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Mark_Mads
Это бред.... ПОЛНЫЙ БРЕД!!!
Эх.. Когда автор писал этот роман ему трахали мозги философия.
В романе слишком много тупых ненужных моментов.
-Был белый холст... Спустя время холст был расписан красками мёртвого мира... Но оживить который ещё можно было. Но чья-то рука решила разукрасить мир и вкинуть его в пустоты философии.
И больше нельзя его была оживить... Но даже так разум безумца не сдался... Безумцам нет пути назад!-
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CharlotteH
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
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Group_A
Read this a few years ago and i have honestly never been the same since...this novel is unforgettable and i find myself coming back to it. If only there were more novels like this. Nicely done,very interesting....leaves you longing for more
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Glezeri
It's good but before ch 42 we already know MC is destined to struggle and fight against the world, and there is this huge plot everywhere, difficult decision, sandnes n drama, got enough of that so im out
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Kelvin_otima
One of the best novel I have ever read in my life... Thanks so much author. I hope there's another continuation of the store cause I really never wanted it to end.... Good luck out there
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Kingshadow2324
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PED_9390
This novel is too good the mc develops very well and the world so well built one of the best novel out there it should be an actual book 10/10 would recommend
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Dreamer999
The book is amazing, mc way speaking and his development is unique which gave the novel a new enjoyment and interesting. I really like this novel and it's plot development, I hope author right more books like this with different genres and story thanks and good luck.
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tabbyg123
Man oh man was this a trip... I'm not even sure where to start. It was such an incredible journey following our MC and the various side trips from his brutal beginnings to the really well wrapped up ending (that didn't drag on or end abruptly). While the start is pretty cliche to most wuxia novels, the character development, feelings, and overall story certainly were not.
From the highs to the lows, I shed quite a few tears in the many strong moments this novel had, and I often found myself stopping and introspecting about some of the incredible quotes that are dropped and how they might relate to me in real life, even re-evaluating some facets of it. Makes me really wonder more about the author with regards to the pieces of wisdom throughout, as well as question his sanity for coming up with so many creative insults (although I do wish there was a wee bit less of this, as the humor breaks some of the moments for me, but perhaps that solidifies Lino's character for us).
I think l've read around 40ish "light" novels in this genre, and this is definitely one of the few at the peak.
I really think that most of you readers out there won't regret reading this.
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PyroButt
I wish this book never had an end. free time read, free to enjoy, free to revel in, this book is a masterpiece in it's own design. a perfect read.
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NightStorm
While this is my first real review, it is for a book I believe to be the best in all of webnovel. While the first few chapters are all over the place in terms of plot, after this, it gets much better in terms of writing and story and stays on this high note all throughout the book. And while most books have the glaring problem of 10 pages of filler behind a paywall, this book has no such problem as, as plot writing this, the book is completely free, all 500+ chapters. This book is a relic of a bygone era in great webnovel writing and should at least get the respect it deserves as such. Give it a try, as I've said before, IT IS FREE! Read and enjoy!
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Shoab_Ahamed
This is probably the best novel I have read. However the only thing which is getting in the way is that the author for some reason add too much tragedy. I mean it is necessary to have tragedy in a story but beddedotaku sometimes take it too far. In the later chapter he even had to kill his own adopted mother. In some of his other stories the heroine leaves MC for another men for some stupidest reason and MC doesn't even fell sad.
However despite all this is really perhaps the best book I have read.
I just wish that in the chapters or author's new works he won't add unnessary tragedy or netorare. Wish you good luck author.
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rxg1732
I got into this after reading the plethora of amazing reviews and the high rating. It was nice at the beginning, but quickly became a drag. Persisted for about 100 chapters, and then dropped it because it just couldn't hook me anymore. The paragraphs and spacing isn't great, that makes it a bit harder to read. All the foreshadowing and Easter eggs give kinda Witcher(Netflix series) vibe but happen wayyyy to early in the story. For a 600 chapter story, foreshadowings starting around chapter 60 is too early, it makes you think of the story of as a drag. The story at times showed massive potential but it couldn't convert it into something fluid or consistent.
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EnchantedCreed
Just finished the novel over a couple of weeks and even if my reads are cut off the story and how the author writes it is very good. This was a good novel but I still want a little bit more
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MtnRbl
This is what happens when someone decides they don't want to write about a blacksmith after choosing the title. The end result is a story i have no intention of going further in
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carrots24
1st chapter got me hooked wtf 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
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DarkSky00
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gamernerd01
I've been on this app for a while now, but this is hands down one of the best novels I've ever read. The story is amazing and never gets sluggish or boring like most cultivation novels do. The characters are multidimensional and continuously changing, with the interactions between them never being forced or dull. The twists and turns are always shell-shocking and leave you dying to read the next chapter. The only thing I didn't love about this book was that I never wanted it to end, but it did. Dear author, please send this to an editor so I can get a hardback copy and have everyone I know read it.
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Laylin13
second review got pulled so this time I'm giving it a 5/5 rating instead of the 3/5 it deserves so maybe it will stay up a little longer
same review as last time
I found this story disappointing. The first ark was great and I was convince this would turn out to be one of those few 5 star novels I'm always searching for, but I was to be disappointed. In the second ark the street smart kid became a lover of poetry with a mild hero complex. I started reading this story expecting a smart MC who used his brain to plan his way out of sticky situations. Instead he runs in half cocked with little to no planning and relying on dumb luck to survive. Even still I have to give it 3.5 stars since I would read it if there was nothing else to read.
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Graymalk
I lover the world building and the consistency of the metadetails. It got a little character heavy at the end but was handled very well and course corrected.
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cshupian333
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King_Doomer
Just started the book, but so far the story has been great and has steady development one of the best books ive read in this app so far. I hope it keeps up the same way till the end
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IAmASaltedFish
The moment ella died is the moment this book list it's luster ...............,.......... Should have killed eggir instead and the mc is to emotionally unstable
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Darius_Sanguna
After Chapter 67 Allison(II) i feverishly started searching the book for the happy end for Lino and Ally, but i didn't find it. So now i'm heartbroken and absolutely furious, i want to massacre the entire fucking sect that did that to Ally and i want to s lap some sense into her because absolutely noone should erase their own memory just because it is inconveniemt for them. I fucking hate you Author! What the actual **** did you think while writing that?! Something like "hmm how can i pile even more **** onto Lino since he hasn't suffered enough yet? Ah i know let his beloved forget all about him!" Like **** you, i can take a lot of **** but i'm allergic when it comes to **** like that, first you torture them throughout their childhood , set zhem up as massively important for each other and than you won't even let them get together, even worse one of them actually forgets all about the other.
In conclusion, i've stopped reading after ch68 because i can't take it, so instead i'm going to create my very own much more satisfactory headcanon. It is honestly disappointing since i very much enjoyed the novel up to that point, but what the Author is doing with Ally and Lino is just something unforgiveable to me.
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