Chapter comments on the chapter First blood, part 2 of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

Damm straight up canabalism

Some savage stuff right there, those screeches

Poor Rat buddy...

I’ve seen a rat fall from like 3 meters high and scuttle off like it’s nobody’s business so wth

The city walls can’t be fucking water tight, there should def be a place for a damn rat to crawl through

Poor little rats, don't bully them mc

I'm grateful he kept his asshole personality. Most authors make a set personality then change it as soon as they can. Like here it most would have made him become a king of rats or something ridiculous. Mc only cares about evolving out of his rat form so it's obvious he should kill everything he can to level up

He’s a rat but cleaning up streets by eating corpses and exterminating rats

Lol duck tales reference

Ghøst wasn't here

I got a question how big is MC?

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EXP

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I think a rat can enter and leave a city at any time. The walls are there to hold Back humans, not sneaky rats.

*sad yeet*

I often see a lot of people mess up with human-related word variations. In your case a reappearing mistake in your novel -> "peoples" should refer only to a "nation" :) one -> person many -> people

looking forward to continue reading

Does the grammar ever get better? This author has atrocious grammar, and poorly fleshed out storyline. I'm liking the premise, but it's painful to read...

Thx