good at english, but this kind of quality is easy for me to understand. I dunno what the english speaker will think about this story. Character - 5 Stars This is the best thing about this story, despite how short this story is the three characters that we know so far are good in term of personality and their relationship between each other are well written. Especially Ann and Luke, I don't know how you will make this as a harem because their relationship is one of the neutral relationship out of all the Harem fanfic. Story Development - 4 stars Not much happening right now, there are time gap between each chapter. It feel more like a slice of life series with plot. I think that is what the author want to do with her story at least for the early chapters. Updating - 5 Stars This work updated daily, each chapter was only around 1 to 2k (I think?). The author updated on different time frame but it usually 1 chapter per day. World Building - 3 Stars So far this is the weakest thing about this novel, not that the world building in this fic is suck but the world building in this story is rather lacking. Hope you will improve it. P.S: I hope you will make each chapter longer while maintaining the quality. But then again it just my selfish request, no need to think much about it. Just do what you like.
The fanfic has no clear path for the MC - By that I mean everything around the MC. From the harem - like Makino who is so much older than the others and already has a happy and contented life up to now- up to the devil fruit that gives him many powers without any effort that look like a cheap copy of Kaido - or the system that just gives the mc a one of the best weapons without having a real reason , Of course, this weapon already has a lot of power and the MC can use it to the fullest without training - Then there is this matter with children. not even 20 chapters but having a child is neither well thought out nor logical. The basic idea of โโcreating a crew with Ann/Ace is good, but everything else about it is poorly thought out.
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At first I'm only here just to support my friend Alice, but her story actually really fun to read. The story felt more like a Slice of Life Ecchi series with a story telling. Worth reading but it still depends on your taste.
This story doesn't have much chapters but it worth checking out. The Grammar is good at least for not a native English speaker like me. The characters are fun to read and the girls doesn't feel like cardboards. Hope you can post this on Scribble hub because Webnovel has a problem with PC User.
this is a 5 star worthy FF. It doesn'T have that much chapters released yet but I can say this has one of the greatest FF I have read so far. Power stone worthy as well. I dont have much power stone but I am willing to give it to this FF. I do not need spoilers or anything but please dont stop this work of art..
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked ) Seriously though, it's very good.
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i was a bit iffy about the Gender bender but don't really care anyway but what i can't take it the MC . I get that he has to grow but he is 19 years old and behaves like an absolute wimp half of the time and like someone that is mentally handicapped the other time. The type of system the MC has is also not that good of a choice if you want to go the route of character progression and growth, because most of the power comes externally. So the only thing the MC does is play, growing the list of Harem members and being weak on a physical and personal level.
The story is quite interesting, the way how the author handle the System in different approach is refreshing maybe because I don't read much fanfic beside One Piece. The flaw of this story is it rather slow pace (Despite having 13 chapters the story is still in an introduction phase) and the lack of world building.
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A quite rare One Piece fanfiction.. I love it!!! ๐๐๐๐ It's interesting to see how MC (Luke) try to be strong and finish all his quest.. I don't mind with harem, but please don't make it to many girls/women.. And please don't make any genderbender anymore.. Luffy/Lucy and Ace/Ann is enough.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author sama ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Honestly i don't usually write reviews because I find it tedious but I wanted to write this to say keep up the good work author don't drop................
love the story so far. the character progression is just slow enough to be engaging without being boring, hope to read more of this
the story is good .......,.....................................................................................................................
Dear Author, don't encourage people to do drugs because they want buggy's nose thrown at them. your helpful reader.