Chapter comments on the chapter The Sea of Limbs. of the book Ascension of the Lightning God

I was doing some thinking on this novel and have come to the conclusion that it's best to try and keep this short and trying again on a new novel. Simply put the author bit off more than he could chew, couldn't pick a direction and didn't lay the foundation necessary to support his ideas. I'm no pro but even I can see this is falling apart, I'll continue reading, but more than that I'll be waiting for the next attempt. Thanks for the chapter.

Thx for the chap

Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work

poor poor thugs evrything fell apart just cause they attacked a person at the wrong time :)

thanks for the chapter. nice description of the fight

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ^^

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter