Chapter comments on the chapter Break Out. of the book Ascension of the Lightning God

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the Chapter

The MC became a scaredy cat all of a sudden.. haaaaa.. please don't do that.. It makes me cringe everytime.. how many pussy MC's have I read already.. I want emotion but not a cowardly MC.. cause it'll be them controlling you.. and you have no say when that persons serious or angry.. look the MC can Ignore her when she's rambling or when she's angry.. It always works.. you can slowly build that up btw.. Thanks for the Chapter..

It went Sci-fi out of nowhere and its great However the issue if language. Clearly the previous world was Asian and the sci-fi seems more western hence the languages should be different. No mention of the spaceship team wondering about the clothes and the looks of the peoole they found and visa versa

Thx for the chap

Thanks for the chapter 😉

I wasn't impresed at the story at first but it's becoming better whit every chapter. Keep it up and thanks for the chapter.