@Biako
Wow!
Just perfectly written!
One, maybe THE best Chapter in this Novel yet.
You got everything right I want in a good Chapter.
Perspective, character, development, everything!
A lot of Research must have gone into writing it.
But it was worth it, in my opinion!
I like the real world part of the story. It's surprisingly interesting with a bunch of things weaving it together, from the mafia and arms dealer to Conquests Developers and CNN.
Thanks for the chapter as always.
Zoe is probably going to go with Dave to his reunion after this. It’s gonna be hilarious.
Also, I really am curious how the company is going to fix Alfreds screw up. Dave really got shafted there. Especially with all his money still being in the game. He hold be transferring most of that to his account as soon as he gets it back. At least a hundred million of the what? 110 million he got? That would be enough for him to do whatever he likes.
So... Dave doesn't remember when it happened?(Zoe being his girlfriend) Well, it happened when she didn't argue back after he said she was his Mrs. Ruster.
It was his doing all along! And she simply used this opportunity to tell him her answer!
Icaimas