Waaah author so good. I'm not good at writing reviews, but your novel is truly uniqueβ‘(Σ¦ο½Σ¦ο½‘) (for me)
Chapter one directly killed me with smile and laughter of the girl who issued the system.β§\(>o<)οΎβ§
This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
You are a really good writer and talented one keep it up author I love this book it is wonderfulllllllll πππππππππππππππππππ
Love it! The fact that there are stories in stories are fun too. The official always seems to get what she wants huh? I would love to have a system like that if I was a boy. I would get the perfect ML!
I love the story. It was well written and the plot is great.
I also liked the writing advices given by the system. I honestly wanted to give it a 5 star review when I first read it. But I later on changed my mind in the later half of the story.
Here's why:
1. Why did Su Yan's IQ keep dropping down after they got together ? (or maybe just me, just an opinion)
He was okay at first, I even find it kinda cute that he was somewhat naive or stupid. But it got irritating after they became a couple, he just turned more worse. He's also the reason why I'm just writing a review this late even though I had this way early coz I kept dropping it after reading a few chapters.
2. The system was fine but what I hate about here is she was kinda pushy and she intervened way too much. I would prefer that she gave support sometimes but should let the couple on their own.
Overall, it's a good read if I ignore Su Yan's stupidity.
The mc is too dense to the point of Great stupidity
Ca me tape sur les nerfs
The only good character is the ml
Should have made the ml a yandere to make grow the EQ of the mc
His reaction is homophobic
Overall interesting but sometimes SY was sooo super ditzy that my teeth ached. But there were some parts that maDe me laugh out loud. The ending was different for sure..
Well really love it, actually at first i think su yan personality is a little bit annoying, but i changed it. It actually so adorable, and i want a boyfriend like ah chang so awesome
Very cute! I love the interaction between the gong and the shou!
The novel was fun to really fun to read. Especially if you're having a bad day. The sweetness between the couple was help brighten up your mood.
I first thought that this is just like every system novel I've read with just a bit of a spin but, gosh, I was so wrong. The plot is unique and the characters are well written and it's so funny too. I really love books like this. It's a great find.ππ»ππ»
To be honest, i just started reading just a few days ago and I really have to read it fast but also enjoying too. I read that this will be taken down in webnovel and i have really enjoyed everything so far, especially the substories this novel has. Thank you author!
A very funny protagonist sometimes even I feel irritated by his behaviour! But the male lead really loves him a lot and does everything whole heartedly which makes me like this story!
I love itβ€ so much,that I feel like crying that it end thank you very much author hoping to hear from you very soon lovely writing system is absolutely the best book I read
It is definitely one of the better quality wise of the stories I have read on this site. A lot of the issues I have with this book is simply about the personality of the protagonist. It started of as with the MC just being extremely low on the EQ scale and turned in to him being a complete idiot. It became so bad it was not believable that the MC was capable of writing anything at all. I found this highly grating. Having said that the plot and overall flow of the novel was good. If the MC had been more believable I would have given it a much better rating.
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What a lovely story and I am really happy and glad on how the lovely story got to end and it was a great story wanna say thanks to the team please keep it up
It a great story and I really enjoyed every bit of it please kindly help update more often and more new stories are needed to be created from the whole team
Iβm stuck with this one. When I was filling out the rating stars I was like yeah itβs well written, updated on time, characters are well rounded, story line is interesting and the world is understandable with rules established. But after hitting chapter 150 I had a bit of a block and couldnβt go on. I still think itβs a great book and hope to return to it later but yeah, give it a go! Apparently not my cup of tea atm but maybe someone elseβs π
Wow, this is so interesting. I have only just started reading it but I really am anticipating what is going to happen next. So it has completely cought my attention.
Great story!!! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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