I like how the story goes. It is not one of those stories with cliche scenes, but there are things that this book is lacking. Grammar is one of those but overall is quite really amazing.
Well, a harem from the start to the end. Not many thrilling scene here, the mc seldom trapped in the difficulties. I would said this is an adventure to collect a harem rather than cultivation or game elements.
You can barely follow along at this point and I have no idea what is happening at all this novel his all of the cliches in one and everything is hugely forced
... punches MC in face since she is naked on top.... MC explains he saved her life. She thanks him. They end up flirting, hugging, kissing and she says "Be gentle" ... Seriou...?
I’ve read a lot of ****ty novels that sucked in more than one this but this mind I’ve only just read the seventh chapter is the most generic thing I’ve seen I mean by ch6 he’s already saving a wolf milf and it’s pub, which let’s be real here she’s nothing more the a milf in harem and hell he might just add the pub too, world background none excitant even if you try to visionize it all you’ll see is a cave with a white background with nothing around it.writing quality is way too ****ty to be acceptable for anyone to pay for it, the his/hers mix and matching that is going on in this novel is a joke just like this website
Well this Novel isnt Bad itself. Too bad that the Novel itself is so bland. Doesnt have big plotholes but has Many things that need spelled more Clearly.
Well this Whole story isnt something that i Recommend to other at most it is to Read and kill Time.
Well this is just an awful inconsistent story that doesn't have anything going for it. The fact that it's still going is baffling.
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thank you for the beautiful story which was not so long in comparison with others. success in the next job, I expect impatiently =)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))). Thank you.
A story of how a normal young man became the strongest
And how he changed the worlds
Through thick and thin, this novel has come a long way from the first woman to the innumerable
Certainly a good story indeed for you to find out
The diamond in the rough now became whole
Like a newborn phoenix, it shows it's splendour
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The story is OKAY, however, every once in a while I start thinking "this is garbage". There was a chapter that talked about how you won't be able to kill a monster if you hit the leg when it's HP is at 1. There was a whole tangent about how this was real life and whatnot...I digress.
The main thing that caught me off guard is that he has been in the first woods he landed in for five plus years. You would think he would have figured that out by now. Another aspect is when he gets his class. He was suppose to have been battered by the elements, but reading that chapter I felt the author might have well just given him the class. The first element was fire, it was meant to burn his soul and body and that somewhat portrayed. He just clenched his teeth and withstood it. Thing is, how could he. He was a regular person, before the reincarnation, spent five plus years in the woods to level (by the way only getting to about 15, which is bull...five year and only 15 when the first monster he kills gets him like 9 levels), then you are expected to feel like he's a tough dude. Didn't get that. I mean fire, water, wind, earth, metal, ect. was attacking his soul and body, and you expect me to believe he just clenched his teeth and withstood it from some inner strength? Nah.
If you had made it a point in those five year he was in the woods to toughen the MC mentally and physically...then yeah, I'll buy it...but you didn't.
And the skills that the wolf passed to him, the heal, purify and the others, I can get how that can happen. I mean the wolf is supposedly bad ass. I can get behind that. Thing is we are never really explained to of how skills get around, how they are passed, conditions, ect. It just seems like anyone can pass skills around like that if they have a technique, which I'm guessing is a no. So, I would have like to have seen more in the shape of an explanation of what skills are, how do you get them, can you get a skill outside you class, can you work towards a skill or do they just use skills books.
Also, I get the felling that there is no order...or rather no reason as to why he has done a lot of the things he's done and if there were it's not really well written out.
This novel tries to make the MC mysterious, but in the end it fails..with the whole "No Name" alias he uses in the brothel, I get that his status screen doesn't have a name for him, but that alias is just dumb.
Overall, this story tires, but fails in my opinion.
SainXer0666