Overall a fairly engaging story with decently dynamic characters with sometimes slow but consistent growth.
As seems to be usual with stories of this genre there’s a lot of extreme “darkness” in society possibly based on the country the author descends from where evry little action or success can be met with theft, hatred, or killing back to base level.
The first 20-30 chapters need some serious editing... after that there were still some grammar errors but it became better. I've read till chapter 68 and skimmed till 99 and was very annoyed and irritated by a couple of thinks:
1. MC will get the class only in chapter 215... f*cking 215! the hole novel is about his class an he gets it after two hundred and f*cking fifteen chapters!
2. since he doesn't know wether his class is a magic, a fighting or a hybrid class he never used his stat points from all his lvl ups (on chapter 99 he was lvl 160+). from all his achievements and skills his stats were of a lvl 15-17 character... and he has absolutely no problems killing lvl 50-200 mobs by himself...
3. the whole thing about rose and the more or less forced relationship... this guy ist 16! those woman are 25 and older! what do they want with him? just wtf?!
Maybe I would try and read further but in my opinion it is not worth the premium...
so good luck dear author.
I love this book since everything is straight forward and easy to understand it really kills boredomness. At the beginning it was quiet slow but it surely paid the price and ever arose more interest in reading with new adventures and canning mc. This story is really good, thanks for the hard work. But story updates takes like forever ( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ)
I’m reading this book with weird emotions, like seeing a quite girl only to find out she is a lowkey beauty then after getting to know her, I find her somewhat annoying,I was beginning this book had me hooked from the get go it was well thought off, a little English errors here and there but other wise perfect, it was funny yet very interesting. A young 18 year old who is mature with salted fish attitude and he doesn’t like being disturbed suddenly crumbles to kiss from babe🤦🏿♂️ a lot of good books are ruined by trying to creat harems/ weird coincidental love romance
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One of worst RPG novels I have read. All the time frames, levels etc are very confusingly written by the author. (Most of the data made no sense).
The story was pretty much boring and the characters were not interesting at all.
Avoid it if there were other RPG Novels to Read.
Above review is what I fell about this Novel.
The character has no backbone, couldn't even refuse a simple request from a girl. Disappointment. I like the idea of the story, but the characters are just bad. Forced and emotionless. Also, the MC is cowardly and dense. Not being able to connect any information. It was clearly forced for the plot.
Ultimately I'm dropping the story because of the MC's lack of strong will to oppose others and terrible character development. Which resulted in a bad MC.
The story obviously starts off slow but as he progresses and builds up his foundation and starts to really unravel the hidden mysteries of the world he is in that have been stagnant for what appears to be years is all so engaging.
READ ON ANOTHER SITE. I picked this up at least 8 months after it came to this site, it has 245 chapters uploaded, and at chapter 65 it becomes privileged chapters so unless you want to spend money unreasonably read on another site.
As for the review of the book. It is not bad, but not fantastic either. Skills are not really expanded on and explained as much as I think it should. When the mc get at (or close to) level 100, he only has a few passive skills that anyone can get and a couple of class skills that are still passives but only he can learn due to the unique class. It does not really explain combat, he gets mining early on and has not used it since. He gets blacksmithing lessons from a godly skilled blacksmith and after making a couple of refined steel ingots, he makes an average sword and does not touch blacksmithing. It makes not sense that he does nothing with it when he specifically went to the smith to learn smithing.
Other than that, the world description is poorly expanded. It introduces the four races in chapter 1, but they are not important at all and no information is given about them yet (only at chapter 65 after all). Not to mention, you barely know anything about anywhere, even in the human territories.
Time is another issue that really screws with you. The author says it is something like a 1:4 time difference in the game compared to earth, but after spending 8 months in the game (plus time out of the game) he was only playing for less than a month. The numbers just do not add up.
The princess name should be Lyna Oddmind right? and what was the point of him learning how to forge or fight with a sword at this point all he does is have sex and walk around he hasnt used his status points fought anything hes kinda useless if not for powerful helpers
Actually awesome novel good work bro ,
just the only thing that's doesn't fit here , why should all the female characters & Npcs be attracted to the MC it's too immature , I hope there will be fewer sexual content , so yeah I don't mind once from time to time but don't focus on it . overall it's awesome novel
Well I read it for free till 90+ chapters and I think it deserves a 5 star, don't know why other ppl had made harsh comments on dear author but think yourself in his place before reviewing.
He's doing his best in writing chapters for us though I do not have much of coins to spare but still free passes are there to help me read it.
With best regards I hope the author continues his work enthusiastically.
The story is great at the beggining. Attractive and the concept about souls is great. Then enter the female lead who is bitchy and scheming and you find out that the male lead is gutless and cant reject his sexual attraction. Dropped it right after that