Reviews of The Lady of Darkness by tyuifire166 - Webnovel

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What am I reading? This is so disjoint and bizarre. Very cliche scenes, and the plot holes are mounting. Is MC super effeminate, yet macho black belt ruler of the virtual world? Is MC a man atracted to the ex best friend David? The real world and the virtual world are very poorly constructed, so it's impossible to visualize. Not much hope here yet.