Chapter comments on the chapter Blueshift of the book The Mech Touch

Animal abuse call PETA! We need PETA, in this novel. They are totally crazy they would fit perfectly into the Story an drive Ves totally crazy. Oh man imagine that.

This was a very satisfying chapter. I very much liked the entire team involvement. It complemented the Larkenson Clan slogan, “For the Clan!” I just have one question, are these new Mechs classified as variants of the Bright Warriors allowing other Larkenson Pilots to pilot affordable copies (without Unending Alloy weapons) or are they unique custom Mech designs? My guess is the first option, Bright Warrior variants. These designs do not employ the Bright Warrior versatility of switching between the base 4 designs. Obviously the Aurora Titan and Quint are custom upgrades, yet the Quint should still have access to its other 3 masterwork configurations it was designed with.

Please indulge me as I am posting as a special request of TMT Fan, Bhadresh. <Temporary orbital arena of the LCH> Minxie and Raella Larkenson’s heavy Mech sized visual projection are positioned in the centre of the arena between two Mech hanger bays at either end of the orbital construct. Shielded bleachers and VIP lounges float about the perimeter within the expansive opaque sphere. Raella- Welcome Larkensons, Hexers and honorary guests of Sentinel Kingdom to the first LCH event. This event is specially hosted for our Patriarch and his Task Force Predator to encourage them to return to us safely. The first match is team TSV vs. team Cloud6 <cheering broadcasters> Raella- From the spin ward hanger, “Adonis Minimus”, designed by Mayer Torto-Larkenson who insists I include, “under consultant of CUSTOMER!” The LMC logo on the spin ward side of the arena parts and the medium sized golden duelling Mech, complete with flowing partial cape and impressive codpiece. Raella- From the leeward hanger, “Spiritual Mother’s”, designed by Cherie Tovar. Due to their light Mech design a special exemption permits 6 Mechs on the team instead of 5 larger melee Mechs. The LMC logo on the leeward side opens and 6 females pregnant light Mechs with female Pilots secure in their womb cockpits sprint out and establish a hexagon formation around team TSV’s lone Mech. Vincent- Raella! My manliness prevents me from striking a pregnant woman. That Mech design should be banned from the competition. Raella- The design received Matriarchal approval, request denied. Being the match in, 3… 2… 1! <zooming> <slicing><oohing><cheering><laughing> Raella- Cloud6 wins vs TSV, ladies can you please stop juggling my boyfriends pride and joy, and his cockpit pit back and forth between you, so we can salvage what is left of his Mech and begin the next matchup?

Thanks for the chapter!!

Ves: now for my entertainment of LUCKY torture 🤗

The other side of a legitimate, reasonable argument ...... MEOW< MEOWMEOW.... MEOO******W

Its time....

exp plz

I cant remember what B-Stone does to him? Dies he Vomit?? Or get diarrhea?? Why not try giving him some life energy to speed up his metabolism?

Tulsa is gonna LOVE his new mech... until he pilots the real thing as an expert. :P Still - the first impression should be excellent.

first, exp!

moaaaaaar!

yeah buddy, figured out a future type of first class knight remake down the road

Why has he not used the system?? He is in Imminent danger- and about to make changes to hos mech...shouldnt he use the sYstem to increase hIs chances of survival bY increasing the power of his mechs?

hahaha after make light mexh ,,he abuse the cat .. ves hahahah

thanks

Why do I feel Ves is forcefully giving his cat a suppository made of B Stone in a very unpleasant manner? Poor poor Lucky!

thanks for the chapter

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