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A man reborn in GOT and received the Corvinus Bloodline and the fate of the Lycan.
Reborn in Stark House.
A junction of the world and plot of Game of Thrones, with elements coming from elsewhere especially Underworld, however, the form and power of Lycan in this story will be new, new limits will be delimited.
*First focus on the original creation of the Protagonist's background, only after this fact will it return to the plot of the Series.
I'm Brazilian, my first language is Portuguese, be prepared for bad English.
(Someone read this novel? yes? write something, please, thanks).
*Para os falantes da lingua portuguesa, atualmente estou testando dois sites nos quais estou postando em português.
Os sites seriam o Wattpad.com, procurem por meu Nick se tiverem interesse.
E o outro seria o spiritfanfiction.com.
*Insect of responsibility. The base story doesn't belong to me, it's just a fan-created by a fan. The only thing I have is my original characters and my idea.
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If you like GoT then you'll wonder when anything related to it will happen as most of the story is kingdom building using werewolf transformations. The only real connection to GoT, is the location names and some family member names. The most you will read is about more and more people being turned as groups without much detail about how he actually turns them. It's not saliva like most but a ritual which doesn't get featured or mentioned much. Another part of the story is the author writing how women are sexually obsessed with him and rub their legs horny as **** at how hot he is, and other such nonsense. There was a point where the author used this and wrote a shota scene of his MC going OOC, which he fixed to become more OC when pointed out. However, the story has become like a drifting abandoned boat. Things happen but progress is next to none. The focus the author places on the story is in the wrong places to make it any good and the lycans are more of an excuse to have near mindless slave followers that he can control. Thus even if I feel the GoT setting is just being used and abused to gain initial clicks, I don't feel that this story lives up to the werewolf genre either. The only thing this story has in common with werewolves is that he can change into one. All the other things associated with them are no part of it. He spreads his race via magic rituals, is not influenced by the moon, creates lesser species of werewolves who barely change at all but become mindless followers and **** like that. In all honesty, he's more a vampire without the bloodsucking and trance stuff in how he acts. Since he is enhanced and makes thralls. That's about it. Sure he changes when he wants to but is he still a werewolf if the only thing he has in common with them is the shape he takes? Thus, I don't feel like this story is going anywhere and has only abused two genres to get clicks for what is otherwise a subpar story at best.
Please do not drop it. I really like maybe the best of GOT on this site, it has very good development of the story I like William's development and where the story is headed so far. very good.
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I really like the GOT universe and, obviously, I love fanfictions in the GoT Universe. Moreover, your plot is alright, the story development is nice, and you skipped straight to the start of the plot, which I really appreciated. But, and a major BUT, the grammar is horrible, as is the syntax. I am sorry, it’s not against you, but it’s becoming really hard to keep reading something like this.. We are literally editing mentally your story as we keep reading, just to try to understand what you are writing. So I review this as : +1 star for GOT fanfic +2 stars for story / plot -2 stars for terrible english Again it is not against you, I know you are working hard on your story, so I hope you will find an editor and it will become a great story for sure ! Have a nice day, and thank you for reading :)
This fanfiction suffers from a lack of details. Either the author is rather vague and generically summarizes important events, or he/she tries to explain them, but due to English being the author's second language, doesn't get the point across properly. The MC is likable, but seems to randomly shift goals and objectives with no apparent impetus. The whole story just feels very incoherent and inconsistent. I suppose the good aspect of this fanfiction is the high update frequency, but it seems the author is sacrificing the story quality in order to achieve this frequency.
He'll be a parent like William from the underworld movie, so I lie on the underworld wiki William was bitten by a wolf with rabies disease so he was uncontrollable, I'm curious how this story goes on. waiting for the next chapter.
Among the fundamentals of writing are form and substance, with form being the way the plot is expressed, meaning the use and mastery of, in this case, the English language, and substance being the sum of plot, setting and character development. These are a small but key fraction of the fundamentals of writing, but a story without the latter is unreadable. The former can be tolerated - everybody makes mistakes every once in a while, though to write a story you need a certain amount of proficiency with the language, which the author seems to lack. If the author ever happens to read this, please take my advice to heart: master the language, preferably to c1-c2 level and use programs like grammarly that help you fix your mistakes in the meantime; read some books and analyse the structure of their stories - how do they progress? How are the events linked together? Are they linear or do they branch out? Have an idea of what you want to write before you do, and plan at least a general outline of the world and its rules and factions. Example: in Star Wars, the Force has always had very specific uses and costs - manipulating objects up to a reasonable mass, lightning and precognition being the main things, and everything tired you out and needed training; the EU expanded on it gradually in its setting, while keeping costs and requirements in mind; the new trilogy has some kind of BS healing abilities and instant mastery of everything by the protagonist, which takes away the stakes - if you can heal people from death and suffer no consequences, than characters dieing are just another Tuesday to you, because they can be revived; if a character can insta-heal from grievous wounds, then there is no danger in them being hurt. These things break a story. If they were to take time and effort, like in the EU, they would instead be a useful and intriguing ability, instead of breaking the laws of the universe and the story itself. In your case, you somehow managed to get what is effectively a northern princess and a random unknown edgily-named Lord on a pirate ship with no consequences, without explaining how it happened. It isn't impossible, but it ALWAYS has consequences - torture, rape, murder, slavery, marooning, these are all things that happen in GoT, yet here they somehow just don't? Do the pirates not notice them? Does the 4th Hokage from Naruto just Hiraishin the two twats to the ship, has them bang and then sends them back home? How does it work? ALWAYS ask yourself "how?" and "why?". Also, the dad dies delivering some random message. Off-screen. Why does Edge-lord deliver some unknown message to the king and die? We do not know enough about him to care (he materialised on a pirate ship, banged oc's mom, then f'ed off and died) and we do not know what he delivered and why. There's so many holes in the first half of the first chapter, I could be here for hours. Just learn how to write before publishing, maybe get someone to read your stuff and fix the mistakes or give you a second opinion. Hope you take this under consideration. P.S. I've seen a couple reviews and all they say is effectively "great story bruv, keep it up!". Do they not notice these things or not care? If you notice things being wrong, even if you love the story, at least tell the author what mistakes or plot holes there are, so that they may improve. P. P. S. Also, sorry if I've ranted so much, I got triggered by some things, but I do hope you improve 😊😅 GL!
You this is actually pretty good. I wasn't expecting much at first but it blew that expectations out of the water. Chapters are pretty short but he updates pretty often so it's fine.
Muito bom!!! Autor se você tiver uma versão em pt poste também. Não sei se você escreve em pt e depois passa para o inglês. Tnks! . . . . .....................,
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I like the idea behind it. I think this story is dropped....................................................................................
I think this fanfic is just great. If you are GOT fan and have any regrets about how the show went and despite being a dragon and supernatural related show we didn't get to see much of that stuff then you should really read this novel.
Best novel I ever read! It has magic but not to overpowering that it becomes ridiculous, it has supernatural beings but reasonable in the amount because humans might get extinct and the mc is powerful and smart but not unreasonably powerful. The only thing I didn't like is how I anticipate the chapters everyday which is unreasonable because not like other novels, the author updates everyday. Hahahahaha!
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It's nice to see a GOT fanfic, and so well done, writing in English might be difficult, but I suggest you use Grammarly, it will help you a lot in correcting some syntax mistakes. Tambem sou BR, e estou curtindo sua novel, continue trabalhando forte, Abraço.
Hello there friends, first off all happy New year to you all, may all your wishes and dreams become real in this year, i wish the best to you all and secondly i wish to congratulate the author of this excellent fanfic, i found it by accidentally and i was pleasantly surprised by it, i wish best to you autor and may you write many more good stories such as this one. I am waiting for new chapters without breathing 😤😤😉
Partiu Brasil, nos Br vamos dominar esse site também muahahahahahah kkk, brincadeira a parte, estou feliz em ver que estamos tendo varias Br criando fanfic, parabéns e continue com o bom trabalho ^~^.