Chapter comments on the chapter Planned growth of the book A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

So here's a question. The one following him is it the dark god? The one at war with the light one. Then why doesn't he help our mc with the system? It would benefit him in the long run AND help out our MC. I know its plot armor but its a good plot armor.

This chapter was really difficult to read! Please check grammar and wording again. There are waaay too much errors and stuff. The story is still good though..

Fucking skaven

weres the rat army's...;-;

his husband (his*=her husband)

FUCK LET THE NARRATOR TALK ABOUT THE HAREM PLEASE

Ghøst wasn't here

Also what's with his stutter? Does it have to do with his race?

Isn't the fact that he wants to take revenge on that b*tch of a goddess enough drive to improve? Why would he suddenly be content with so little power and without revenge? :/

Thx

+2stones

Need more chapters

Ty

I Guess Sleek Will plague all the water sources No ITS IS ALMOST GUARANTEED!

Thanks for the chapter

lol