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In order to get to super market in time for the beef sale he ran faster than the speed of light so fast that he directly broke through space and time and came to the world of Marvel........
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Write a reviewAnyone else imagining saitama encountering the hulk while heโs fighting the abomination on one of his date with skye and mistake them for monsters so he one punched them into oblivion? Hulk: hulk strongest there is!!! Abomination: dream on!!! Saitama: (one punch) ๐๐.....
Is this supposed to be a translation? This is a Chinese fan-fic novel: ๆผซๅจ้็ๅผ็่ๅธ. 145 chapters.
I didn't like this at all. Saitama is not Saitama, I feel like his personality changed like he wouldn't mumble to himself 'gotta go fast' and from my understanding, he should have gone into the marvel world by the ancient ones portal, but he has the super reaction speed so he should be able to see it before going into it and mayber even stop himself. I also don't get why he didn't kill the bad guys, he should and would have killed them. He killed humans that turned into monsters so why wouldn't he kill bad guys that would, in my opinion worse than murder, r*pe skye.
This is rather painful to read. The quality of writing is pretty bad. I get that itโs a transition, but itโs so bad that Iโm pretty sure google could do better. The MC(Saitama) is incredibly off, and almost seems like he needs a caretaker specializing in mentally challenged patients. And everything else is only subpar at best. Nothing good actually stands out.
Reveal SpoilerThis is like a xianxia novel with its second rate insults, Tony stark sounds like an arrogant young master instead of the witty genius he is, I actually want to hurt clowns because of the way "you are a clown that went to clown school to be a clown" was thrown around... It pitiful. ๐คฎ Seriously if you want good insults go on Reddit and post "superhero for fun looking for discount steak, Roast me" then you use those insults!!!
While this is not completely bad it's not good. I hope the author take a good look at the criticism and continues to work on getting better. While story is just bad it's not a bad idea just bad grammar and poor knowledge of English not necessarily poor writing. Please continue to write and study.
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Im writing this here, because most people will most likely see it here if they click replies: Using the link; https://m.qidian.com/book/1015023789 And the google translate function that is built into the Chrome app you can read it from there with quite decent English, so far I have only read the first chapter and its quite well translated. P.S The five stars was because I couldn't be asked to properly rate them.
Overall, the story isn't very good. The plot moves to slowly and the characters from marvel (Tony Stark) don't act like their movie counterparts. The idea would be good on paper if the story actually made any sense. The author must work on their English. In the end the story is decent at best and needs lots of work. It could be better but it also could be much worse.
Wow what a mess i knew this is gonna be bad but i never thought it will be this bad,no offense but this is **** this isn't saitama inserted into the world of marvel this is just some oc that took his name and power. Im sorry if i hurt your feeling but i just had to do this.
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For now 5 star and have to wait to see if it make it past chapter 50 because most marvel fan friction don't make it past 20 Xoxoxoxo love interest in a a good chance of getting to the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I
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Story is not that bad, sentences are barely readable. A literal worst than mtl. Not recommended to read at all. And the story was dropped so no worth in trying to read.
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